My Moc For Bbc 55, Dimensioneer Options

[Christo1096-TheI...]

My new MOC, for BBC Contest 55, Dimensioneer


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C&C please

Update 1 : Yes! Hot Topic! Thanks all!

Update 2 : Limbs Preview And Pose (Click the picture for view the large image)



Update 3 : Wallpaper (Click the picture for view the large image)



Update 4 :

Fact About These MOC

1. Using 8 technic pin-axle parts
2. 3 Hours for build it
3. Using toa metru body parts for the arms
4. No shooting function


Update 5 : Banner



Update 6 : Stats
1. Weapons : Arm Blades
2. Element : Earth
3. Ability : Mind Control , Self Defense
4. Mask : Ignika

This post has been edited by Christo1096-TheIceBreaker: Sep 21 2009, 04:10 PM

[Blaze-Wind Maste...]

Looks pretty good. I love the color scheme and the custom everything. The Ignika seems a bit out of place though. 10/10.

[Christo1096-TheI...]

Looks pretty good. I love the color scheme and the custom everything. The Ignika seems a bit out of place though. 10/10.

thanks, I use Ignika because this mask make the MOC cool, and it's a big mask

[Joseph124]

Good lord man, i thought Tufi was a girl. That thing looks like it should be the Noob Smasher XV-1000 (cookie to whover gets the joke). Its a pretty good moc, but it seems more like B6 or Dimensioneer.

[Zakann The Hunch...]

Great MoC, but I think Black Six would've made a bit more sense for this monstrosity(and I mean monstrosity in a good way).

I really like all the Stronius pieces. Spikes=POWER.

Zakann

[Christo1096-TheI...]

Thanks I will change the entry name (If it possible)

[~Saber Masquerad...]

Good lord man, i thought Tufi was a girl. That thing looks like it should be the Noob Smasher XV-1000 (cookie to whover gets the joke). Its a pretty good moc, but it seems more like B6 or Dimensioneer.

Agreed. Tufi CAN'T be that buff.

Seriously, as i said before on another forum, this would be better as Dimensioneer, as he is a site founder. He deserves a big MOC.

[Christo1096-TheI...]

Good lord man, i thought Tufi was a girl. That thing looks like it should be the Noob Smasher XV-1000 (cookie to whover gets the joke). Its a pretty good moc, but it seems more like B6 or Dimensioneer.

Agreed. Tufi CAN'T be that buff.

Seriously, as i said before on another forum, this would be better as Dimensioneer, as he is a site founder. He deserves a big MOC.

Yes, if its possible for change the name

I rename it , dimensioneer looks good . thanks for the critics and comments

update : With new picture

[Christo1096-TheI...]

change the name now : dimensioneer
C&C please

This post has been edited by christo1096: Sep 4 2009, 03:44 PM

[Jeordeon]

Wow, odd proportions. But this is an overall awesome MOC. Great job. Ignika + red eyes = really cool! =)

[Christo1096-TheI...]

Wow, odd proportions. But this is an overall awesome MOC. Great job. Ignika + red eyes = really cool! =)

thanks, but where is the odd proportions like what do you say?

update : comment on MOCPages

I think you have a good chance of winning. Good use of Stronius' armour too.

This post has been edited by christo1096: Sep 4 2009, 04:15 PM

[Christo1096-TheI...]

How did you get hold of an Ignika in 2006?? That wasn't released until 2008....

just my camera error, the date. but I got the ignika (only mask) from my friend at 2009

[ironman197]

That's pretty cool, although the body right below the head is a bit odd.

[Phyoohrii]

Solid MOC! I'm not a great fan of the Onua claw shoulders, I'm sure it would be fine without those. Great use of black and grey from many different sets, such as those from Stronius that work extremely well. If possible I would have changed the Hau's to black ones (if you have any) and possibly make the lower arms shorter to be better proportioned. Anyway, the design is impressive and colour scheme works well.

[Christo1096-TheI...]

