Reviewing For "the Balance Reborn", Terra Nui Talkback III Options

[Zorrakh]

Ah, here we go. I skipped over one of the chapters yesterday.

They were very well done, the discriptions are spot-on, however I did notice that when you are discribing the Quntaino stalking away, there were only five verbs instead of six. Was that intentional?

Also, I pictured the Toa Terra traversing the river at night, and I believe that you did state that. It gave me an excellent picture of what was happening, so good job on that.

I will wait for the next events to unfold.