Seven Heroes, One Destiny, Happy Birthday, GaliGee!!!!! Options

[Israeli Toa]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, GALIGEE! This story's for you!
If you haven't read GaliGee's stories yet, you might understand the story more by doing so. Hope you all like it!
Enjoy!

SEVEN HEROES, ONE DESTINY


GaliGee, still half-asleep, heard a voice, “GaliGee? Are you all right?” She opened up her eyes to look up into a big black face. “Onua? Is-is that you?” she stammered. “Yes,” Onua Nuva said, smiling, “I know you probably don’t know what’s going on, but before I tell you, I just want to say-”
“HAPPY BIRTHDAY!” yelled all the Toa Nuva in unison. “Why, why thank you.” GaliGee said, with a confused look. “But I still don’t understand. Is this a dream?” She sat up and saw all the other Toa Nuva standing around her. In the background was the remnants of the collapsed Kaukau monument, and to her right was the village of Ga-Koro, gently floating on the water. “I’m-I’m on Mata-Nui?” GaliGee said, her voice rising excitedly. “Yes,” said the Toa Nuva of Water. “It’s your birthday present. We really get a kick out of sharing all our stories and thoughts with you, even if you do embarrass us with them. So we thought we’d give you something in return.”
“But THIS? How can I be on Mata-Nui? Isn’t Kopaka supposed to be falling right now, and you’re all supposed to be separated?”
“Technically, yes,” said Gali, smiling, “But we, specifically Onua, contacted the bigwigs at Lego and asked them if we could do this. At first they wouldn’t hear of it, but-”
“We told ‘em we’d go on strike,” said Lewa Nuva, grinning. “Then they HAD to let you come.”
“Yes,” Gali said, frowning at Lewa, “That’s what happened. So then Onua went to your house and brought you back here.”
“That’s incredible! I can’t believe it!”
“So,” said the Toa Nuva of Fire, “Here’s the plan. You get to do something with each of us, at each Wahi. You’ll get to swim with Gali, fly with Lewa, skate with Kopaka, rollerblade with Onua, surf with me, and I guess, run through walls with Pohatu.”
“Yep!” said Pohatu Nuva playfully. “Don’t worry. I won’t let you get stuck!”
“But do you want to do something different, GaliGee?” Gali asked. “It IS your birthday. You can do anything you want.” GaliGee, with watery eyes, said, “I can’t believe you guys. You’re all so sweet! Of course I’d like to do all those things with you! Could I meet all the Turaga and Tohunga, too?”
“Definitely,” said Kopaka Nuva, “I told all my villagers to prepare for your arrival. I was sure you’d want to see them.”
“You know me too well,” said GaliGee with a smile. “So, what’s first?”
“Well,” said Tahu thoughtfully, “We thought you could have some fun with Gali first, while the rest of us go to our villages to make sure everything’s ready.”
“But,” GaliGee said worriedly, “Then you’ll be separated again. What if something happens?” Tahu laughed. “What could happen? We’re in between comics and I PMed Greg F to make sure to make it nice and safe for your visit. And besides, we’re supposed to be separated, anyway.”
“You’re a member of BZP?” GaliGee asked.
“Oh, sure,” Tahu said, “We all are.”
“Well, then, what are your user names?” Tahu laughed again. “Like I’d tell you! I’m sure you’ll tell everybody the whole story, and then my inbox would get so full, I’d have to get a second account!” Gali rolled her eyes. “Right, Tahu. Well, anyway, let’s get moving. We only have one day!”
“Okay, then.” Over the roar of his rollerblades, Onua yelled, “I’ll see you in Onu-Koro, GaliGee!” He sped off in cloud of dust. With him, after a sly wink, went Pohatu. Kopaka nodded to Gali and GaliGee and started jogging south. Lewa soared up into the sky, wiggled his katana wings, and flew south.

“Be careful, Gali,” said Tahu seriously, “I know nothing’s supposed to happen, but you never know. I’ll see you in a couple of hours. Have fun, GaliGee!” He flipped his swords to his feet, and jumped out into the water, surfing toward Ta-Koro.

