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post Jul 29 2003, 05:11 PM
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Hahli Husky's Stories!

Hey there! Welcome to the story topic of the hippest husky on BZP! biggrin.gif Hope you have a good time reading and looking around, there's alot of material hanging out in here, some of which I'd even forgotten about! laugh.gif


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The Eyes of Hazel

“I know you.” His words were soft but cold, dripping with an awe-filled sadness. They halted Ayazel. She turned, staring openly into his face.
“What do you mean, Vyailr?” Her voice trembled.
He stepped closer. “I know who you are. I can always feel the power around you,” he explained, then uttered a deep sigh. Something else waivered in his light green eyes, that seemed to hold him back.


A beast emerges from the depths of Aya-Pali, an island far from the reaches of Mata-Nui. As he seeks revenge against the Great Beings and their creations, the two feuding cultures of Aya-Pali must reunite to stop him. The land to the north is a steaming desert, home to Jaka-Kitru city and people far unlike the Toa, Matoran, and Turaga, who live in the southern greenlands. Two young islanders from these different worlds will come together, in ways troublesome and unexpected.
In progress; 2 chapters so far


Comedies

It was summer of 2003, and I went crazy. Comedies was the perfect way to channel my hyperness into something good. Here it is: HH's insanity contained in three huge comedies.

A Fat French Woman, she's in Ga-Koro!

Kotu: Hahli, you're making her talk! Tell her to come with us.
Hahli: I can't. I don't know what she's saying!

Hahli, Maku, and Kotu are going about their everyday chores, when they get a visit from a large French lady, whom they cannot understand at all. My first comedy pulls together a series of odd-sights, weird happenings, and Takanuva getting pushed into the water! It's Ga-Koro like you've never seen it before.
4 chapters, script-style

The Toa Go See Star Wars

"Hey, I think I get this," Lewa stated. "Darth Vader's evil, right?"
"Just watch the movie," said Gali.


After going to see Star Wars in a theater, the Toa decide to buy a TV. If only they had known the insanity to come! Emeril's wanna-be, Kong-Fu Grannies, and an opera rat are just some of the calamities they face! If you love comedies that go to extreme crazy-ness, this will make you laugh so hard, I'm not sure what will happen. And if you prefer a calmer side of life, read with caution.
6 chapters, book style

Takua and the Leafblower

Jaller: That thing blew the lava farmers away!
Takua: I wonder where they'll land.....
*far away, in a remote corner of the Le-Wahi jungle.....*


Here it is, the long-awaited leafblower comedy! After getting his hands on this tool, Takua goes to "show" Jaller, who is already busy, trying to clean his hut as how Hahli is coming over for dinner. At first, Takua wants to use the leafblower to help, but then it is unleashed in Ta-Koro! You won't believe all the things (and people) who get blown away! Special "appearances" by Tom Hanks, Takanuva, and more.
5 chapters, script-style


Epics

Epics was my jumping-off point on here. The epics I have posted on here have really helped my writing (and spelling) alot, though still I'm not all that great at it. rolleyes.gif

Vakama's Story; The Journey from Matoran to Turaga

Adventure, traveling the island, on their own? They'd never been permitted to do such a thing; and only a few, fearless Matoran had ever dared to travel across Mata-Nui.

An epic that tells of the time when those who are Turaga now were young Matoran. Vakama, a restless Turaga's novice, sets out on a quest for the Key of Knowlege. His compainions are Onewa, who is also a Turaga's protege', Nokama & her sister Pekel, and Matau. Together, they must brave fearsome Rahi, solve puzzling riddles, and discover something very new: themselves. This epic's title may make you think that it tells about Metru-Nui, but in fact it totally ignores the whole 2004 storyline and beyond.
35 chapters

Bionicle Adventures 1: A New World

But I was so wrong. For as soon as I set the course for Mata-Nui and walked through, I knew it was real.

The story of a human girl who was wisked away to Mata-Nui, this epic is a fairly detailed first-person view. She makes her home in Le-Koro, and is given a bird to care for and train, Tanro. But soon, what starts out as delivering a letter for Turaga Onewa turns into a wild search to find Takua, and help defeat Makuta and his Rahi.
16 chapters, which are all pretty short.

B.A. 2: Of Hunting Va and Gaining Power

I suddenly sat up in bed, the hut filled with the sound of my own screaming. I stopped. A dream! It had only been a dream.

