 The Dumb Discoveries, Mata Nui with T.V, computers, etc. |
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  Sep 18 2003, 01:00 AM
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 Aquatic Guardian  Group: New Members Posts: 376 Joined: 15-September 03 Member No.: 14456 
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Hello and welcome to my first comedy, it's about mata nui with T.V, computers, satelites, airplanes, and about all the techlonogy we use today, but not all at once. Well, you'll have to wait later today, I have to go to school
 I'll edit this post with the chapter later, cyazOk, here is the first invention: T.V and Satalite! Chapter 1 In ta-koro at Jallers hut... Naparu:...That'll cost you 100 widgets. Jaller:Ok, here ya go. Naparu leaves Jaller:WOOOOOPPPPPEEEEEE!!!! I got T.V!!!!! Jaller clicks the remote and T.V turns on... T.V:...and Hahli passes it to Maclu which then does a trick and the ball goooes flyyyying... T.V changes Jaller:WHAT?????? T.V:We're sorry to interupt your program... This Is A Special Report with Takua Takua:Hello, I'm sorry to interupt your schedualed programing but the Rahkshi are now in Ta-koro destroying everything!!!!!!! Jaller:Oh my goodness...  Jaller hears people screaming outside and Rahkshi destroying everything... Takua:Oh yeah, and Mata Nui forebids that Sports gets interupted... Rahkshi enters the T.V... Takua:Ahhhhhhh......*runs away* Goes still here's all the screaming and yelling... Jaller goes out the window and says:Pipe down!!!!! Did you know the Rahkshi is here, you can giva away our posesion!!!!!!!! Matoran:B-b-b-but the Rahkshi is here!!!!!! Jaller without paying attension:That's nice... *while seeing Sports* A Rahkshi enters Jaller's hut Jaller in the kitchen:Oh, hello, sit down with me and eat popcorn. The super Butter Orvielle popcorn, right nows there's Lava Surfing. Rahkshi sits in the sofa awith Jaller and eats popcorn... Turahk comes in and slaps Gurrahk (which was the one with Jaller) Turahk:YOUR SUPPOSED TO DESTROY AND KILL AND NOT SITTING HERE WITH A MATORAN EATING POP CORN!!!! Guurahk *to busy watching TV to think well*:Here, have some popcorn. Jaller then realized that he was sitting with 2 Rahkshi... Jaller:AAAAAHHHHHH Guurahk:What? Jaller:You can talk? Guurahk realizes what he has done:uh oh, Kurahk, he knows our secret! Gurrahk then gets interupted by his favourite sport, which is Shatter the right object and win 1000 widgets Gurahk:Yes, my favourite! 15 minutes later... All the Rahkshi are in the sofa watching T.V Lehvak:Pass the coke Panrahk:Here ya go Next day... 3 matoran snoke in and took the rahkshi and put them in the lava, but of course they were on top of it(they were asleep so is Jaller) Sun rise... Jaller: THe Rahkshi might come back so we must be ready!!!! Jaller then made an army 5 minutes later... Watch men:They're here, sound the alarm!!!!!! Jaller:Ok, ready your disks... annnnd, *Jaller's clock beeps* Jaller:oooopps, The tonight shoe with Jay Leno is on, who wants to come to my house and watch some T.V? All Rahkshi:Us!!!! Jaller:OK!.... I hope you enjoyed, please reply with your coments, I'm not a comedian, and I rushed a bit, cause I had to quickly do my homework... Any how, later, we'll see how Ga-koro is with T.V.. If Ta-koro is saved by T.V, then what well happen to Ga-koro with the Bohrok? This post has been edited by Kewko: Sep 18 2003, 12:22 PM -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Sep 18 2003, 09:57 PM
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  Senior Staff  Group: Premier Forum Assistants Posts: 14153 Joined: 29-July 03 Member No.: 12651
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OH OH HA HA HA!!!!!! THIS IS FANTASTIC! Everything is perfect! Who wants to mess around with perfection??? Well, write more! Are you taking guest starrers?
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Sep 19 2003, 12:27 AM
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Aquatic Guardian Group: New Members Posts: 376 Joined: 15-September 03 Member No.: 14456
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Yes, and I'm glad you like it!!!!!!! If you want to be a guest star, pm me! I've never made a comedy and i'm not a comedian, but I'm so glad you liked it.
Ok, here's -chapter 2- -invention #1:T.V with Satelite(cuse cable wasn't invented or intena, so how can they watch t.v? with satalite!!!!)- In Ga-koro.... Macku:...Thanks Naparu! Naparu:No Problem! That'll be 100 widgets Macku:here! Naparu leaves Macku's hut. Macku clicks the remote... T.V:...and Hewkii has the ball, he shoots, annnnnnnd.... Macku:C'mon my love! T.V changes to interuption news! Macku:WHAT!!!!!! T.V:This is an interuption report with Takua! Takua:We're sorry that we interupted your schedualed program, but Makuta put back Mata Nui to sleep by the spell of Barney!!And Makuta has now unleashed the bohrak, they're heading straight to Ga-koro! Oh, and Hurricane Nokama is heading straight to Ga-koro also!!! Macku here's Bohrak and people screaming... Takua:Oh and the Nokama forebid the Pet channel to be interupted! Macku clicks remote... T.V:Ok, this is how you make a plushy, first get a cute thing, give it hugs and kisses and attencion, and it might turn into a plushy!!!!! Macku goes and makes Fluffy Bunny cereal... Bohrok brakes threw door! Macku in kitchen:Come in you cute thing!!!! Bohrok(Kohrak) ends up attached to Macku once he sits in the sofa and eats Fluffy Bunny Cerreal® Macku then turned the Kohrak into a plushy. 50 minutes later.... There's plushys the size of Mt.Ihu! Macku then makes a store and got a bunch of plushys for every1, but the hurricane is comming and it took the plushies and fell in love with them (Iguess it was makuta who did it) Ok, I had to rush cause school is coming and i'm gonna be late, I know it wasn't as funny as the other but don't worry, next one I can promess. Ok, next time it's gonna be Ko-koro with the Rahi!!!!! This post has been edited by Kewko: Sep 19 2003, 12:55 AM -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Sep 19 2003, 04:37 PM
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Aquatic Guardian Group: New Members Posts: 376 Joined: 15-September 03 Member No.: 14456
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All right, I'm taking guest stars!! So Pm if you want to be one, and maby you can also be a co writer, so pm me with a chapter of an invetion we use today(e.g cars, computer, etc.) and if it's good, you can come in!!!