Solid MOC! I'm not a great fan of the Onua claw shoulders, I'm sure it would be fine without those. Great use of black and grey from many different sets, such as those from Stronius that work extremely well. If possible I would have changed the Hau's to black ones (if you have any) and possibly make the lower arms shorter to be better proportioned. Anyway, the design is impressive and colour scheme works well.

I don't have the black hau, so I use the silver one. Yeah, the arms, but I want to use the toa metru body for this, so It's look long

That's pretty cool, although the body right below the head is a bit odd.

thanks, I use Ignika for it, because It's look suitable for the body. but, thanks for the critics and comments!

[Enrys-Red Lanter...]

Long arms are the only flaw for this MOC.

[Christo1096-TheI...]

Long arms are the only flaw for this MOC.

yes, the long arms, I look like an ape , but thanks for your comments

[zebhra]

Amazing! Very nice design, good color scheme, and I love the Hau mask, good job! I will vote for you! You're the EPIC Winner!

[Tkavy62]

Lol when I first clicked this it was Tufi, now it's Dimensioneer... don't confuse me . Awesome though!

[Christo1096-TheI...]

Lol when I first clicked this it was Tufi, now it's Dimensioneer... don't confuse me . Awesome though!

yes, now Dimensioneer, not Tufi again , don't be confuse , thanks!

This post has been edited by christo1096: Sep 5 2009, 10:13 PM

[Keizah Hagah]

Interesting...though maybe not in a positive way. The neck seems a bit too high, and the arms are a little too long, and the wingly...things are distracting. On a positive note, the arm-blades fit the arms well, if only they had been on a bigger moc. I don't think I can vote for this one, honestly.

This post has been edited by Keizah Hagah: Sep 5 2009, 10:49 PM

[Christo1096-TheI...]

that looks awsome!!! 10/10

Thanks for it

Amazing! Very nice design, good color scheme, and I love the Hau mask, good job! I will vote for you! You're the EPIC Winner!

Thanks

[color=green]Interesting...though maybe not in a positive way. The neck seems a bit too high, and the arms are a little too long, and the wingly...things are distracting. On a positive note, the arm-blades fit the arms well, if only they had been on a bigger moc. I don't think I can vote for this one, honestly. [color]

I think the neck is not be a problem for me. yes I like the arm-blades. vote wisely.
Thanks for your comments and critics.

Hot Topic now, Thanks all!

This post has been edited by christo1096: Sep 5 2009, 10:58 PM

[55555]

Torso: The torso is somewhat too small in comparison to the limbs. Also, the back looks pretty rough, maybe you could put a Piraka foot on it or something. The silver Hau's are sort of an interesting tough, but would work better on a smaller MOC.

Arms & Hands: The upper arm is pretty crazy, and doesn't look very solid. It would be better if you had filled some of the gaps. The lower arm is better, much more solid, and the blade isn't bad either, though a little dinky. The hand is somewhat uncreative, like Axonn's hand, but still works pretty good for this MOC. Do they fall off a lot? Those Metru heads are usually pretty loose.

Legs & Feet: The legs may be the best part of this MOC. They don't have very many gaps, and are of a pretty uniform size. Except for the odd Piraka foot on the calf, try something smaller there. I also really like the tendons on the back, these must really help his stability. The feet are pretty good in the front, but the back, heel part, is very skeletal and needs to be filled out. I've noticed that you seem to ignore the back on much of this MOC, except for the legs.

Head & Neck: Your choice of mask is very interesting. The Ignika works okay, but one of your silver Haus might have worked better. Did you try the Silver Hau? The neck is to long though, a MOC like this should barely have a neck, and this guy has a significant one. I think your overall MOC could be much improved by lowering the head a couple notches.

Colors: Your colors are quite scattered, and there's quite a bit of variation. Silver, dark gray, and whatever color those old Haus are, mixed with the red and blue pegs makes your MOC look less professional and less impressive. If you don't have any other color pegs but blue, I suggest you buy some gray or black ones.