“So, GaliGee,” Gali said with a smile, “What do you want to do first: Go for a swim, or meet all the Ga-Matoran?”
“Let’s go for a swim first! I just can’t wait to try out my flippers!”
“Okay, follow me!” Gali switched her axes to her feet, and watched GaliGee, as she, after a moment of hesitation, figured out how to put her axes on her feet, and she then, following Gali, dove into the water. “Gali, this feels great! I can talk with no problem, too. The Kaukau is one cool Kanohi!”
“Don’t I know it,” said Gali, “Follow me and I’ll show you all the coolest things in Ga-Koro!”

GaliGee followed Gali Nuva’s lead, and gradually learned how to use her flippers combined with her propellors to zoom through the water. A school of Ruka swam past, some only a couple of bio away from GaliGee. Off to the right were huge, kelp-like plants rising almost to the surface of the water, and farther still, she could see the outline of the huts of Ga-Koro resting on the green pads. Gali pointed to her left, and GaliGee saw a huge Tarakava swimming past. “Don’t worry, GaliGee, it’s tamed!”
“Hey, Gali, I’ve always wondered. How does Ga-Koro stay in the same place, without floating away?”
“Oh, they’re loosely attached to plants, so they float a little, but not too far. But all one has to do is sever the plants and the pads will be free. That’s a problem we had with the Tarakava. When they were controlled by Makuta, they would bite through them, and Ga-Koro would float apart.” GaliGee nodded. “Interesting. Hey, there aren’t any more Gahlok around, are there?”
“Well, maybe, but they’ll be working for us, so we don’t have to worry. We could take care of them anyway.” Swimming further south, GaliGee begin to feel warmer. “GaliGee, we should probably start turning back, now. We don’t want to come too close to Ta-Wahi.” They turned around and headed back north. “Hey, Gali,” GaliGee said, “Want to race?”
“Sure, you’re on!” Together, they zoomed off. At first they were even, but then Gali began to pull ahead. GaliGee tried to catch up, but to no avail. Finally, with Gali at least ten bio ahead, they reached Ga-Koro. “Wow,” said, GaliGee, trying to catch her breath. “You are fast!”
“Well, I am at least a foot taller than you, so I should be, said Gali, swimming toward the gently sloping beach. “Besides, this is your first time. You really did very well.” They climbed out of the water to see a Ga-Matoran with a blue Kaukau. “Gali!” she said, panting. “I’ve been looking for you! Onua Nuva came to Ga-Koro and needs to see you right away!” With a concerned look in her eyes, Gali said, “He’s here? Okay, thanks, Hahli. Follow me, GaliGee.” They walked swiftly along the shore, and then dove in the water and swam to the first pad. Swinging themselves on, they walked through the gate, and came to the main part of the floating village. GaliGee, looking around in awe, was the first one to see Onua Nuva. “Gali! He’s over there, next to - Nokama!” At that moment, Onua spotted them and strode over. “Gali, I have urgent news. Krana have suddenly appeared in all the Bohrok. They’ve taken off and are presumbably under the control...of something. Also, Rahi have been spotted...with infected Kanohi. I have no idea what’s going on, and neither does Whenua, or Turaga Nokama. “Yes,” the Turaga of Ga-Koro said, “This was not foretold in any prophecies. An emergency Turaga council meeting has been called. We’re to meet in Po-Koro. Oh, nice to meet you, GaliGee. Sorry for this interruption.”
“Wait a minute,” Gali said, “Rahi AND Bohrok? With Krana? Where?”
“I don’t know,” said Onua gravely, “I thought it was better to warn the rest of the Toa. Pohatu wasn’t at Po-Koro and Turaga Onewa didn’t know where he was.” I think we should probably split up to warn the rest of the Toa. I’ll tell Kopaka and I’ll try to find Pohatu. You can try to find Tahu and Lewa and warn them. Meet us in Po-Koro. GaliGee, would you like to come with me?”
“Well, you know I’d love to, Onua! But are you sure I wouldn’t be in the way?”
“Of course you wouldn’t! I could use your help, GaliGee.”
“Okay, I’ll go with you. Is that okay with you, Gali?”
“Of course!” said Gali. “Just be careful. I’ll meet you in Po-Koro.” GaliGee followed Onua Nuva through Ga-Koro, and then Onua jumped in the water, surfacing close to the shore. GaliGee dove in and climbed up on the beach. “GaliGee, hop on my shoulders. We’ll get there faster.” GaliGee, with a smile on her face, said, “Let’s roll!” She jumped up on Onua’s broad shoulders, Onua revved up his rollerblades, and they were off. With the wind in her face, GaliGee let out a shout of delight, “WHHOOOOOOO-HOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Onua, this feels just like our road trip together! I love it!” Onua smiled and said, “I just wish it were under more pleasant circumstances.” In what seemed like no time, they reached Po-Koro. Lounging on one of the newly rebuilt statues was the Toa Nuva of stone. “There you are! At last! Where were you, Onua? I stopped by Onu-Koro, and Whenua said you came here, but you weren’t here!”
“Whoa, slow down, Pohatu,” said Onua, chuckling. “I must have just missed you. I went to get Gali. She’s going to get Tahu and Lewa and bring them here.”
“Oh. I already saw Kopaka, and he’s going to get Lewa and tell him to come here.”
“Oh, well. Guess we have to wait here, then.”
“Yep,” said Pohatu light-heartedly. “Hey, GaliGee, while we wait, do you want to meet Turaga Onewa, and Huki, and Hafu, and all the other Po-Matorans?”
“I’d love to!” said GaliGee delightedly.
“Uh-oh,” Onua mumbled under his breath. Louder, he said, “Um, Pohatu, GaliGee, I think there’s something you should see.” They both turned their heads to see a cloud of dust on the road ahead. As it came closer, they could see indvidual shapes and forms. “What the heck?” Pohatu said. GaliGee, squinting ahead, said, “Look...at least five or six Bohrok, probably Kohrak, and I see Muaka! And a few Nui-Jaga, too. And look up there! At least three Nui-Rama!” Onua cleared his throat. “GaliGee, will you help us?”
“You bet, Onua. What do you want me to do?”
“Here’s the plan. I’ll take the Nui-Rama and Pohatu can take the Kohrak. I’ll help you GaliGee, with Muaka and the Nui-Jaga. We have to stop them from getting to Po-Koro.” Because that, apparently, was what the mix of Rahi and Bohrok were planning to do. Onua scooped up a big mass of dried up dirt and threw it toward the Nui-Rama. Two of them were hit, and fell to the ground below. The other one swooped down toward GaliGee, but Onua jumped up and hit it away. “Spread out! Pohatu, you got the left flank. Get those Kohrak. GaliGee, help me to get Muaka and the Nui-Jaga. Take the center, and I’ll try to take out the Nui-Jaga and attack the Muaka from the back.