Ok, here's the best chapter I made! Enjoy --Invention#1-- --Chapter 3-- --Invention:T.V!!! Invention#2:Satalite Invention #3The telephone! #4 DVD At ko-koro... Naparu:Ok, here's your T.V! That'll be 100 widgets. Kopeke: ........ Kopeke gives Naparu the widgets and he leaves. Kopeke then clicks the reomote... T.V:Welcome to the meditation and peace channel... T.V: ........................................................................................... Kopeke: ... T.V:............................................................................................. Kopeke: ... 5 minutes later... T.V: ........................................................................................... Kopeke: ... T.V changes into...(you should know!) T.V:We're sorry to interupt your schedualed program... T.V:This is Interuption Report, with Takua! Takua:We're sorry to interupt you but it is TOTAL CHAOS, THE RAHI,BOHROK AND RAHKSHI HAVE JOINED FORCES TO DESTROY KO-KORO!!!!!!! T.V Reporter:This is live from Ko-koro! It is complete silence... Rahi, Bohrok and Rahskshi combination(just call him Chaos):ATTACK!!!! Ko-koronans: ............. A Chaos breaks into Kopekes hut... Kopeke: ....... The chaos roars in front of Kopeke and is ready to eat him... Kopeke: ..... Chaos:This is no fun! Kopeke: Patience... Chaos: He talks? Kopeke: ... Chaos2:I think it was your imagination, but is it alive? Chaos(1):Yeah, he's breathing Kopeke then forces them to meditate (I think you know!!! Pm me if you know, hint#1 "...Forebids that..." seems easy) Chaos 1&2: ... Kopeke: ... 5 hours later... Kopeke: .... Chaos, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10... : ......... Jaller comes in... Jaller:Man! The Rahkshi are mad at me cause the stalite isn't working, that's what you get for living in a smokey, firey, ashy place! Macku comes in... Macku:Man, that stupid hurricane!!!! It blew my dish away and I couldn't afford another 1 cause Naparu made it into 1000 widgets! Jaller takes remote and changes channel to Sports. Kopeke then gets angry and tremboles... Kopeke: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH Macku takes remote and changes it into the Pet channel!!! Nixie comes in... Nixie: Hi guys! Everyone except Kopeke:Hello Nixie Kopeke then goes normal and starts meditating and is in peace: ...... Nixie takes remote and changes it to The Discovery Channel! Everyone except Kopeke:HEY!!!! Nixie:I had to choose between my telescopes and charts and pictures or Satalite, so I threw the satalite away and choosed my other stuff... so I came here cause I know it's safe here form the danger and... Nixie gets interupted by Macku Macku:*eh eh ehhh* *points to the Chaoses* Nixie:Ok, i'll go. Naparu caomes in... My satalite broke and it didn't work underground!!! So I came here cause the other places are dangerous and... Nixie interupts:*eh eh ehhh* *points to the Chaoses* Naparu:Oh, Ok, i'll go... Kaparu comes in... Kapara:I brought the Popcorn for the sports!!! Jaller told me he'll be here! Hahli comes in... Hahli: I brought the Fluffy Bunny cerreal®!!! Rahkshi comes in... Rahkshi:Hey, you didn't tell me you'll be here!!!!!!!! Everyone except Jaller(cause he knows)(yup, also Kopeke):YOU AN TALK!?!? Kurahk:Grrrrrrrr *then get's interupted by his favourite show which is Rugrats! (lol) Kurahk:I'm gettin Makuta!!! This is his favourite show, he then gets tips from Angelica (have you seen Rugrats, you have to, to understand) Where's the phone? Jaller:I think it's at the right of the hallway! Kurahk:Oh, ok Makuta comes in.... Makuta:Thank you shadows! Here's the tip! Makuta:I brought the Mask of Darkness on DVD!!!! Everyone(except for the bad guys):ohhhh, great *in a sad voice* Takanuva comes in.... Takanuva:Thanks Light! Here's the tip! Takanuva:I brought Mask of Light on DVD!!!! Everyone except Bad guys:YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!! Just then Kewko comes in...... Everyone:HEY???? AREN'T YOU SUPPOSED TO BE WRITING?!?!? Kewko:Uh, no, my T.V is dead and I want to see Mask Of Light!!!! Everyone:oh, then who's writing? Kewko:My sister Barbie comes in.... Everyone Except Hahli and Macku:AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Barbie:Hello guys!!!!! Is there a buty saloon here? Rachel(My sister) makes a buty saloon... Everyone but Kewko:Do something!!!!! Barbie:Hey Rachel, I think these people need a hair do and a dress up!!! Rachel:OK!! Everyone:NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Jaller runs and trys to save everyone!!!! *Indiana Jones sond plays* Barbie then shoots Make up! Jaller (like in The Matrix) Doges bullots and then does action stunts(you gotta see The Matrix, but Rated PG 13 so for little people, don't watch it! So is Indiana Jones, it's not for chirldren!!!! Only mature people! Ok, back to topic!) Rachel then makes a bunch of Barbies and her friends!!! 5 minutes later..... WAR!!!!!!!! Then the Toa Nuva come in and join the fight!!! Macku and Hahli turn to Barbies side!! Jaller:NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOO!!!! HAHLLLIIIII!!!!!!!!! *Then he looses his powers and falls prisinor!* Just then the Bohrok came and the plushies of them!!! Bohrok:Please, Macku, turn our men back to plaushies. Well, this Chapter is SO long!!!! so pease reply and I have to go to bed!! In any ways To Be Contined... Ok, here's the second part of the chapter above... ...The Toa and everyone tried to melt and destroy the Barbies, but my sister kept making more and the Bohrok wanted there men turned back into Bohrok! Bohrok:We want our men back!!!! You turned them into plushies and we want them back!!! Barbie:Look girls, aren't they so cute???? Let's get em!!! Bohrok:RUN!!!! The Bohrok run and all the Barbies come after them... Mataro:Look at this menace!!! That's what you get when you let your sister substitute!!!!! Kewko:Ok, since the Barbies are gone and my sister went to the bathroom, I can now write the story to normal!! Kewko goes up and then starts writing, all the Barbies melt and all the damage then got repaired!!! This post has been edited by Kewko: Sep 20 2003, 02:42 PM -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Sep 20 2003, 04:27 PM
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 Stalwart Defender Group: New Members Posts: 471 Joined: 3-June 03 Member No.: 9887
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I love this comedy! The "Bullet Time" scene was great. ~Note: The Matrix is not a PG13 rated movie. It is rated R.~
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Sep 21 2003, 06:33 AM
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Aquatic Guardian Group: New Members Posts: 376 Joined: 15-September 03 Member No.: 14456
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Remember, I'm accepting Co-writers and Guest stars!
Chapter 4 ~~Inventions:T.V, Guns, Army Stuff, Factories, Helecopters, War things and machines!~~ At Ta-koro..... Jaller clicks remote and watches T.V... Just then the Rahkshi broke in! Jaller:Hi guys, how'd you know I were watching T.V??? Everytime I turn the T.V, you guys show up!! Vorahk:Well, uh, we... um, we have the Akaku, so we see threw the walls and see your watching T.V! Kohrak:Yeah! Jaller:Where do you guys live? Guurahk:Next door! Jaller:Oh, Ok 70 minutes later... Hahli, All of Ta-koro guard, The Bohrok, Kewko, The Turaga, Macku, Taipu, About all the matoran and Toa come in... All:Hi Jaller, Naparu ran out of T.Vs so we know that you have T.V so we came in! Jaller:Ok! Wait, Kewko, what are you doing here?!? Kewko:I dunno, I got bored so I came here! Jaller:Oh, then who's writing the story? Kewko:Oh, uh, my Brother! Jaller:Does he like Barbies? Kewko:Heck no!!! Jaller:Good! Kewko:My brother is a good boy! He wont mess up! Jaller:What does your brother like?? Kewko:He loves Army Soldiers and those little green men, he wanted to be in the Army and... Everyone looks at Kewko... Kewko:hehehe, he's a good boy! Just then an Army Soldier comes in! Army Man:Freeze!!! Jaller:A good boy, eh? Kewko:hehehehehe, sorry! The Army guy takes everyone outside where they see Helecopters and Paratroopers! Turaga Vakama:Get of me you no good little dummy!! Jaller: Kewko:  hehehehe *gulp*Then Bombers atart bombing Ta-koro Tahu, Takanuva and Jaller:All for 1, and 1 for all!!! Jaller:Charge!!!! The soldiers start shooting and miss him! Jaller runs to his hut and turns all black with with a black cape(Like in The Matrix) and comes out and starts shooting and doging bullets. Army guys start shooting and screen freezes and turns around and Jaller kept killing mre guys! Tahu melted the Little plastic men but My bro. kept making more!! Then Hewkii's watch beeps... Hewkii:Hey, it's Pearl Harbour, who wants to come to Jaller's hut and watch it? I also heard Black Hawk Down is on! Sargent Perkins(Leader of Army Guys)  K!! All men to Jaller's hut!!Hahli comes to Jaller... Hahli:Where did you learn that?? Jaller:Oh, I so the Matrix alot of times! T.V commercial:Ah, the power of T.V!! Kapura:Now you learned your lesson of not to let anone write this story but you!!!! Kewko:Ok, now i'm gonna go up and start writing before my brother comes back! END! how'd ya like it, next chapter it's gonna be my Mom taking control of the Story!! -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Sep 21 2003, 08:34 AM
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Battling Makuta! Group: New Members Posts: 540 Joined: 21-May 03 Member No.: 9194
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do it do it do it do it this is hilarious you said ur not a comedian but i dont beleive ya what are guest star standards
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Sep 21 2003, 09:52 AM
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Aquatic Guardian Group: New Members Posts: 376 Joined: 15-September 03 Member No.: 14456
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You have to PM me and ask, what do you want your name to be, what do you want to do(what your character does) and things that you don't want him to do, sorta like a brief description of what you want to do.
And to be a co-writer, you have to pm me, give me an example of how well you do your comedy(or storys)l send me a chapter of your previous comedies or if it's your first time, just make a chapter of this topic or a different story made by YOU! Not to be copied!! And if I like it, your in!!! But if you don't want to be guest star or co-writer any more(which I hope not) pm me and your free to go! Remeber, you can choose if you want to be a perminent guest star or not! (e.g you can be a permenant Matoran, Bohrok, etc.) P.S:I forgot to tell you who you want to be(not name)but like what you want to be, a matoran, new toa, new turaga, a new Rahkshi, Bohrok, or a character(like from my previous chapters like Army Guys and Barbies or anything else that might not be Bionice) And, well, there's my brief(just kiding) instructions on how to be a co-writer or guest star! -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Sep 21 2003, 09:59 AM
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Stalwart Defender Group: New Members Posts: 471 Joined: 3-June 03 Member No.: 9887
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Wonderful, as always. Bit tough to read, that time. Put in dancing Krana next time!