More on that girl living on Mata-Nui! This time, Lepeka hunts Bohrok Va and delivers letters with the help of her friends: Paupae; a self-proclaimed "desert-horse-coyote", Tanro; an odd, talking Goko-Kahu, Kakma; a bad singing Le-Koronan, and Angel; a plant-loving Ga-Koronan. Lepeka has very odd dreams, which lead up to a surprising chain of events after she is shot by the elemental powers of two Bohrok-Kal.
14 chapters

Lepeka and Mabel; Tides Turning
An epic by the fabulous <daydreamer> and I!

Mabel of 'Changing Worlds' and Lepeka of 'Bionicle Adventures 1&2' finally meet up! Ever wary of each other, the human girls must team-up to find the missing Toa Nuva. With <dd> and HH in on it, this promises to be an adventure of power, mystery, and trust.
21 Chapters


Short Stories and the Like

Not many now, it's difficult to contain a story in one post! But currently I'm working on a short stories series, to be released later this year.

Hordika's Hope

The Toa of Stone breathed out slowly as he stared at Matau. Neither one spoke; with a single glance they saw the thoughts and worries of the other. The green Hordika beckoned for his brother to sit with him.
"Onewa," he started, "I'm not sure what to do."


In the drastically changed world of Metru-Nui, with Visorak hunting always and the Toa infected with Rahi, none of the heros are certain anymore. Matau sits in the now-jungle of Le-Metru, trying to find new hope. He feels alone, after all, Vakama is suffering too greatly to think, Nokama enjoys being a Hordika, and Whenua is coming to love it as well. With Onewa and Nuju as his only purpose-driven comrads, is there a hope for the Hordika?

The Broken Spear of Jial

"How could you ever know what it's like to be a Guard member?!"

Jial is a young, shrimpy Ta-Koronan who's always wanted to be a better Guard member than he is. But once his spear and relationship with his older brother is broken, can he still prove himself? With the help of Captain Jala, his best friend Lree, and even his brother Klydan, Jial learns an important lesson in Unity.
First of The Three Virtues Series

Pure Heart

“We shall see,” he murmured, inviting a cat into his lap. “The forest seldom makes mistakes. Unicorns come only to virgins? We shall see.”

Tragedy in a young Matoran's soul. A few seasons after the loss of her husband, Shalai has fallen into deep sorrow. Her purpose is shattered with her heart. Unable to stay in their mountain home any longer, Shalai sets out, following a call in the southern breezes. Will she ever find a new meaning in life? Under the wise guidance of a mysterious Le-Koronan, Shalai discovers her Destiny.
Second of The Three Virtues Series


The Island of Legends

Through water, through water,
Swims her wise daughter,
Her village, so lovely to see.....


A poem with a verse for each Toa and their Element, including Takanuva. It's just a little something I put together awhile back, but if you love my songs and poems in Vakama's Story, you'll love this.


Other Awesome Stories!:

Ever since finding this site, I have read many, many works in the library. Most were good, but some have left a deep inprint on my heart which I must mention here, so you can enjoy them too! happy.gif

Spills of Darkness by Nahta
Spills of Darkness is the second installment of the Dreams of a Lost World saga, which follows four Toa as they attempt to save the island of Mata-Suro from the hand of the evil Patua. Awesome stuff!

From Boys to Men by Israeli Toa
Tahpuka, a young Guard member in training, faces the joys and woes of life in the Ta-Koro guard (and on Mata-Nui itself), and in growing up. This one can pull out of you almost every emotion possible. Not at once, of course.

Against the Wind by -Windrider-
It's the same old Toa, but a whole different island. Make that islands, actually. The Toa Nuva journey to the land of Sola-Nui, to save the villagers of the islands of the sun, moon, and stars from a mysterious evil.

Lhikan: My Story by Lhikan
Step aside, Bionicle storyline team! Here comes Lhikan, with his own theory of the events on Metru-Nui. Together with the Toa-Metru, Lhikan must form an alliance to fight against his former friend, Turaga Dume, and all he throws at them.

Makuta: My Father! by <daydreamer>
One the latest in <day>'s captivating stories is this, an epic where Makuta decides he wants a daughter! And of all the BZP gals, he chooses Mabel (that's day). Now on the island of Mata-Nui (in Makuta's lair) Mabel must learn to deal with her Rahkshi brothers, Kraata, and her tempermental new father!