GaliGee slowly advanced toward the Muaka. Muaka rose up and roared. GaliGee took the opportunity and moved under it, slashing at it, with her axes. She flipped it over on its back. Feeling relieved, she turned and called out to Onua, “Need any help with the Jaga?” On her left, she heard a shout. “GaliGee! LOOK OUT!” She turned to see Muaka falling on top of her. With all her strength, she jumped away from it, and then turned, cautiously facing it. Looking at her axes curiously, she lifted them in the air, just as the Muaka was charging at her. Water churned from her axes, hitting Muaka and driving him, for more than 20 bios. GaliGee ran after it, and when she reached it, she gently took the infected masks off. “Poor girl.” She turned back to survey the situation. Onua was surrounded by three downed Nui-Jaga, still battling one. Pohatu was standing amidst a mix of fallen Kohrak and heavy rocks. She raced back to the battle scene. By the time she got there, Onua had beaten the last Nui-Jaga. “Hey, GaliGee, great job with Muaka,” Pohatu said cheerfully. Onua walked up, looking tired. “Sorry, GaliGee, I made a mistake with those Jaga. I should have just used an earthquake, but I thought I could beat them in hand to hand combat. I haven’t fought them in a while and was a little rusty. But guess you didn’t need my help,” he finished, smiling at GaliGee. “She almost did,” said Pohatu seriously. “GaliGee, you have to watch it next time. Never turn your back on a foe until you’re sure it’s done for.”
“Thanks, Pohatu. I’ll remember that. But anyway, what do we do now? Doesn’t look like any of the other Toa Nuva are here yet.”
“Well,” said Onua, “We should probably wait a little longer at least.”
“Yeah, GaliGee said, “But I have an idea. Why don’t I go to Ga-Koro, and see if anyone needs my help there. Then I’ll come right back here. When I’m back, one of you can go to Ko-Koro and see what’s up there.”
“That’s a good idea!”
“Could be,” Onua said, “But promise me you’ll be careful.”
“Oh, I will. I’ll be back in no time!” With those words, she turned and jogged to the shore, where she jumped in the water and started to swim. Ignoring the beautiful underwater scenery, she swiftly swam until she was only a few bio away from Ga-Koro. She jumped out of the water, and onto a pad. Standing before her was Gali. “Oh, Gali, thank goodness you’re safe!”
“No, GaliGee, thank Makuta.” Gali laughed harshly. GaliGee looked up in horror to see Gali Nuva wearing an infected Kaukau. “Oh, no, NO!” Gali, laughing evilly, sent water from her axes, hitting GaliGee in the chest and sending her flying to a nearbye pad. “Say your prayers, GaliGee! To Makuta!” GaliGee slowly stood up, only to feel the pad underneath her slowly rising, and then, all of a sudden, it shot up, far above Ga-Koro. GaliGee caught her balance and looked down to see a column of swirling water supporting the pad she was on. Below, stood Gali Nuva, laughing and cursing at GaliGee. GaliGee felt the pad move again...down. But a flash of insight came to her, and using the pad as a surfboard, she controlled the column of water.
“That’s nothing, GaliGee!” All of a sudden her pad flipped, but she didn’t need it anymore. She rode the now churning wall of water close to the infected Gali Nuva. “So,” said Gali, “You can control water. Well, so can I.” The wall of water started moving backwards, but with all her will, GaliGee moved it forward again. “NO!” shrieked Gali, “Makuta’s will WILL be done! AHHHHH! OUT OF MY MIND, BEAST!” Before reaching the pad Gali Nuva was on, GaliGee turned the water wall sideways, and slipped past Gali Nuva’s outstretched axes. Flipping off the water, she landed behind Gali Nuva. Gali Nuva turned and started walking murderously at GaliGee. GaliGee did a back flip, and from a high vantage point saw the wall of water sweep Gali Nuva up. Gali Nuva tried to control it, but to no effect. On her way down, GaliGee passed Gali Nuva...and flipped her head off.

