Review: Glitch In The System Options

[Lady Kopaka]

Glitch in the System is still under construction. But you can still review the story here, and I'm trying my best to get it all up again.

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This post has been edited by Lady Kopaka: Sep 5 2009, 02:50 PM

[Lady Kopaka]

Thanks for the comments guys. Chapter 7 is now up; we now get insight on who the group of pirates are. =)

Edit: On second thought, more people than I suspected want to eat your brain. So I'll just settle for whatever's left. After all, they called dibs.

My poor brain. ;;

I meant that he might be bleak and miserable inside, and the only thing left for him to do is laugh. Or laughing because it makes things seem more bearable.

Oh I get you now, but yeah you have a good eye about how he could be.

I wonder who the captain is and why Komas knows him. I'm reminded of the scene in Stardust when we find out that Captain Shakespeare is actually a nice chap after all.

Though I never really liked the movie Stardust, Captain Shakespeare was pretty cool! ^^

And Uchik... What an odd name. Szian, Uchik, Jiahk. They all have some sort of, uh... Well, they all have the same sort of sound to them.

Sorry about that; it’s hard to keep creating original names, so sometimes they may sound similar. >< Though I admit, there may be a reason a name or two could sound similar… so be open about that.

Kind of a real pity he's dead now, too. I would have loved to hear more of Tachi's backstory, even if it was cryptic. Ah well, just need to wait until next time.
I thought the bandits were pirates at first, sailing on a ship, not in an airship. But, either way, they're still interesting. Least we won't be reading "Arr!" five hundred times, then, right?

Well just because he is dead doesn’t mean we’ll never see him again. He’ll probably show up in flashbacks. And these are air pirates, but they don’t do the annoying ‘arr’ thing I assure you. xD