Jul 15 2008, 02:56 PM
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![]() ![]() Gahlok-Kal Attacks! Group: Premier Outstanding BZP Citizens Posts: 3443 Joined: 28-October 05 Member No.: 36075
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Glitch in the System is still under construction. But you can still review the story here, and I'm trying my best to get it all up again.
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Aug 2 2008, 09:58 PM
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Defender of Mata Nui ![]() Group: Outstanding BZPower Citizens Posts: 2142 Joined: 30-January 05 Member No.: 29244
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I adore the rocky relationship between Tachi and Komas, but I was elated to see her finally smile at him.
Relationships are the best parts of stories and movies and everything else, and so you better not disappoint. I can't really comment on anything else, just because the end of chapter four blew everything thing else away. At least for me. -------------------- |
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Lady Kopaka Review: Glitch In The System Jul 15 2008, 02:56 PM
Sirius Black You have a talent for writing the most un-campy st... Jul 15 2008, 03:12 PM
Swert ...
*hugs*
It was worth the wait, LK. I can hone... Jul 15 2008, 03:34 PM
Omega Blademan Very interesting, I liked it... it's like what... Jul 15 2008, 05:48 PM
Tahuri Bravo,
The description was amazing, and the chara... Jul 15 2008, 06:01 PM
Avlok Mahri Wow, Just amazing. Its like your painting (or draw... Jul 15 2008, 06:17 PM
Zebrow I think this epic will turn out to be a great stor... Jul 16 2008, 07:04 PM
Lady Kopaka QUOTE(Sirius Black @ Jul 15 2008, 03:12 P... Jul 21 2008, 11:52 AM
~LN~ This is great! I don't usually read Epics ... Jul 21 2008, 01:05 PM
Populus As I've said, it's awesome. Got me interes... Jul 22 2008, 10:50 AM
'`Xenronn`' This is a great (and possibly the best) epic I... Jul 26 2008, 03:02 PM
Swert I liked #3.
You did an excellent job of showing a... Jul 28 2008, 01:24 PM
Rapi-Toa of Elements Wow, just...Wow.
From the slow and peaceful pace ... Jul 28 2008, 07:29 PM
-Black Storm- I'm liking Komas more and more as this story p... Jul 29 2008, 03:34 AM
F!GHTY™ ....
*eats lady k's brain*
An artiste.. and ... Aug 2 2008, 08:20 AM
Rapi-Toa of Elements QUOTE(Sirius Black @ Aug 2 2008, 02:39 PM... Aug 2 2008, 07:28 PM
Kothra Streamdiver I find very few epics on BZP that are actually goo... Aug 2 2008, 09:24 PM
-Black Storm- I'll agree with everything Sirius said.
And Ko... Aug 4 2008, 01:41 AM
Lady Kopaka I usually post when I'm going to show a new ch... Aug 10 2008, 08:52 PM
The Power that Is Ah, so we are given a little glimpse into why Koma... Aug 13 2008, 06:45 AM
Lady Kopaka Thanks for the comments guys. Chapter 7 is now up;... Sep 1 2008, 05:19 PM
toa Tarik of fusion I really liked this chapter. It didn't have an... Sep 1 2008, 10:28 PM
The Power that Is Nice set up with Yuuzian and Vheon. They have that... Sep 2 2008, 04:03 AM
Sirius Black Yo-ho, yo-ho,
A Pirate's Life for me.
Besides... Sep 2 2008, 05:18 PM
-Black Storm- Of all ways to end the chapter, Komas starts singi... Sep 3 2008, 12:05 AM
Vezok's friend Hehe...it's been a while since I read an epic.... Sep 3 2008, 04:39 PM
'`Xenronn`' Ep 7:
For the entire Cabin scene (with just Tahci... Sep 3 2008, 09:11 PM
Raia Svit-kona It's 'Raia stopped being too lazy/busy to ... Sep 9 2008, 09:02 PM
Lady Kopaka Wow, reviews galore, thank you everyone!
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