GaliGee landed on the shore exhausted. In front of her she saw something run up to her. Tahu Nuva. “Gali!” Tahu swept GaliGee up in his strong arms. “Are you okay? I’ve been so worried! I came here and Nokama said you were at Ta-Koro, and I went back and you weren’t there. But what happened to you? You’re look like you’ve been in a fight and you’re...shrunk!” In a muffled voice, GaliGee replied, “I’m not shrunk. I’m GaliGee.” Tahu dropped her abruptly. “Oh. Sorry. He pulled her off the ground. “You do look tired, though. Where’s Gali?”
“Umm...in the water.”
“Can you go tell her to come out.”
“Well,” said GaliGee evasively. “I sort of can’t. She was infected. Her head is off her body.”
“WHAT? Well, get her, then!” Tahu roared. Meekly, GaliGee went back in the water. Finally, she found Gali’s head. She pried the infected Kanohi off and then put the head on the body. “Hmmm...GaliGee! Where am I?”
“In the water,” GaliGee replied gently. “You were infected, but you’re okay now. Tahu’s waiting for you.”
“Oh, no, no. Now I remember. I’m so sorry, GaliGee. I tried to stop myself. Thanks, GaliGee. I’m sure it must have been hard for you, fighting me.”
“Yes, it was, but I just remembered that Makuta was the real one controlling you.”
“Makuta...how is he back?”
“I don’t know, Gali, but we better get back. If we don’t, Tahu will be down here, looking for you.”
“True,” Gali said, laughing. They swam back up, where Tahu was just about ready to dive in. “Gali!” He grabbed her and hugged her like he’d never let her go. Finally, he gently set her down and said, “What are we waiting for? Let’s go to Po-Koro!”