Good luck in the contest.

55555

[Christo1096-TheI...]

thanks 55555 , the haus are metallic gray, I think. and the pins, I don't have the gray one. the hands, I'm make it like the axxon's hands, but not the axxon hands , because I like the fingers . but thanks for it!

[raver]

body design and legs are really good, the arms seem proportionally big compare to the rest, so do the fingers. Love the feet design very original

if only they made silver Olmaks -sigh-

[Christo1096-TheI...]

Thanks raver and Kered of the Jungle. And I look there are some similarity between optimus prime and this MOC. The arm-blades, the feet, and the haus mask as the replacement of the optimus chest , just my opinion...

[zebhra]

can you take the photo of it's legs?

[Christo1096-TheI...]

can you take the photo of it's legs?

this photo

[zebhra]

thanks for the close up photo!

[DXD]

The torso doesn't seem to measure up to the size of the arms and legs, but those components are really well done regardless. I'm especially fond of the chest design with the two Haus which appears to be mimicking Axonn's original design somewhat.

[Christo1096-TheI...]

The torso doesn't seem to measure up to the size of the arms and legs, but those components are really well done regardless. I'm especially fond of the chest design with the two Haus which appears to be mimicking Axonn's original design somewhat.

thanks, but I'm not use the axxon's design for it, I think, It can be look cool with the haus on the chest as armor

[Christo1096-TheI...]

hey, someone delete the 2 or 3 last post. it's error or not?

[Tufi Piyufi]

hey, someone delete the 2 or 3 last post. it's error or not?

No, it wasn't. Those posts were all spam, so they were removed. Double-posting just to ask 'where'd the posts go' doesn't fit well with the rules, either. Please read the BBC Forum Rules and Guidelines before posting again.

[Christo1096-TheI...]

hey, someone delete the 2 or 3 last post. it's error or not?

No, it wasn't. Those posts were all spam, so they were removed. Double-posting just to ask 'where'd the posts go' doesn't fit well with the rules, either. Please read the BBC Forum Rules and Guidelines before posting again.

ok, thanks for it, i think it's an error, but not now, thanks!

[zebhra]

review from me

1.MOC name - good choice for the name of this MOC, dimensioneer lokks good for this MOC. 9/10
2.head - nice choice , the ignika is suitable for this MOC. 8/10
3.body - nice body build, creative , using haus for the chest armor, and use the stronius armor. 9/10
4.limbs - I like this part, the limbs look strong, the arms are great, you using the stronius armor and the toa metru body for this! and the legs, nice , its like titan mata nui's legs, but I think you're creative so you not use titan mata nui instruction for build this part. 10/10
5.weapon - yeah, I think its nice, small arm blades, its like optimus prime. 7/10

overall - creative design, its look like the dark side of the ignika, and nice design for the limbs. 9/10

I hope this MOC win in the contest, and I will vote for you, so keep MOCing!

[Christo1096-TheI...]

thanks for the review zebh, I'm agrre with your opinion, It's look like optimus prime , I'm use small arm blade because I think Dimensioneer can use the mind power to destroy the spammer , so the arm blade is the melee weapon.

[Lhikan636 Toa of...]

the only flaw i see are the super massive arms just a little long for my taste onther than that its amazing

[Arkatox]

The special effects you used for the wallpapers made them look amazing. This my possibly be my vote.

[Christo1096-TheI...]

@ Lhikan636 Toa of Penguins
yeah, supper massive arms, because I use toa metru torso for its arms

@ Arkatox
special effect for the wallpaper, for the entry pic no, it's the real wall . thanks

[Red Toad]

Looks pretty good. I love the color scheme and the custom everything. The Ignika seems a bit out of place though. 10/10.

indeed,i would like it better if it would have a hau of any color(best grey like on the chest) that would totally fit wit the chest,10/10. good work,oh and to everyone:click the mata nui sword link in my sig.