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post Aug 7 2008, 01:45 PM
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here is another one of my moc's it took me a good while to build him because he's new concept i had. and also hes a matoran....anyways to the pics!
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post Aug 7 2008, 01:52 PM
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That's nice, but the back is a little wierd.
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post Aug 7 2008, 01:54 PM
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the back is suposed to be were h puts the other part of his claw when hes using his sword and shield


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Looks great, allowing for a number of poses, but I would suggest only two things.

1) Though the arms are great, along with the body, I think that you should make them a little bit longer, to allow for better posebility and to make the whole more proportional.

2) By adding some armor to the various parts of the body, it would look alot better.

Also, i love your weapons, definitely cool looking.

I'll give it a 8.5/10, since there are real no problems with it.

Keep up the good work.

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post Aug 7 2008, 02:25 PM
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I absolutely love it. But the only bad part is that the sword is too long, and the inika armor on his back looks wierd.

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post Aug 7 2008, 02:42 PM
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wow thanks guys for the coments and ill make a smaller sword.


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post Aug 7 2008, 03:01 PM
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Well, someone has takanuva tongue.gif . anyway, its really good, just get rid of the inika armor on the back.

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post Aug 7 2008, 03:32 PM
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what do you people have against inika armor tongue.gif any how ill get rid of them


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No!! The big sword rocks on such a little guy!

I like him! The Inika armor does look strange, because it's at weird angles and looks like he's supposed to have four arms. I'd get rid of the Onua shield, replace it with the claw (but without the Inika armor smile.gif), and wham, he's great!

His blocky chest is awesome. He has no armor pieces but he doesn't need them! Cool!
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post Aug 7 2008, 05:27 PM
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oh ok thanks i acualy just made the inika armored claw a three bladed thing cant pronounce the name lol


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