The three of them jogged along the coast until GaliGee felt somthing pick her up from behind. “HEY, GALIGEE!” Lewa Nuva shouted over the rush of the wind. “I thought you could use a break!”
“Where’s Kopaka?” GaliGee shouted back. “He’s down there, with Tahu and Gali, you know, making sure Tahu doesn’t take advantage of being alone with Gali.” Lewa turned his head and grinned at GaliGee. “I wish this day could’ve been more like we’d planned, but it seems like we have something major going on. Kopaka met me at Le-Koro, and we went up to Ta-Koro, just to find out that Tahu had left for the second time. Finally, we saw you in the distance, but then you started running! At last, we caught up with you. Well, what do you think of the view?”
“It’s...it’s incredible! Just look at it! Each area...so different, but so beautiful.”
“This remind you of anything?”
“Hmmm...” GaliGee said, puzzled, “Well...hey, are you trying to remind me of that dream you had? You better not dump me out!”
“Ha, ha, I knew you’d remember! Don’t worry! Didn’t I say that I’d never do it in real life?” GaliGee shook her head. “Lewa, Lewa...look, there’s Po-Koro!”
“I see it. Down we GOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” Lewa swooped down, landing neatly right in the middle of the Po-Koro. GaliGee hopped off of Lewa’s back and peeked into Turaga Onewa’s hut. Inside were Nokama, Matau, Nuju, Vakama, Whenua, and Onewa. Pohatu and Onua were standing off to the side, right outside the hut. “GaliGee!” said Onua. “You’re safe! What took you so long?”
“Oh, things. I’ll tell you the details later.”
“Guess what, Onua,” Lewa said, “She road on my back all the way here! Jealous, aren’t ya?”
“Shut up, Lewa,” said Onua in a lower than normal voice. “Shut me up yourself, Shorty,” Lewa said, grinning. Onua grunted and crossed his arms across his chest. GaliGee turned her head to see Gali walk through the gates, with Tahu and Kopaka on either side of her. Gali came and stood next to GaliGee, while Tahu stood next to Onua. Kopaka nodded to GaliGee and stood on her other side.
“So,” said Turaga Vakama, “Let the meeting begin. I believe we all know what the reason is for our coming here. Does anyone have something to add?” Gali pointed to GaliGee and said, “She does. Tell the Turaga, GaliGee.”
“Well,” said GaliGee, feeling nervous, “I went to Ga-Koro and-” At the conclusion of her story, Onua looked at her, shocked. “GaliGee! You could’ve been killed!”
“Hmmm...” Vakama muttered. “So the Makuta has returned...Onewa, if you please.” Onewa, with a sigh, lit Vakama’s firestaff. “So,” he continued, “I think there’s one thing that needs to be done before we take any further action. No offense, GaliGee, but this has all occurred since you arrived. Maybe your being here has disrupted the order of the Great Beings. “Because, you know, there have been no prophecies about this, so soon.”
“Turaga, with respect,” Tahu interjected. “I contacted someone from Lego to hold everything and to make sure it’s safe here.”
“I know, Tahu, but something could have happened. We must send her back. Do you all agree?” All the Turaga nodded their assent. “But, one thing,” Kopaka Nuva said, “If we send her back now, we must let her come back later. We did promise her this.” Vakama nodded. “Agreed. Well, GaliGee, I’m sorry your stay here had to be so short, but this has to be done. Say your goodbyes.”

Gali turned to Lewa first. “Lewa, thank you so much for the ride. I’ll never forget it.” She hugged him and then turned to Pohatu. “I wish I had more time with you, Pohatu, but I’ll always remember the time I did have. Thanks for treating me as one of you.” Pohatu shook her hand goodbye. Tahu stepped out and said, “GaliGee, forgive me for being so rough with you about Gali. You have the true heart of a Toa.” GaliGee swallowed. “I forgive you, Tahu. Goodbye.” Tahu hugged her and set her gently on her feet again. Gali, without a word, gently hugged GaliGee. “Gali, I’ll never forget all you showed me. Thank you.” GaliGee turned to Kopaka and said, “Kopaka, I know we didn’t have much time together. I hope I’ll get to go skating with you someday.” Kopaka said softly, “I promise, GaliGee. We’ll go skating together sometime.” With tears in her eyes, GaliGee turned and saw Onua. “Onua...goodbye.” Onua hugged her and then gently squeezed her shoulders, as GaliGee gazed into his emerald eyes. “Goodbye, GaliGee.”