Dreams and Riddles by Phoenix_Nuva
Taha, a young Ta-Matoran, must journey with his friends (one from each village) and Takua from a riddle. Taha begins to recive strange dreams along the trip....

Splitting of Two Worlds by Nova Nuhvok
What can I say? Chances are you've heard of it already! But if you haven't, you've got to read it!!!! With one half of a mysterious scarab, Takua travels the island with Kapura looking for the other half--and himself. The ending is very surprising!



Thanks to:

Alsru: Toa of Honor
Celestial Dragon
Crisis
<daydreamer>
Dark Wairuha
Esplin
Israeli Toa
Jo_Shmo
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korobound
Lhikan
Nirika The Sun Toa
<>~ Paharakgirl ~<>
Phoenix_Nuva
Pyro Nuva of Dragons
Orochi Anegennisi
R2D2
SaPa
shadowonua
ta-koroguardian
Toanuvafreak123
Tolan
toromaga
-Windrider-

For all the great ideas, support, banners & images, or simply inspiring me when you didn't know you were doing so! tongue.gif You guys rule!!

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post Jul 30 2003, 04:24 PM
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Ah, I remember that moment. My fav would be the Fat French women in Ga-Koro.

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post Jul 31 2003, 07:27 AM
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Ooh, I luv the epic! It has the same kind of plot as my epics, a girl on Mata Nui. Guess we think alike, huh?


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post Jul 31 2003, 05:30 PM
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QUOTE (<daydreamer> @ Jul 31 2003, 05:27 AM)
Ooh, I luv the epic! It has the same kind of plot as my epics, a girl on Mata Nui. Guess we think alike, huh?

Well, great minds think alike! laugh.gif That's interesting, that we have the same basic outlines....

You're French, dhik? Glad you liked that story!

Takua and the Leaf Blower will probably be around the second week of August, as how I can work on it on the way to camp next week. I can't wait to put it up, real funny material, but not crazy like The Toa Go See Star Wars.
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post Jul 31 2003, 07:24 PM
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Ha HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA AHA HA!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh, oH, Man your comedies are great! Cough cough gag!!!!
Doc:Quick! he's having an eliptic sesiure!!!
Esplin:Nooooooo!!!!!!!!! must.....finish.........post......to....hali....husky!!!!!!!
Esplin falls over and dies.
uuuurrrrrrrr.........

Yours, Esplin.


P.S. what does, "yours" mean?


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post Aug 2 2003, 07:12 PM
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QUOTE (Esplin @ Jul 31 2003, 05:24 PM)
P.S. what does, "yours" mean?

"Yours" is a more respectful and/or friendly way of signing off on a letter or whatever. At least, that's what I think.

Anyway, glad you saw them! And liked them, too.
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I see. I'll look at all of your Stories and stuff. Wait, I speak french and norwegeian! Hola. Mi nombre es olaf. ¿Usted viene aquí a menudo? Wait. That was spanish. Vos histoires sont chien de traîneau très intéressant de Hali. Gardez le travail vers le haut. Or'll font somthing méchant. ......... à un morceau de papier ! Click this link to find out what I said. Clickly!

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blink.gif *uses translator* Cute! Very cute! And great work with the Takua and leafblower comedy. Too bad it ended...
Hopefully another comedy can take its place. And keep up the work with your epics!

P.S. Tried to do Chinese on that translator thing but everything turned out with some words wrong and very funny. Weird

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Cute? huh.gif bored.gif blink.gif unsure.gif blush.gif Uhh....Thanks.
By the way, The stories are still awsome! I'm tired! By by! Esplin goes to sleep and dreams of Ruling the world. Bwah ha ha ha ha.....ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!

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Are you ABSOLUTLY,POSSITIVELY, SURE THIS IS ALLOWED? Tell me you are sure that this allowed.


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post Oct 11 2003, 06:46 PM
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QUOTE (Toa of Science @ Oct 10 2003, 06:04 PM)
Are you ABSOLUTLY,POSSITIVELY, SURE THIS IS ALLOWED? Tell me you are sure that this allowed.

If you're talking about having a story topic, then yes, I am positively sure it's allowable. biggrin.gif

Thanks, <daydreamer>! blush.gif And Esplin. Hopefully I will be able to put up another chapter in B.a. 2 today....


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