Review: Glitch In The System Options

[Lady Kopaka]

Glitch in the System is still under construction. But you can still review the story here, and I'm trying my best to get it all up again.

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This post has been edited by Lady Kopaka: Sep 5 2009, 02:50 PM

[Raia- Warrior of...]

It's 'Raia stopped being too lazy/busy to review' time!=D

“She’s rather… atypical, is she not?”
.....Komas grinned, leaning back in his seat as he looked at Tachi.
.....“No captain, more along the lines of… appealing.”

Daaaaw.=3 I'm still squeeing over those lines; is way too adorable. Bwah. I love Komas.<3 Goshdarnit, get together with him already, Tachi!

I'm fond of Vheon, though he doesn't seem the pirate-y type. A smidgen of background on him would be nice. He's way too...whatchacallit...well let's just say he's too formal and composed to be a normal pirate. And gracious, his vocabulary...

What? No arrr's?! *Pouts*

Tachi's emotions and all are down-pat, the pirate crew adds a nice new element to the story...yadda yadda...a few grammar errors, but nothing that really bothered me all that much. So yeah, thumbs up and all that, yo ho. Get another chapter up before the weekend, and I'll be a happy chickadee. If not, well, I'll just pout a bit.x3

I'd go back and review the other chapters, but I don't have that kind of time...rest assured that they are made of win. Glitch is on my list of favorite BZP writings, up there with Dirty Window and all that jazz.^^

-Raia-