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Sep 22 2003, 01:41 PM
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Aquatic Guardian Group: New Members Posts: 376 Joined: 15-September 03 Member No.: 14456
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Okay!! Thanks for your tip, we have a new guest star!!!! His name is ultimate guurak! Here's the next chapter!
Chapter 5! Inventions:Computer, Computer games, internet! At Ta-koro Naparu:...And that'll be 500 widgets... Jaller:Ok, here! Jaller goes to BZPower and goes to comedies... Jaller:Hmmm... Hey, they posted "Interview with Jaller"! Jaller visits that topic and gets angry... Jaller:Hey, I didn't say that! Gali Gee is gonna be in trouble!! She put me as being shakey! That was the phone!!! The smoke kept breaking my voice from were I were standing!! Takua was just standing in a good spot and wont let me get next to him!!! He said I'll zap him!! Grrrrrr... And this other interview that never happened! I've been thrown out of the window cause it was getting borring????? I should of been killed so that never happened!!! I am gonna complain!!!! Jaller PMs Bionicle Rex and puts that all this is a bunch of lies!!!! Jaller gets a reply and it says "no it is not!!" Jaller then ends up doing spam on my topic and it gets closed Kewko:Why you little... Jaller:ah, ah, ahhh, temper, temper! Kewko:grrrrrrr Kewko earases Jaller's body and face... Kewko then goes to Le-koro where there's a party Kewko comes in Kongu's hut... Kewko:Hi guys! Kongu:Hello Kewko! Hahli:Wait, who's writing? Kongu:My mother is, she's the best! Hahli:Oh brother!! Kewko's mom then makes Jaller back! Jaller comes in... Jaller:Why you little... Kewko:Ah, ah, ahhh, temper, temper! Jaller:Grrrrrr.... Ultimate Guurak(UG for short) comes in.... Everyone looks at him and screems! (Cause he's creepy) Everyone:AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!! MAKUTA!!!!!(cause he's total black with a creepy look!) UG:I am not Makuta(in Kopaka's usual mood) Everyone:Kopaka? UG:I am not Kopaka! Everyone:Then who are y-y--y-y-y-you? UG:I am Ultimate Guurak! Everyone:Phew! Just then the Rahkshi come and Makuta! Guurahk:Hiya Jaller! Jaller:Wait, if your're Guurahk, then who's he??? UG:I said Ultimate Guurak! Guurahk:Oh, hi bro! UG:... Guurahk:He's always like this! Kongu:Ok everyone! It's time to play Musical chairs! Kongu puts "La Cucuracha" on Kongu stops the music and everyone sits down except for Vakama Vakama:I knew this would happen! The prophesies said this would happen, rats! Jaller then had to sit next UG... Jaller:H-h-h-h-h-h-h-hello... UG:..... Kongu plays music again until a voice is heard Kewko:OH KNO, IT'S MY MOM!!!!!! My Mom:WILLIAM(my real name)YOU HAVEN'T DONE YOUR CHORES AND HOMEWORK!!!! Kewko:Hide me! My mom has a thousand eyes!!! UG then throws Kewko out the window! Kewko:thanks  My mom:If you don't come up here this second, your gonna regret it!!!! Kewko:NEVER!!! My mom:Fine, I'm gettin' your father!! Kewko:Uh oh... Jaller:Uh, oh what? Kewko:You'll see! And army of real time soldiers come(they're not plastic and green, they're real!!!) The song of Star Wars 1 plays when Darth Maul was fighting Qui-gon and Obi-wan... Jaller:Some writer!!!!!!!! Kewko erases Jaller again! Kongu:Hey, who's watching Star Wars I? Rahkshi:US!!! Kongu:Well, GET YOUR BUTT OVER HERE NOW!!!!!!! Rahkshi:Fine Soldiers start throwing Gernaids and are shooting bullets. UG does the Matrix acts like Jaller and sttars kicking Soldier's faces and shoots his guns! Jaller comes back Kewko:Hey! Jaller:Hehehehe, since your not writer any more, I can come back!!  Kewko:grrrr!! Jaller then finds UG doing the Matrix! Jaller:Hey! I'm supposed to do that!!! Grrrrrrrrr! Kewko:Hehehehehe, since i'm not writer anymore, I can't give you that ability!!! Jaller:Then how come he can do that??? Kewko:He came outta nowhere!! That's also what makes him creepy!! Jaller:Yeah!! Helicopters come and start dropping men! Then out of no where came the Starship Enterprise!!! (My dad likes Star Trek also) and starts shooting out it's Phasers! Then came Bob the Builder!? Bob the builder theme plays!!!??? My dad: ops, wrong 1, ah here!! Then comes all his favourite movies and then Chaos (Chaos, from the other chapter, remeber?) Chaos1:Hello guys, hows ya doin'? Tamaru:Look for your self!!!!! Chaos1:oh! Just then everything stopped! Kewko:Oh, my dad's in the Bathroom! Everyone:  Kewko:Fine! Kewko then leaves UG comes walking and says: So are we going to play musical chairs and everything else, I'm bored!!! Everyone:   Um, we're tired, goodnight!UG: ... Ok, there's a chapter, ultimate guurak would play a better role tomarrow! Well, actualy, the hole chapters about him!!! Please reply of what you thought about the Comedy and this Chapter so far, and i'm accepting guest stars and co-writers! -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Sep 22 2003, 02:29 PM
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 Submerged! Group: Members Posts: 1131 Joined: 28-July 03 Member No.: 12585
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Good comedy. I hope you make more soon.
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Sep 22 2003, 04:58 PM
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Battling Makuta! Group: New Members Posts: 540 Joined: 21-May 03 Member No.: 9194
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thanks i thought it was great i will come here every day because bio squad was shut down so this is my favorite
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Sep 22 2003, 06:55 PM
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 Toa Group: New Members Posts: 131 Joined: 30-July 03 Member No.: 12683
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Ya know you can just EDIT STUFF!
Jaller: Why *ChuBach turns Jaller into a Pichu* Pichu: Pichu! ChuBach: I'm catching this one! Pokeball, go! *ChuBach then catches Pichu* ChuBach: Yes! *talking to you, the reader* And remember kids, treat your Poke'mon well! Guy: Why? ChuBach: EDIT STUFF! *ChuBach turns the guy into a dog* Dog: Ruff ruff! *runs away* ChuBach: Weirdos... Edit? Why would he want to edit hrm? Each Chapter deserves it's own post. So please Don't spam anymore. This post has been edited by Janus: Sep 23 2003, 05:44 PM -------------------- Fear the dancing Kirby! FEAR!!!
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Sep 23 2003, 06:33 AM
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Aquatic Guardian Group: New Members Posts: 376 Joined: 15-September 03 Member No.: 14456
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Um, I think that post was off topic!, I think you should post that in the official Pokemon topic at Completly Off Topic section, and I considered that as spam, and I know I can edit stuff, thank you. It's funny that your sig says you are a spam destroyer, well, you made spam and I don't want it closed because of that!! This topic is for replying and for me posting new chapters and my soon to be co-writers too!
-------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Sep 23 2003, 09:29 AM
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Toa Group: New Members Posts: 131 Joined: 30-July 03 Member No.: 12683
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Ok, sorry. I liked this too much, I went off topic!
