 Review: Glitch In The System |
 Jul 15 2008, 02:56 PM
Post
#1
|
|
  Gahlok-Kal Attacks!  Group: Premier Outstanding BZP Citizens Posts: 3443 Joined: 28-October 05 Member No.: 36075 
  |
Glitch in the System is still under construction. But you can still review the story here, and I'm trying my best to get it all up again.
::Link to Epic:: This post has been edited by Lady Kopaka: Sep 5 2009, 02:50 PM |
 |
 
|
 |
Replies
|
Sep 2 2008, 04:03 AM
Post
#2
|
|
 COT RPG Judge  Group: Members Posts: 13304 Joined: 18-February 06 Member No.: 39273
 |
Nice set up with Yuuzian and Vheon. They have that piratey camaraderie in spades, you did a good job with their characters.
Also a good job in strengthening Tachi and Komas's relationship. Despite her supposed indifference you can tell he's having some effect (espeially with the singing  )
-------------------- I would have a proper signature but it would BLOW. YOUR. MIND. |
|
|
|
Posts in this topic
Lady Kopaka Review: Glitch In The System Jul 15 2008, 02:56 PM
Sirius Black You have a talent for writing the most un-campy st... Jul 15 2008, 03:12 PM Swert ...
*hugs*
It was worth the wait, LK. I can hone... Jul 15 2008, 03:34 PM Omega Blademan Very interesting, I liked it... it's like what... Jul 15 2008, 05:48 PM Tahuri Bravo,
The description was amazing, and the chara... Jul 15 2008, 06:01 PM Avlok Mahri Wow, Just amazing. Its like your painting (or draw... Jul 15 2008, 06:17 PM Zebrow I think this epic will turn out to be a great stor... Jul 16 2008, 07:04 PM Lady Kopaka QUOTE(Sirius Black @ Jul 15 2008, 03:12 P... Jul 21 2008, 11:52 AM ~LN~ This is great! I don't usually read Epics ... Jul 21 2008, 01:05 PM Populus As I've said, it's awesome. Got me interes... Jul 22 2008, 10:50 AM '`Xenronn`' This is a great (and possibly the best) epic I... Jul 26 2008, 03:02 PM Swert I liked #3.
You did an excellent job of showing a... Jul 28 2008, 01:24 PM Rapi-Toa of Elements Wow, just...Wow.
From the slow and peaceful pace ... Jul 28 2008, 07:29 PM -Black Storm- I'm liking Komas more and more as this story p... Jul 29 2008, 03:34 AM F!GHTY™ ....
*eats lady k's brain*
An artiste.. and ... Aug 2 2008, 08:20 AM Rapi-Toa of Elements QUOTE(Sirius Black @ Aug 2 2008, 02:39 PM... Aug 2 2008, 07:28 PM Kothra Streamdiver I find very few epics on BZP that are actually goo... Aug 2 2008, 09:24 PM Sirius Black I adore the rocky relationship between Tachi and K... Aug 2 2008, 09:58 PM -Black Storm- I'll agree with everything Sirius said.
And Ko... Aug 4 2008, 01:41 AM Lady Kopaka I usually post when I'm going to show a new ch... Aug 10 2008, 08:52 PM The Power that Is Ah, so we are given a little glimpse into why Koma... Aug 13 2008, 06:45 AM Lady Kopaka Thanks for the comments guys. Chapter 7 is now up;... Sep 1 2008, 05:19 PM toa Tarik of fusion I really liked this chapter. It didn't have an... Sep 1 2008, 10:28 PM Sirius Black Yo-ho, yo-ho,
A Pirate's Life for me.
Besides... Sep 2 2008, 05:18 PM -Black Storm- Of all ways to end the chapter, Komas starts singi... Sep 3 2008, 12:05 AM Vezok's friend Hehe...it's been a while since I read an epic.... Sep 3 2008, 04:39 PM '`Xenronn`' Ep 7:
For the entire Cabin scene (with just Tahci... Sep 3 2008, 09:11 PM Raia Svit-kona It's 'Raia stopped being too lazy/busy to ... Sep 9 2008, 09:02 PM
Lady Kopaka Wow, reviews galore, thank you everyone!
Now ... Sep 11 2008, 08:29 PM |
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members:
| Lo-Fi Version | Time is now: 19th June 2013 - 04:26 AM |