I loved the last few chapters, they were awesome.

Hey, Scar; long time, no see. XD

Glad you liked 'em!

I have a question: Do I need to improve on anything? Cause, like, you're pretty much the only person who actuallys reads this, so I'm a little concerned about BU's wellbeing.

ooh... these recent chapters are good, Levious is beat by these new spiders, Levrok learns how to fire a bow blind, and Vuelo is a Nidhiki in thought to honor of a Toa





well, you could name them or reference to them without talking about their power, creation or location (talk about some in riddles maybe.)
ex. what is the element to this riddle:
I devour dragons, ruin kingdoms, and eat all flesh away. What am I? - Time

And congrats on the game and the Premier Membership, you deserve it.

Heh; just goes to show that you should never judge by looks or handicaps. =P
(BTW, I have new Xaeda pictures.)

Hm... Not bad, not bad... Only problem would be finding an appropiate place to put them. XD

Thanks!


So, thinking of what to do for the next chappy. I'll probably drop in on Dága again -- he gets way too many breaks. I might see what Kitheus is up to, though not completely sure about that...
Aaand, once again, I'm updating the Kovian and Vuelo storylines. Stay tuned!