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Sep 23 2003, 09:36 AM
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Aquatic Guardian Group: New Members Posts: 376 Joined: 15-September 03 Member No.: 14456
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No Problem, just don't do that again, thanks
Chapter 6! Inventions:Same as last chapter! At Makuta's underground realm.... Makuta:Hahahahahahahaha *Gack* *Cough* *Gack* Guurahk: What's so funny? Makuta:You know that your brother came?? Guurahk:Yeah, and? Makuta:He can work for me!!! Guurahk:And what makes that so funny?? Makuta:Oh I remebered last year's Party at Le-koro... Guurahk:I don't remeber... Makuta:Oh, I forgot that I switched Kraatas, oh well, any how, remember when we were playing with the Pinata? Hahhahahahahahaha *COUGH* *COUGH* Guurahk:So what happened with the Pinata?? Makuta:Hehehehe, YOU were the Pinata and then Lerahk hit you and then you got sick!! HAHAHAHA!!! Guurahk:Wait a moment, no, it was YOU, cause Takanuva got you and turned you into a pinata, and the fell all the yummy Krana Cereal pieces! Makuta then remebers: (speaking in his mind) Oh, yeah, that's why I were coughing wenever I laughed, and that's why I switched his kraata sow he wouldn't remeber and tell it to other people!! Makuta (Speaking with his voice not in his mind):Well, who cares! Let's do a party and welcome your brother! Guurahk:um, well, ok! At Le-koro... Kongu goes to BZPower.com... Kongu then PMs everyone to come with him at his party! Everyone comes including Kewko! Everyone: Kewko:WHY???? Only UG is writing!!!! Everyone:Well... UG comes in... Everyone:THEN WHO'S WRITING???? Kewko:Kopaka is!!! Then winter comes! Everyone: Kewko: Kopaka comes in... Everyone:Then who's writing??? Kewko:I don't know Everyone: UG, can you do the pleasure?? UG throws Kewko out the window! Kewko:Hey! Look, dancing Krana!! Everyone runs to the window! Everyone:where?? Kewko runs up and pushes them all out! Everyone:Hey, look, they opened a Duncn' Doughnuts!! Kewko: Where?? Everyone:There!!! Kewko:Cool, lets go eat! At Duncn' Doughnuts... Kongu:Hey, but there's a sign that says closed, reserved for the comedy "Bionicle meets Duncan Doghnuts"! (Be sure to read Pucteamsckater's comedy Bionicle Meets Duncan Doughnuts! Everyone:SO??? Kewko:Hey and it also says That the writers Pucteamskater, DS and Tahu the Cool is busy writing and working!! Hahli peaks threw the window and seas Jaller as he's being teased about his wrinkles! Hahli gasps Pohatu comes and peaks threw window Pohatu:I'm that fat??? Kaparu:No you aren't! Jaller:I can't believe it!!! Gali is in love with cofee and everyone likes her??? Gali:We're Brother and Sister, not different people!!! Jaller:Well, there is enough writers in this world, so we don't need anymore!!!!! Everyone looks at Kewko Kewko:Please, don't make me!!! Everyone:UG, can you do the pleasure?? UG throws Kewko threw the window Doncan Doghnut Guy:HEY!!!!! Kewko runs all the way to his real home and starts writing Jaller:Anything to get him writing!!!! Back at Le-koro..... Kongu:Hey, UG, you got a telegram! UG reads it to find that his brother invited him to a party! UG leaves... Now underground!! UG comes... out pops dancing kraata and flying Protodermis!! Makuta:WELCOME BACK!!! UG starts crying and joins in with the other Rahkshi!! UG:Thank You guys!! But I have to tell you a horrible secret... Makuta:and whats that??? UG:I'm not alone! Makuta:What?? UG:I have more brothers!! Makuta:YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!! UG:Oh, and they opened a Duncn' Doghnuts, but it's closed, but they opened a MC Donalds!!! Makuta:Great!! I'm tired of eating Kraata, It makes me fat!! Turahk:Well, what are the names of them???? UG: UL, UT, UK, UP and a few others, UK is from Engalnd, UP works for the UPS, UL once got his head stuck up on the celing for 20 days... Rahkshi:Ahhhhhhh, really? UG:Yeah, and UT fell of a horse back in the West... Makuta:West??? UG:In an other world! Makuta:Oh Kurahk:You never passed geography, so that's your problem!! Makuta:Oh, shut up!! UG:Any how, UT fell of a horse and then got ran over by bison! Everyone:oooooooooo... UG:I think they're gonna come tomarrow, but they are all..................... What are they??? Find out next chapter! Well, there was the chapter, how'd ya like it???? Next chapter would be of McD and more surprises, so stay tuned!! This post has been edited by Kewko: Sep 23 2003, 10:39 AM -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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 Sep 24 2003, 08:56 PM
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Battling Makuta! Group: New Members Posts: 540 Joined: 21-May 03 Member No.: 9194
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this is good but i actually have a sister and shes older i said it was good didnt i anyway who liked me in the chapter and i wish i had a brother but alas i got my older sister Jessica she calls herself Jes it looks as if it is pronunced(sp?)(jez) doesnt it?i love me j/k i love my sis too but i hate myslf for getting so fat
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Sep 25 2003, 03:55 AM
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Well, I'm actualy talking about the comedy, not in real life!! It's just about UL (ultimate lerahk) UK (ultimate kurahk) etc. comes over and... I'm not gonna give awy the next chapter!!!!! Just wait, I'll edit this post with the next chapter!! (Later, Of course)
Ignore the top, anyhow, here's a new chapter! (You have to see Back To the Future to see this one) Chapter 7 Inventions:Modern Day High School, Internet, Computers, About everything we use today! At Po-koro.... Hewkii goes to the internet..... Hewkii: GREG FARSHTEY, AND HE'S THE WRITER OF BIONICLE!!!!!!!Hewkii runs out to Ta-koro... Hewkii tells everyone that Kewko isn't the True writer, GregF is!! Jaller leads a portesting campaign to Kewko! Kewko comes in! Kewko:Hel-lo? Jaller:Attack him!!!!! He killed GregF!!!! Kewko:WHAT??????? A stampied climbs over Kewko and starts fighting... Kewko runs all the way back up! Kewko:Ok, I'll never go back down there again! Wait, I can earase it, and start over!!! Kewko earases the Matoran memories and rewrites it! Kewko:There! At Ta-koro... (Night) Jaller goes to school... Kewko comes in... Kewko:SCHOOL??? Uh, oh, I must have write the past! Principal Vakama in microphone: OK students! The dance is gonna be on in 20 minutes! Johny-B-Good starts playing! (you have to see Back To The Future to understand!) Kewko then sees himself with the eletric guitar playing Johny-B-Good! Kewko:Wait, is that me???!! Kewko runs outside to see Naparu's Father (Doc from Back To the Future) preparing the Time Machine Car! Kewko runs back inside and sees Hahli and Jaller dancing, also Macku and Hewkii! Kewko:So that's how they met!! Then Jaller's Bully comes in (Nahmato) Nahmato:Hey, that's my girl!!!.... Kewko:Quickly tries to go back up but can't!! Kewko then takes the Time Vehical and goes to 1985! (In Biff's world, but this time Namato's world) Kewko:This can't be, this can't be!! Kewko then goes to the cemetary and sees his father's grave! Kewko:NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This can't be happening, This can't be happening... Naparu's Father (Doc):Im afraid this is happening! Kewko wakes up back in good ole Ta-koro watching Back To the Future! Jaller:GEEZ, WAKE UP ALREADY!!! Kewko:What a nightmare!! Nahmato:Look, they opened a McDonalds!!! Kewko:AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH, so it's true??? Nahmato:Duh, look for yourself!! And whats so scary??? Kewko:Oh nothin, lets go, I'm hungary! At McDonalds....... Mataro:Yum, nice ole Mata Nui Cowburger! Underground at Makuta's underground lair.... UG:They're a little, Wacko!!! Makuta:Oh, great!!! Phone rings... Makuta:Hello?? ultimate rahkshi:Um, we got hungry so we went to Burger King, but then we missed our flight and we got sick, so we're here in the hospital with a paper cut and so we thought we should stay here! So.... Makuta hangs up Makuta:Bah, we don't need them!! Back up!!! Kopeke: Be...In...Peace...Mataro....! Mataro gpes crazy goes his coke had lemons! and so it was sour! Mataro jumps threw the window and breaks a foot... End Of Chapter. Ok, how'd ya like it?? This post has been edited by Kewko: Sep 25 2003, 05:43 AM -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Sep 25 2003, 05:48 AM