RINNNNNNNNNNGGGGG! RINNNNNNNNNGGGGG! RINNNNNNNGGGGG! GaliGee turned over in bed. “Mom!” her daughter yelled, “Some guy on the phone for you!”
“Unhh...bring it to me.” Her daughter brought her the phone and scampered away. “Who is it?”
“HAPPY BIRTHDAY, GALIGEE!”
“It is my birthday,” GaliGee mumbled softly. Louder, she said, “Thank you! Who is this?”
“It’s me, Onua.”
“And me, Gali.”
“Me, too, Lewa.”
“And me, Tahu.”
“And me, Pohatu.”
“Kopaka.”
“You guys! Thank you! I just had a dream about all of you. I was on Mata-Nui with you, fighting Rahi, and helping all of you.”
“Wow,” said Lewa excitedly. “Was I in it?”
“Yep,” said GaliGee, “You took me for a ride on your back.”
“Cool! Was Onua in it?”
“Well, yes.”
“What’d you do with him, GaliGee,” Gali asked.
“Well, I fought Rahi with him and...I rode on his shoulders to Po-Koro.”
“Ooooooo!” Lewa said, “Look at Shorty blush! Ahhhh! Get those chainsaws away from me!”
“I also fought an infected Gali. It was terrible.”
“Don’t worry, Gali,” Kopaka said. “I won’t ever let that happen to you.”
“You mean I won’t ever let it happen to you.”
“Cool it, Tahu.”
“Great, GaliGee. Now they’re wrestling in the corner. Guys.” Gali said disgustedly. “I’m sure with such brave protectors, I’ll never get infected, so you won’t have to worry.” GaliGee laughed. “I’m sure. Well, anyway, Pohatu, since you’re so good at telling what people are truly like, what can you tell about my dream?”
“Well, just what I told you before. Your heart’s desire is to-”
“Wait, you Toa have hearts?”
“Of course, how else would we live? Well anyway, what you’d really like to do is be a Toa, fighting enemies and using elemental powers. That’s what I can get out of it, from the little that you told us.”
“I’ll tell you the rest another time. Uh-oh, I think our time is up. Lego only gave us so much time to talk to you before they put us back in our ‘end-of-comic-nine-positions’. I’ll let Onua talk to you now.”
“Hey, GaliGee. Pohatu’s right; we really do have to go, but before I do, I’d just like to tell you that sometime I’ll come to Earth again and we’ll go somewhere else this time.”
“Like Hawaii?” GaliGee teased.
“Anywhere you want. Whoops, they’re cutting us off now. Bye, GaliGee!”





Happy birthday, again, GaliGee! Hope you've had a GREAT birthday!(If you want me to change anything about it, GG, just PM me!)

-IT

[Yotanua, Toa of ...]

Very good job, IT!

*sigh* I didn't win the Powerpack. Maybe I'll win tomorrow......





YToT

[GaliGee]

That was fantastic, IT! What a cool gift! And what an exciting story. I even got to have some real Toa powers! But... how did you know what I dreamed?

Ooh, fighting an infected Gali. That was scary! I hope that never happens in real life. But the Muaka, now that was fun. *imagines self as Muaka-tamer in the Mata Nui circus* And of course I loved riding around the island with everyone...

You AND Pohatu have me figured out, IT.

Edit: OK, now that I've read this for the third time , hehe, I'm really impressed by three things: how well you remember the gags from my earlier stories (I thought I was the only one who knew them that well! -- the firestaff gag, "Shory," Lewa's flying prank, Gali losing her head, my size, Pohatu saying he won't let me get stuck in a wall, Tahu vs. Kopaka), how well you played with the reality/Mata Nui/LEGO Corporation stuff, and how well you got the Toa to act in character (well, the way I see their characters, anyway). Cool! Not to mention you let me have lots of fun, do some heroic stuff, and get hugged on by the Toa!

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We really get a kick out of sharing all our stories and thoughts with you, even if you do embarrass us with them.

It's nice to see they aren't mad at me!



This post has been edited by GaliGee: Dec 16 2002, 03:11 PM

[Bionicle089]

That was a great present for GaliGee! A story for a story writer! Hahahaha! Good Job!

[Xirahk]

Thusly I say sweet! to bad you didn't have galigee meet makuta in person (j/k). cause if memory serves he hacked into one of her phone calls once, it'd be funny to see what he'd do then LOL!
but that was cool though I'm glad that galigee liked it!

[Belfy]

OH MY GOD!

::A little black Bohrok ball with pink accents and Krana rolls around wildly, bumping into walls and table legs before hitting her cat's water bowl and getting splashed by it's contents::

Nova's Muse: Umm...Nova, are you okay?

