 Revenge Of The Bahrag: Review Topic, Review my epic here! |
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  Apr 27 2003, 12:01 PM
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Ok, This is the topic where you review all my Revenge of the Bahrag epics! PLZ dont review in them!!
Currently made: Revenge of the Bahrag Revenge of the Bahrag 2: Survivors This post has been edited by Elite Lehvak: Aug 19 2004, 10:01 PM --------------------  Credit to me for the banner and avatar. Bohrok rule. My Brickshelf:here/My Maj:here (the banners link in there doesn't work!) My Epics:click here My PBZP: AlBlClDlElFlGlHlIlJlKlLlMlNlOlPlQlRlSlTlUlVlWlXlYlZ |
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May 2 2003, 04:24 PM
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 Descending into Protodermis Group: Members Posts: 1010 Joined: 5-April 03 Member No.: 7304
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Hey, this is pretty good. Except the bohrok already have elite bohrok. Bohrok-Kals!!! FIRST TO POST!!!!
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 May 5 2003, 08:40 PM
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bballruls12, I made them up in order to create NEW Elites (sorry if I sound mad) because the B-Kal are too much like original Bohrok. And remember, it's an epic. But thanx anyway!
 This post has been edited by Elite Lehvak: Nov 6 2003, 10:01 PM -------------------- Credit to me for the banner and avatar. Bohrok rule. My Brickshelf:here/My Maj:here (the banners link in there doesn't work!) My Epics:click here My PBZP: AlBlClDlElFlGlHlIlJlKlLlMlNlOlPlQlRlSlTlUlVlWlXlYlZ |
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May 17 2003, 07:41 PM
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Tohunga Group: Banned Members Posts: 30 Joined: 9-April 03 Member No.: 7579
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i think its very very good
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May 19 2003, 10:05 PM
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Thanks, benguy12345! And anyways, the Elites look like the B-Kal Kaita with
 ,  , and  , all Kal, except it's with, for example, Lehvak and L-Kal, Tahnok and T-Kal, and so on. If I can get my scanner to work maybe I'll show pics.
-------------------- Credit to me for the banner and avatar. Bohrok rule. My Brickshelf:here/My Maj:here (the banners link in there doesn't work!) My Epics:click here My PBZP: AlBlClDlElFlGlHlIlJlKlLlMlNlOlPlQlRlSlTlUlVlWlXlYlZ |
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Aug 1 2003, 06:52 PM
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Tohunga Group: Banned Members Posts: 30 Joined: 9-April 03 Member No.: 7579
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keep going it just gets better and better!!
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Aug 20 2003, 09:49 AM
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Armored Protector Group: New Members Posts: 305 Joined: 15-March 03 Member No.: 6398
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Thanx again, dude! By the way, Chapter 12 has been added, but it's pretty short, and then again, it raises a new mystery. Check it out!
-------------------- Credit to me for the banner and avatar. Bohrok rule. My Brickshelf:here/My Maj:here (the banners link in there doesn't work!) My Epics:click here My PBZP: AlBlClDlElFlGlHlIlJlKlLlMlNlOlPlQlRlSlTlUlVlWlXlYlZ |
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Sep 15 2003, 06:29 AM
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 Emerging Mata Nuian Protector Group: Members Posts: 1672 Joined: 11-September 03 Member No.: 14259
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this is very good please post more!!!!
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Sep 25 2003, 07:51 PM
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Armored Protector Group: New Members Posts: 305 Joined: 15-March 03 Member No.: 6398
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Thanks deadly kurahk! Chapter 13 has been added, entitled The War of Ta-Wahi! Plz read my epic, BZP brothers!
-------------------- Credit to me for the banner and avatar. Bohrok rule. My Brickshelf:here/My Maj:here (the banners link in there doesn't work!) My Epics:click here My PBZP: AlBlClDlElFlGlHlIlJlKlLlMlNlOlPlQlRlSlTlUlVlWlXlYlZ |
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Sep 26 2003, 10:44 AM
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 Turaga Group: New Members Posts: 83 Joined: 18-March 03 Member No.: 6559
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your epic is very good better than i could ever make
-------------------- I was Master Chief 19. Now im Master~Chief.