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What are you talking about???? Don't spam, and that's not whats gonna happen!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok, here's a new chapter!!!!! Chapter 8 Inventions:Well, lets take that out cause now I'm using about everything we use today! At Kini-Nui hospital.... Jamami (Mataro's Girl friend):Is he all right???? Doctor:He's in bad condition... Jamami:I can't watch! Jamami leaves... Doctor:Wait! He just had gas from the coke! Oh, and a broken leg, but nothin serious! The next day... At Ta-koro... Mataro comes in with a cast... Jaller:Hello Mataro, how ya feeling! Mataro:Fine.... Jaller:Hey, did you know I'm a movie star??? Mataro:REALLY???? Jaller:Yeah, I'm an actor/derictor of the Comedy "The Dumb Discoveries" Kewko comes in.... Kewko:Hey, that's my idea and you are all ready acting in it and it's trademarked!!!! Kewko leaves... Jaller:Dang it! Well, I'm still acting in other movies... Mataro:Really?? Jaler runs outside... Mataro: .... Night... Phone rings... Jaller oicks it up... Jaller:Hello? Jaller's Brother: Hiya Jaller! It's me, Taller! Jaller:TALLER!!! Taller:I don't really have time, but to give you a career, you can work for Live Movie Theater! Jaller:What is it? Taller:Well, your in it, I signed you up, it's just that your gonna do a movie in Real Life, Real Streets, Everything! (Watch The Man Who New To Little) Jaller:Ok, great, thanks... Taller:I have to go, a Crocodile is destroying the house.. Jaller:A what?? Phone:Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuttttttttt... Jaller hangs up Jaller:Well, ok, time for business! Later.... Jaller walks up to the outside Telephone... Telephone rings.... Jaller picks it up thinking the movie's starting! (But isn't, and won't) Mistery Man:Hello Spencer... Jaller in his mind: Nice character name... Jaller:Yes? Mistery Man:Take care of the Gail and flush her! (There using code...) The address is Ashanue Street #1508... Jaller:Yes... Hangs up... Jaller goes to the address and finds the Women and Arrests her... Jaller calls the phone number of Boris (The Mistery Man) Jaller:Got 'er... Boris:Great, go to the Grand Hotel... Jaller:OK... Hangs up Jaller's Cell Phone rings... Jaller:Hello? Taller:Hello Jaller, did you know it's my Birthday? Don't come, I'm busy, but at 12:30, we're gonna fire up some Ambasadors! (Birthday cigars) Jaller:Great, bye, I'm doing a show... Ok, Bye! (It's real life, but Jaller doesn't know he's working for terrorists) Jaller then runs to the hotel and a person gives him a communacater Jaller:Thanks! Communicator (Boris): Are you there?? Jaller:Yes, at 12:30, your gonna fire some ambasadors! Boris (talking to his assistant next to him):HE KNOWS!!! That no good cool dude!!!! He knows about the bomb (A bomb was in a birthday cake next to some ambasadors) Jaller (static is interupting):Um, sorry, I ment my brother and I were gonna fire up some ambasadors, not that it is YOUR birthday, it's my brother's. But Boris couldn't here and thought he was mocking his plan Boris:How dare you!!!! Jaller: But it's my Brother's birthday! I can't work that time!!!! And I heard this show this show is gonna end ay 12:30! Boris (speaking to his assistant):He knows the bomb is gonna detonate in 12:30!! Boris (speaking in communacator):Are you talking in code? What show? Jaller:This show! Boris:What show? Are you watching T.V? Jaller:No! Boris:Then what show are you talking about??? Jaller:THIS SHOW!!!! Boris:What show??? Jaller:Never mind! 30 minutes later... Jaller:Is this to be continued or did I miss the street and the rest of the movie cause I got lost, I took Interstate 76 and I see cars with guns blowing up other cars! (Have you played Interstate 76?) Boris:WHAT ARE YOU TALINKING ABOUT, YOUR FIRED!!! Jaller:WHAT!!!??? Jaller turns around and goes to Ta-koro... Jaller looks in the trunk of the car and sees a Cake! (which is a bomb!) Jaller:Yum, a cherry! (the bomb is in the cherry) A fly comes Jaller:YUCK! A fly! Jaller throughs the cherry out of the window and a huge explosian blows up! Jaller:Hmmm.. I must be getting near Interstate 76 again, that's wierd... Jaller tries the cake, but it something that makes the bomb blast bigger! Jaller di a fart and throughs the cake out and it does a mighty blast! Jaller:Whew, that was close! End of chapter!!!! Please reply with any coments or what ever! I'm gonna later post a list of codes and what it means! This post has been edited by Kewko: Sep 26 2003, 12:33 PM -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Sep 26 2003, 12:43 PM
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Ok, here's a bunch of codes
Flush:Get rid of Recycle:Kill or Destroy Plumbers:A special team that works for someone that captures and does other orders! Bad Boy:Bad Guy Loo:Going somewhere mostly the bathroom or outside! Spank:Attack or kill Zoo:Outside Party Time:Action Naughty Boy:Criminal Local Pizzareia:Fire Pizza:Bomb and i'll edit this with more codes! -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Sep 26 2003, 02:35 PM
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 Conqueror of the Swarm! Group: Members Posts: 730 Joined: 9-December 02 Member No.: 3181
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Ha ha very funny!
But do not quadriple post or else this comedy will be deleted. P.S. I mean closed when I say deleted. -------------------- My Comedies: Here are a list of the comedies I'm most proud of or is currently in the works. |The New "Old School" Bionicle Comedy|Humans V.S. Mata-Nui (Inactive)|Invincibility Robots Animations (Inactive)|As A Co-Writter|Boring Life Of Toa with onua nuva fan (Inactive)|The Dumb Discoveries with Kewko (Inactive and many chapters are missing)|
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Sep 26 2003, 07:53 PM
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Battling Makuta! Group: New Members Posts: 540 Joined: 21-May 03 Member No.: 9194
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yeah give da people time to post oh no rap attack (Real Slim Shady starts playin the ends after its done)as you know some people have spaz attacks i have rap attacks its not really that strange when you listen to it too much i didnt like the whole bomb fiasco though otherwise I thought it was great
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Sep 27 2003, 04:32 AM
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Oh, to understand it, you had to watch a certain movie, and I didn't Quadriple post, there was a post in the middle that I reported cause it was spam so the moderator delated it, I'm gonna make the next chapter ever! It's that the bomb thing, I got a request from a fan of this comedy who requested doing part of this movie "The Man Who New Too Little!" Also, my dad's stupid computer is doing wierd things (I can't use mine, my brother won't quit saying "William won't let me play!")
Here's Chapter:9!!!!! With our new Guest Star, Night Toa!! I hope you like your part because you didn't say who you want to be and what your character does so I hope you like your part! ENJOY!!! At Kini-Nui's Grand Mall.... Everyone goes to Dairy Queen! Jaller:Hey, look, a sign that says Dairy Queen would marry Burger King, wow, now we can get nice yummy Burgers AND Desert! Hahli:awwww, it there gonna give birth to McDonalds! Oh, and Wendys! Mataro:So, how was your movie yesterday Jaller? Jaller:Terrible, I got fired!! Mataro:That's ok, well, as long as Kewko gives us millions of widgets, we don't need to work! Bill Murey comes in.... Jaller:Bill? Bill Murey:Yeah? Jaller:IT'S YOU, sit and let's have a coke Bill:Jaller??? Cool, it's you, I just saw Mask of Light, and you were awsome! I also have your mini figure! Jaller:That's great! Bill:To bad I can't stay, I promised I'll meet Jay Leno on the Tonight Show! Jaller:Don't worry, I'll watch you on T.V!! Hahli:I'm gettin a burger, i'll be right back!!! Hahli walks to the counter and sees Jackie Chan cutting Hamburgers Hahli:Jackie? Jackie:Hello, Hahli, what can I do for you? Hahli:You work here? Jackie:Yes, in secret, but only you know so... Hahli shouts:LOOK, IT'S JACKIE CHAN!!!!!! Jackie runs through the wall and escapes! Wooly Goldburg comes in... Jaller:Hey, what's all these guest stars doing here?? Wooly: We're playing survivor on Mata Nui! Jaller:Oh, cool Night Toa comes in.... Jaller:Who are you? Night Toa: The question is WHO are you? Jaller:No, the question is, WHO are you? Takanuva comes in... Night Toa:Hello Light Toa! Takanuva:Hello Makanuva! Night Toa:Hey, don't use my real name!!!! Takanuva:ops, sorry! 