Nova: ::emits a high pitched whistling noise, shaking with what is obviously laughter, as her krana Vu is grinning rather than scowling::

Nova's Muse: I guess I'll have to decipher what Nova's saying. Apparently she can't talk right now. But I'm guessing that she's highly amused at the story, Israeli Toa, and says that you are a clearly gifted writer of comedies as well as epics, and good at combining both.

Nova: ::whistles some more, followed by rapid chkt and beeping noises::

Nova's Muse: Dang...she sounds more like [No drug references, please. -Kaiapu, or perhaps a Vegas casino rather than a Bohrok. Anyway, I think she is very pleased you wrote this, and would be shocked if GaliGee didn't like it...her only complaint is that she wasn't one of the Bohrok featured.

Nova: ::gasps:: I'm okay now...chkt chkt...Um...anyway, Israeli Toa, keep writing! I'm looking for more 'From Boys To Men.' GaliGee...I know you'll read this eventually, so I'll be able to congratulate you on your birthday. I never got to.

Nova Nuhvok, the Fan Fiction Loving Bohrok

This post has been edited by Kaiapu: Dec 29 2002, 11:09 PM

[Matthias the War...]

That was AWSOME!! My fave funny part was

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"Ooooooo!" Lewa said, "Look at Shorty blush! Ahhhh! Get those chainsaws away from me!"

That was hilarious! You are really good at writing!!

This post has been edited by Matthias the Warrior: May 23 2003, 09:33 AM

[Kadaj]

hee hee man I wish I could get a birthday present just half as good as this one all I ever get is cloths and black socks for some reason heehee hahahahaahahh ow
Takura is out cold for awhile so me TAKURA will post instead of this insane pyro and explosion obsessed whatever you want to call him

I find it really hilarious and Takura is right I never get anything half as good as that its a master piece put it in a musium of bionicle comedies make it a pinned topic its so ack

Takura is back and I just stuffed TAKURA in a box so I'll continue with my comments

I find it funny and I love how its written dont be surprised if I steal it from the comedies forum and put it on a floppy copyright it and sell it for millions Haaaahahaa AHHHHHH NOOOOOOOO its real

My Dark Toon Girl comes to my rescue and beats Takura over the head with her baton

good comedie and DTG Thankyou heres your cookie

TAKURA hands Dark Toon Girl a cookie

DTG:

This post has been edited by TAKURA: May 16 2003, 11:43 AM

[Zero the Maveric...]

Nice story! And I thought nova was always serious! check her post! Anyway HAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

[Pro]

I love it, IT! That was all just a dream! Too bad GaliGee didn't really see them all in person! Great job, IT!

~Prohatu

[Rikki]

You know,whenever I read this story I cant stop imagining Galigee as Amanda Bynes.

[Exo-Toa of Plast...]

IT, there were times while reading this story that I started thinking, "Why is GaliGee referring to herself in third person? Oh yeah, she didn't write this!" Very good story, you really know GG's style.

- ToP

This post has been edited by Toa of Plastic: Jul 11 2003, 06:38 PM

[Legendary Warrio...]

whooooooooaaaaaaaa great present for gg it was really funny hehahehahehaheha its one of the greatest stories i've read so far wowwww

This post has been edited by magical archer: Jul 11 2003, 06:41 PM

[GaliGee]

QUOTE (chronicler12 @ Jun 6 2003, 05:00 PM)

You know,whenever I read this story I cant stop imagining Galigee as Amanda Bynes.

Except that I'm twice as old and half as cool!

But the amazing thing is that the way Mata Nui looked in this dream is really how it looks. When the Rahkshi took me for a tour of the island, I felt as if I had already seen it! Israeli Toa did a great job.

[Da Mista Mike]

Great job IT(hmm...I thought I posted in this...), that story couldn't of been better.

[Soul Calibur II]

That was a good story, Happy b-day galigee, keep up the good work, if you ever retire from BZP I think everyone would cry, HOPE YOU LIVE TO BE A HUNDRED,GAZILLION, YEARS OLD WHOO HOO!!

[joe120250]

QUOTE (Israeli Toa @ Dec 15 2002, 08:16 PM)

“Ooooooo!” Lewa said, “Look at Shorty blush! Ahhhh! Get those chainsaws away from me!”

That was hilarous!!!That was so funny I am still laughing