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Oct 11 2003, 04:20 PM
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Thank-you, brother Sa-X 19! But we are same-talented! If you put your soul in your epic, it becomes a masterpiece!
 Look around, and inspire yourself for your own epic!  Off-topic: Man, I love tree-speak! This post has been edited by Elite Lehvak: Oct 11 2003, 04:21 PM -------------------- Credit to me for the banner and avatar. Bohrok rule. My Brickshelf:here/My Maj:here (the banners link in there doesn't work!) My Epics:click here My PBZP: AlBlClDlElFlGlHlIlJlKlLlMlNlOlPlQlRlSlTlUlVlWlXlYlZ |
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Oct 12 2003, 07:55 AM
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Emerging Mata Nuian Protector Group: Members Posts: 1672 Joined: 11-September 03 Member No.: 14259
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wow i wonder what the borhok celabrus are?!?!? i love this story
Off-Topic:i love treespeak too. -------------------- What you say of his company is what you say of society |
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Nov 6 2003, 09:55 PM
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Armored Protector Group: New Members Posts: 305 Joined: 15-March 03 Member No.: 6398
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Lookit here, dk. The Bohrk (yes, Bohrk, not Bohrok) Cerebrus is a creation of mine I did once. It has indeed 4 heads, one is the main head, it looks like an ordinary Bohrok head, two other heads act as hands ( the teeth pointing downwards), and the last one is the protector of the main weak spot: the tendril connecting to its heart. It is made with:
Well, hope you have fun trying to build it without instructions.  Heheheh...
This post has been edited by Elite Lehvak: Nov 7 2003, 12:35 PM -------------------- Credit to me for the banner and avatar. Bohrok rule. My Brickshelf:here/My Maj:here (the banners link in there doesn't work!) My Epics:click here My PBZP: AlBlClDlElFlGlHlIlJlKlLlMlNlOlPlQlRlSlTlUlVlWlXlYlZ |
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 Nov 6 2003, 10:25 PM
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Armored Protector Group: New Members Posts: 305 Joined: 15-March 03 Member No.: 6398
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Thank you everyone for reading my first epic! Now, I want you (if you can) to send me a PM telling me your rating for this story, from
 (boring) to (way cool, dude!). Thanx again, dudes!!
This post has been edited by Elite Lehvak: Nov 6 2003, 10:27 PM -------------------- Credit to me for the banner and avatar. Bohrok rule. My Brickshelf:here/My Maj:here (the banners link in there doesn't work!) My Epics:click here My PBZP: AlBlClDlElFlGlHlIlJlKlLlMlNlOlPlQlRlSlTlUlVlWlXlYlZ |
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Nov 14 2003, 01:04 PM
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 Descending into Protodermis Group: New Members Posts: 1045 Joined: 29-June 03 Member No.: 11109
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Hey, this seems like a pretty good epic
 ! I like the easy-to-read theme of it, and the storyline seems pretty 'cool'  . Keep it up !God be with us all !
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Nov 23 2003, 01:48 PM
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Armored Protector Group: New Members Posts: 305 Joined: 15-March 03 Member No.: 6398
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Thanks, --Reborn--, for reading my epic!
And I want to ask, is any one here a good banner maker? If so, PM me!Edit: The epic will be at least 20 chapters long (at least!)! This post has been edited by Carnifex Lehvak: Mar 21 2004, 05:13 PM -------------------- Credit to me for the banner and avatar. Bohrok rule. My Brickshelf:here/My Maj:here (the banners link in there doesn't work!) My Epics:click here My PBZP: AlBlClDlElFlGlHlIlJlKlLlMlNlOlPlQlRlSlTlUlVlWlXlYlZ |
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