6 kraata comes in... Night Toa:Darn it! Them again! Kraata:C'mon, it'll just be a second Night Toa runs! Kraata:Come here, I need to till you a secret! Night Toa blasts the Kraata in dust Night Toa:Phew 1000 Kraata come in! Night Toa:uh, oh Kraata:C'mon daddy, let me give you a kissy! Night Toa runs to the counter Night Toa then gets the Burger King uniform and says:Do we have a kraata spray? Manager:Yeah, we do Night Toa:Gimme some! Night Toa sprays the Kraata into an oblivion! Makuta comes in... Makuta:WHAT HAVE YOU DONE??? Jaller:How can you be in good shape, I thought you were fat!! Makuta:I make kraata... Jaller:Oh, yeah, that makes sence, ok! Makuta gets his food and leaves Jaller's watch beeps Jaller:Oh, The Tonight show is on, see you later! Hahli:I'm gonna watch Cartoon Network, see ya guys! Naparu comes in... Naparu:I invented a Time Machine!!!!! I need someone to come with me... Mataro:I can't, I have a cast. Night Toa:I can! Naparu:Great, come with me! Night Toa:OK! So they both traveled back in time! 100,000 thousand years later.... Night Toa:Oh, look, dinosaurs!!!! Naparu remebers what his dad said "If you ever travel back in time, don't touch anything!!!!" Naparu:Don't touch anything, don't touch anything, don't touch anything... a giant mosquito comes... Naparu kills the bug and by accednt travels back to his rightful time... (Naparu made this thingy so time can't affect them!) back where they are supposed to be... Night Toa:Hey! Everything looks different! Naparu remebers that he killed the mosquito which changed the world! Night Toa:Hey, here comes Jaller!! Night Toa:Hey Jaller!!! Why are you all wrinkley and like weak? Jaller falls to the ground and then Makuta comes and creates total darkness Night Toa:Wait, Makuta, is that you? Naparu quickly goes back in time to the dinousaurs.... Naparu:Don't touch anything, ok? Night Toa:I'm just sitting down! Naparu:Good! A Tyranasuares Rex comes and chases Naparu! Naparu hits it with a Wooden plank and kills it, but then the other dinousaurs die becuase there food chain was interupted, then Naparu goes crazy destroying everything and then goes back in time to see Fire blazing! Naparu:Ow know, the Bohrok destroyed Mata Nui!! Night Toa:I'm hungary, look, there's a McDonalds! But then McDs gets destroyed by a Tahnok! Night Toa:let's go back in time! Back to the dinousaur age... Night Toa:Don't touch anything!!!!! Naparu:Yes, I know! A T-Rex comes and tries to eat Naparu, but Naparu did a fart which destroyed everything!! Night Toa:grrrrrr... Then they go back in time just to see the Rahkshi destroying everything!! Then they go back and forth and see wierd things like Jaller's a criminal, Vakama destroyed the toa, Ussals with jetpacks, Mata Nui is the bad guy and is torturing poor Matoran, Makuta as a baby, and many wierd things until one day Mata Nui was a wonder land.... Night Toa:Ahhhhh, this is the life, raining Donuts, snowing Suger Bombs (A candy with green sour powder that explodes in your mouth!), hailing Giant Jaw Breakers the size of Boulders! Then we're all rich, ahhhh, what a life! Naparu:Yeah But by accednt the pet ussal crab pushed the reset button and everything went back to normal! Naparu:HEY!!!!!! Kongu:Hey what? Naparu:Man, me and Night Toa were having the time of our lives! Kongu:You mean eating Hamburgers is the time of your life? Naparu:Never Mind! Well, I hoped you liked your part night toa! And I hope this one was better than the others! I'm now accepting co-writers and remeber, if you want to co-write, pm me with a made up comedy chapter or a made up chapter of this comedy or any other previous comedy's you made! And if you want to guest star, you can be a permenent, or temporary like for 2 or 1 chapter! Also for guest staring you need to pm me, say what do you want to be called (e.g. a different name or your BZP name) , put a brief description of what you want your character to do, and a brief description of what does your character do and don't do, and things you want to include or happen, or may not want to happen! those are the instructions of how to co-write or guest star!!! This post has been edited by Kewko: Sep 27 2003, 09:58 AM -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Sep 27 2003, 07:50 AM
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Battling Makuta! Group: New Members Posts: 540 Joined: 21-May 03 Member No.: 9194
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aint lil bros the pits i have a friwnd whos little bro is gonna get shot if he doesnt stop making me look like an I-d-i-o-t-but he wot stop hows yours Will can i call ya Will or just Kewko
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Sep 27 2003, 09:24 AM
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You can call me both
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Sep 27 2003, 01:02 PM
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Man those stories had me laughing my head off,great stories!
  
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Sep 27 2003, 01:31 PM
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Thanks, I'll write more maby tomarrow or much later! I'll edit this post with the new chapter
-------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Sep 27 2003, 07:26 PM
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Conqueror of the Swarm! Group: Members Posts: 730 Joined: 9-December 02 Member No.: 3181
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I'm Hungry, lets go to mcdonalds.\
Ha ha ha! About that post, I just went to mcdonalds today(true). SPOILER(not really)AND EDIT: From night toa to kewko:You said that I can co-write on sundays! This post has been edited by night toa: Sep 27 2003, 07:28 PM -------------------- My Comedies: Here are a list of the comedies I'm most proud of or is currently in the works. |The New "Old School" Bionicle Comedy|Humans V.S. Mata-Nui (Inactive)|Invincibility Robots Animations (Inactive)|As A Co-Writter|Boring Life Of Toa with onua nuva fan (Inactive)|The Dumb Discoveries with Kewko (Inactive and many chapters are missing)|
NOTE: Inactive comedies are for reading purposes only (because they're so old), so please don't post in them. I hope someone likes them! *Kanavazk - Original Creator of the "Bionicle Picture Guessing Game"* |
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Sep 28 2003, 05:07 AM
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I said that you needed to send me a chapter you made and if I like it and it's funny, you can co-write!
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Sep 28 2003, 12:30 PM
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Battling Makuta! Group: New Members Posts: 540 Joined: 21-May 03 Member No.: 9194
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i think that all tis is great Will
 im wanting me in it again but waiting for my part is what bot bio squad closed and it cant happen here!!welcome Robin The Third to bzpower have a great time
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Sep 30 2003, 06:04 PM
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Conqueror of the Swarm! Group: Members Posts: 730 Joined: 9-December 02 Member No.: 3181
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I got a job from kewko to co-write on sundays! But *looks around*
Kewko's not here for awile so I'm gonna edit this post and type in the chap tonight(I am watching a dicovery channal thing).  Ok, I'm back! So here it goes. --------------- Chap Everyone but me:Who cares! Me:Okay you don't have to... Everyone but me:SHUT IT Me: bye bye. in the computer room of the Insitut of Technology Gali looks at internet and finds a page in binary that says in englich "NUMBERS IN BINARY" Gali:I don't understand this website. Onua:Well I see a Real Player thing in the bottom of the page Gali: you're right*checks out the real player thing* Computer Speaker:00000000,00000001,00000010... *An hour later* Computer Speaker:11111111. Gali:Why you little...*chases around Onua* Tahu:Um don't please Kopaka don't chase Pohatu Gali:I am not kopaka!!!!! Onua:I am not pohatu!!!!! Tahu: Well your elements are about the same Kopaka(who did not hear what tahu just sayed):I did not chase pohatu!!! *Kopaka freezes Tahu* Naparu:Now that was't nice. Hey Night Toa wanna go back in time? Jaller:He just left one millon years ago when he snuck into your time machine. Naparu:But that's impossible! there is a password to go in!*looks supicious* Hey! you told him didn't you! I said do not tell anyone the password! Nomaka:Oh My!!! is the password. Naparu:Hey how did you know Oh My!!! is the password? Everyone on Mata Nui:Jaller told us! Jaller:Okay now that you know...GOOD BYE!!!!!*runs away* Naparu:YOU WON'T GET AWAY FROM THAT!! Gali:I am going to comuter language school to learn binary Everyone else:OH NO NOT AGAIN!!!! *at school* Teacher:Hy my name is Miss.01000001 01100010 01100011. 01000001 means Capital A, 011000010 means small B, And 011000011 means small C. So my name is Miss.Abc! Gali:Why do I have to learn the alphabet in every language! Someone:Well you wanted to. Other Students:Shhh!! Teacher:You are EXPELED Gali:Oh no not that!!! *Teacher turns into Makuta* *Makuta turns to Harry Potter* Harry Potter(who is Makuta):Lose your memory!*says magic words* Makuta:Where am I? Gali:You are in the graveyard and zombies just killed you. *makuta dies* That kid who sayed Gali wanted to come here:Wow --------------------- Post count in space:Slitly over 320 Anyone like it? This post has been edited by night toa: Sep 30 2003, 10:39 PM -------------------- My Comedies: Here are a list of the comedies I'm most proud of or is currently in the works. |The New "Old School" Bionicle Comedy|Humans V.S. Mata-Nui (Inactive)|Invincibility Robots Animations (Inactive)|As A Co-Writter|Boring Life Of Toa with onua nuva fan (Inactive)|The Dumb Discoveries with Kewko (Inactive and many chapters are missing)|
NOTE: Inactive comedies are for reading purposes only (because they're so old), so please don't post in them. I hope someone likes them! *Kanavazk - Original Creator of the "Bionicle Picture Guessing Game"* |
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Oct 2 2003, 01:52 PM
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hehehe, that was good, you might think i'm not Kewko but I am, My sister just screwed my account so I had to redo everything! That was a good chap, i'll edit this post later with the new chap, I wish I could get my posts back!
This is why: Well, I were just on my comuter when I had to leave because I had to do homework, my sister went down stairs, and I forgot to log off, my sister got on, and went to My Controls, changed my password, my e-mail address, my avatar settings, about everything!!!!!!! Then I got back, and I couldn't log in, it says incorect password and stuff, so I had to make a new one!!! I wish I can have my posts back! Here's a chap!!____________________________________________________________________________________ At the sunny grass lands... Kewko comes in.... Hahli:HEY, WHO'S WRITING??? Kewko: Oh, um, my sis screwed up my account, and I came here for no reason, which way is Ta-koro? Hahli  Kewko runs to Ta-koro.... Kewko:Vakama, Jaller! I need to speak to you! Vakama:Yes? Jaller:Yeah? Kewko:My sister screwed my account and everything, but then she put a virus!! It's called the "Earase Me Virus" Vakama:What does it do? Kewko: You'll see... A guard then shouts:AHHHHH!!! Jaller runs to see an earaser earasing him, then the earaser comes and make a cage and trapped another guard! Jaller: NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOO!!!!! Then everyone here's a voice, and it's my sister! Rachel (My sis) : Hahahahahahahahahaaaaa! Rahel: *voice from the sky* Mata Nui would now be in the before time!!! Makuta:You said it sweety! Everyone:Makuta? Makuta:Ahhhh, my darling Rachel! Kewko runs around crazy!! Kewko: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! Phone rings in human world! Rachel:I'll get it! Kewko runs up to his room. Kewko comes back down! Kewko: M-m-m-m-m-m-Makuta is-s-s-s in my r-r-r-r-r-o-o-o-o-o-m-m-m-m-m!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kewko:AND HE'S HUGE!!!! AND HAS MAKE UP AND IT DRESSEd, HE NEARLY pULvERISED ME!!!!!! Everyone: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Kewko then goes to Jaller's comeputer and the earaser follows! Kewko:Here earaser! all the earasers go into Jaller's computer and get stuck there! Jaller:NO!!! Kewko takes the computer and gets up and sends the earasers to makuta! Makuta runs with Rachel who ended up looking like Makuta, I bet he converted her!! Makuta:Run sweety, I have a speacial house for you that I finished cleaning!!!! ____________________________________________________________________________________ OK, how's ya like it, I had to rush before I miss my bus! this seems little but I counted it in the Word count thing, and it's almost 318 words! This post has been edited by ~~Kewko~~: Oct 3 2003, 12:43 AM |
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Oct 3 2003, 07:02 AM
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Battling Makuta! Group: New Members Posts: 540 Joined: 21-May 03 Member No.: 9194
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im sorry u lost ur account and why didnt you just edit it back?
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Oct 3 2003, 12:42 PM
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Aquatic Guardian Group: New Members Posts: 376 Joined: 15-September 03 Member No.: 14456
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YYYYYYYYYYIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIPPPPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, I found the last e-mail I got for this changing thing, and then I found a way to get my other account back!!!! So here I am!!!!!!!!! I'm so glad!
Any how here's a new chap! ____________________________________________________________________________________ Hahli:I'm bored! Jaller:Let's go to the internet! then Jaller logs into his computer and the "Earase me Virus" comes out! Hahli:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! The earaser then starts earasing everything!!!! Hahli then wakes up to find that it was a dream so she goes for a walk in the Grassy Field! Then all of a sunden an earaser comes!! Hahli:AAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!! She awakes again! Hahli then goes out side to see that it's Ground Husi Day! Hahli also had to report the day since she got a job as a news reporter! Then once she got there the snow was all piled up and her car couldn't leave so whe flew on a Kewa! Once she got there she reported everything and then there was 6 more weeks of winter! She then had a regular day! But once she got to bed and woke up the next morning,she had the radio say the same thing and had the same day!!!!! She kept repeating days until she got tired, and started thinking this: Hahli thinking:I keep having the same day over and over again, just GroundHusi Day every day with the same events and people saying the same things as the other days! Just then she got her car and was ramming things, she hit Trash cans and buildings and shops and mailboxes!! Then the police started chasing her and then Hahli went on the rail way tracks and took a sharp turn right just in time to avoid a passing train! then crashed into a brick wall and her engine failed, the police then came and Hahli opened the window... Hahli: uh, yeah, that'll be 4 cheese burgers, coke, some chilly and a HUGE ice cream! Police:Uh huh, that's gonna cost ya! then Hahli ends up in jail! same day 2.... Hahli wakes up in her bed and asks Macku if she saw a Police man comming and she said no! Then she went and started reporting Hahli:OH NO!!! Hot Molten Chocolate is burning and is killing every one!!!!! And the camara points to the laughing, joyful people having a fun time! same day 3.... Hahli wakes up and then starts observing everything... same day 500.... Hahli then sees the same bank truck willed with widgets and knows that a women is going to ask them for some change! Hahli counts to ten and once the women's money falls and the guard crouches to help her and Hahli takes the money.... back in the REAL world! Makuta:Hahahahahahahahaaaaa, now Hahli is in every lasting sleep so Jaller would then lose moral and the Guard would crumble!!!!!! Rachel:You said it dear! (Rachel's my sis) Back in Hahli's world.... Hahli goes to Naparu's hut and gets some Anti-Dreaming potion and wakes up in the real world! Makuta:WHAT THE????? Jaller then comes in with a compact Television..... Jaller: Hi guys, look, now we can watch sports any where!!!!! Makuta:COOL!!!!!!! END! -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Oct 4 2003, 08:55 AM
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Battling Makuta! Group: New Members Posts: 540 Joined: 21-May 03 Member No.: 9194
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how come im nowheredid i get erased or something. any way how is it i have more posts than you and youve been here............oh sorry i didnt know i was so old compared to your account
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Oct 4 2003, 04:22 PM
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Aquatic Guardian Group: New Members Posts: 376 Joined: 15-September 03 Member No.: 14456
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Here's a new chapter including 3 guest stars, they are ultimate guurak, Night Toa, and Savior Tokala!
Chapter ____________________________________________________________________________________ At Ga-koro church.... Priest: .....And now you may kiss the bride... Hahli and Jaller kiss... 1 month later.... Jaller goes home.... Jaller:I got a new job!!!!!! Hahli:But aren't you supposed to be the Captain and chief of defence? Jaller:Naw, T.V just takes over Makutas brain and Macku won't quit turning Bohrok into plushies so there's nothing to worry about! Hahli:Then whats the new job? Jaller:I'm a computer programmer for "The Great Big Brain"! Hahli:Wow! I have a surprise for you too, I'm going to have a Baby!!!!! 15 months later.... 3 o clock in morining... Hahli:Ow, it's hurting, I can't take it, it's comming!!! Jaller runs to the hospital with Hahli on the car... 5 hours later.... Jaller walking around nervously smoking... Doctor comes and slaps Jaller in the face Doctor:SMOKING IS BAD FOR YOU, YOU'LL DIE AND THE SIGN SAYS IT TOO! Any ways your wife only has Gas and we discovered that your going to have a boy! Jaller faints... 2 weeks later.... Midnight... Hahli:It's comming... At hospital... Doctor comes... Doctor:You have your baby! Jaller faints... 5 years later.... Baby (name is Haller):I don't want to go to school! Hahli:Come on, the bus is here, goodbye! At school... In computer lab... Haller cicks all these butons on the Computer and creats a virus which sends earaser flying and earasing evrything!!! Teacher looks at Haller and throws him out of school... Next day... At the Power tools area... Haller burns everything with a wealder and gets kicked out... 15 years later..... Hahli and Jaller are poor and Haller is a criminal with the Mafia! Hahli wakes up to see it was a dream! Hahli: I can't sleep, I'm gonna see if Naparu has anything to help me! Next day at Naparu's Lab.... Naparu:Sorry Hahli, me and Night Toa are going on a Time Expedition!!! Night Toa:OK, everything is set, and we're ready! Naparu:Bye! 50 years later... Night... Mata Nui High School... ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP.... Night Toa: Wow, look at Vakama!! Naparu runs to Vakama... Naparu:Vakama? Vakama:That's PRINCIPAL Vakama to YOU!!! Naparu:Oh, I didn't know you were a principal! Music starts playing and it was Kewko who was doing it, he has playing "Johny B. Good"!! Night Toa:KEWKO????????? Naparu: What the.... Night Toa: This is freaky, and look, Hahli and Jaller are dancing together and I see Macku playing a prank on Hewki by putting Ketchup on his Pepsi!! Naparu goes over and by accedent cuts a rope which killed Kewko!!! Naparu: uh oh, lets get out NOW!!! Back in Time.... ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!! Naparu: !!!!, Mata Nui isn't divided by Elements ant more, it is now divided into sections of territory, look, the green is filled with weapons and missiles and Army Men!!! And in the other place is filled with Barbies and is all Pink!!!! and the other place is filled with action from those Block Buster Movies! And there is filled with cleaness and slaves!!! Kewko's Family must be ruling Mata Nui!!!!!!Night Toa:Quickly, to the Time Machine!! ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!! Back in time they stay there for a few minutes and then return to have things back to normal! Naparu:That's the last time we time travel!! UG comes in with Savior Tokala (ST) Night Toa:Hi guys!! UG: ..... ST: (Talking very fast) Hello, I'm working with UG who's working for Makuta who's busy watching T.V all day who's... Naparu:OK!!! UG:I'm not working for Makuta, I'm working with the Juniour Bohrok Scouts!!! Want a cookie? Naparu:No thanks... Night Toa:Can I have a try out for the JBS?? ST:Of course! To Be continued..... What would happen next, read the next chapter!! This post has been edited by Kewko: Oct 4 2003, 04:24 PM -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Oct 4 2003, 04:48 PM
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Conqueror of the Swarm! Group: Members Posts: 730 Joined: 9-December 02 Member No.: 3181
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I'll try to post a chappie at least once every week and to Mods, If my chapters are not atleast 300 words I am just saving it so I can get a break(I am a little 9 year old that is always tired).
------------------------------ Okay so this it's chap*looks at the page*.Okay lets start again! This is chap*looks at the page*.Okay lets start again! This is chap, Tahu:It is chapter 13 so lets get on with it!*burns me* Me:No wonder I'm so scared of the number thirteen..... *on mata nui in onu koro after I revived everyone back on mata nui* Naparu(still mad at Jaller about the thing) h where is Jala!Jaller:My name is Jaller not Jala!Opps I just gave him a hint of where I am. Naparu:aha! There you are! Do you know where the others are? Jaller:There with Dinaka. Naparu:Whose he?? !Jaller:Did you see the news? On the news break they sayed Night Toa changed his name! Naparu:Um,so did you show ultimate guurak the the code Oh My! as well? UG:Ha ha! Now I can get my hands on the time machine!*goes to 50 B.MN(before mata nui)* Jaller:Guess who told UG. Naparu:That was a setup right??? !Jaller:gota go bye bye! Me:Hey that's my line!!! Jaller:On chap ten! Ha ha! Nurapu:Gotcha! Jaller:Hey it is fair and just!That was a setup! *somewhere else on mata nui* The computer speaker left on by Gali:00000001,00000010, Gali:I hate computers. I hate computer language.... Makuta's sprit(actually Kewko revived him, so I'll call him Makuta):That's the evil spirit, keep hating the computer, soon, you will be hating the whole island and it's spirit itself! Gali:I hate the island! I hate Mata Nui!*mask turns into infected mask* Kopaka:Freeze!*freezes Gali but gali survived the blast and bounced it to Makuta* Makuta:No!!!!!!!!!!!!*freezes Makuta* Gali:There is now only one evil now! MUAHAHAHAHAHA! Will Gali turn back to normal? Will Naparu let go of Jaller? Will I ask the next question? Tahu:Will you be quiet? Me:Oh No! No Wonder I hate 13! Oh did I say that at the begining of the chappie? Oh sorry...*ghts burned by Tahu* --------------------- Okay post count:slitly over 335 words Suggestions and comments post here please! To kewko:sorry if I posted the chapter after you did but is just that I started before you This post has been edited by night toa: Oct 4 2003, 04:57 PM -------------------- My Comedies: Here are a list of the comedies I'm most proud of or is currently in the works. |The New "Old School" Bionicle Comedy|Humans V.S. Mata-Nui (Inactive)|Invincibility Robots Animations (Inactive)|As A Co-Writter|Boring Life Of Toa with onua nuva fan (Inactive)|The Dumb Discoveries with Kewko (Inactive and many chapters are missing)|
NOTE: Inactive comedies are for reading purposes only (because they're so old), so please don't post in them. I hope someone likes them! *Kanavazk - Original Creator of the "Bionicle Picture Guessing Game"* |
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Oct 5 2003, 09:20 AM
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Battling Makuta! Group: New Members Posts: 540 Joined: 21-May 03 Member No.: 9194
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those were pretty good but not too funny and probably too short, night toa any way ami almost forgotten where areUL,UT,UP,UK,and UV?
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Oct 5 2003, 10:39 AM
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Aquatic Guardian Group: New Members Posts: 376 Joined: 15-September 03 Member No.: 14456
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Remember at the other chapter when they were a bit dumb and was stuck in the hospital, that's what happened, Night Toa, Please make the chapter a bit longer, that didn't look like 335 words! Anyhow here's a chapter!
____________________________________________________________________________________ At The Junior Bohrok Scout camp.... UG:OK, here's the camp, we do all sorts of things, lets have a peek at the Cratfting section... Night Toa sees Hahli making seaweed bags... Night Toa:HAHLI??? Hahli:Oh, hello Night Toa! Night Toa:What are YOU doing here? Hahli:I'm making these wonderful bags to store things, look at my bag! Night Toa:But how do you keep all that stuff in????? Hahli:My secret! ST:Want to go to the JBS factory??? Night Toa:Sure!!! At the Factory.... ST:Look, here's where we make cookies, want a cookie??? Night Toa:Sure... ST:There's Peanut Butter, Mint, Mint Chocolate, Chocolate chip, Peanut Butter chip, Frosted Chip, White chocolate chip.... 10 hours later.... ST: .....Krana Chip, Super Fudge, Flashy Chip, Old chip, Old 500 year old cookie, red, green, blue, lavendar, miru chip.... 20 hours later.... ST: .......Kraata chip, little kanohi chip..... UG comes in UG:THE ALARM, QUICKLY, TIME TO SAVE PEOPLES LIVES!!!!! At the Ambulance.... Night Toa:Man, and I still didn't get my cookie!!! At the snowy mountains where people are trapped freezing.... UG:Quickly, there's a poor man!! Poor Man: Help, Help!! UG:Don't worry, we'll sing you a nice soung that'll save your life! Oh Little Dancing Kranas! Little Dancing Krana comes out LDK:Yes? UG:Sind this poor man a soung! LDK:Ok! LDK: I love you, you love me, we are a happy family, with a great big hug, and a kiss from me to you, I just want to say, I--love--you.... Poor Man:AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *Dies* UG:That's ok, there's another one!! Poor Man2:Help me! LDK comes... LDK:I love you.... *Rips there shirts and sings I Feel Good* Man Dies... Back at camp...... Night Toa:You call that saving people??? UG:Yeah, they die happily! Night Toa:YOU HAD ENOUGH TIME TO SAVE HIM BY PULLING HIM OUT AND SENDING HIM BACK TO CAMP!!!! UG:Fine, I quit, you can work!!! UG leaves.... Night Toa:But I'm Naparu's assistant!!!! ST comes... ST:You still didn't pick a cookie, there's Krana White Chip, Green miru with black mold..... 5 hours later..... ST:Green bluey blackie green, Flashy Red..... Takes a cookie.... Night Toa: *Cough* *cough* This is Coconut Milk Chocolate!!!! I'm allergic to it!!!!!! ST:I weren't done!!! There's Super Flaming hot fudge.... Night Toa takes a taxi and leaves.... At Night Toa's hut.... Phone rings.... Night Toa:Hello? ST:There's also Super creamy chocolate chip..... Night Toa hangs up! Night Toa's computer:You got mail! Night Toa reads it:There's also Minty Peanut Butter.... Night Toa delates the e-mail.. instant messanger pops up:Also there's super fat cholestoral chocolate.... then door bell rings and T.V turns into Cookie Telling Machine..... Night Toa wakes up.... Night Toa:I'm going to see if Naparu has anything for me!! At Naparu's lab... Naparu:Sorry night toa, Hahli had trouble sleeping for weeks so I gave the disease to you! Night Toa:WHAT?????? END Will night toa ever get his sleep? Find out next chapter! -------------------- I am leaving for personal reasons. (i.e: Not enough time, got bored here, etc.)
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Oct 5 2003, 06:56 PM
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Conqueror of the Swarm! Group: Members Posts: 730 Joined: 9-December 02 Member No.: 3181
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Please PM me some ideas so I can edit this post with another chap.
-------------------- My Comedies: Here are a list of the comedies I'm most proud of or is currently in the works. |The New "Old School" Bionicle Comedy|Humans V.S. Mata-Nui (Inactive)|Invincibility Robots Animations (Inactive)|As A Co-Writter|Boring Life Of Toa with onua nuva fan (Inactive)|The Dumb Discoveries with Kewko (Inactive and many chapters are missing)|
NOTE: Inactive comedies are for reading purposes only (because they're so old), so please don't post in them. I hope someone likes them! *Kanavazk - Original Creator of the "Bionicle Picture Guessing Game"* |
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