Oh goodie, glad everyone thinks it improved a bit! ^^
QUOTE(Raia Svit-kona @ Aug 25 2008, 06:29 PM)
His hair go SWOOSH.
QUOTE(Seranikai @ Aug 29 2008, 08:23 AM)
Very high quality. You've obviously got the talent to do extremely well. However, I don't know if this was intentional or not, but his eye is the wrong shape. If it wasn't intentional, I'd suggest practising drawing eyes, as they can be difficult - if it was intentional, ignore that, because it gives him a slightly inhumane look, which suits him perfectly.
Though I need a lot of practice either way, I practice with eyes a lot. Dx Realistically speaking, the eye is off. But as this is also slightly manga based, then it is not since I can get away with oddly shaped eyes.
QUOTE(Takama:Pony Exterminator @ Aug 29 2008, 11:05 AM)
The only thing I'd recommend, if it's not too hard, is to take out the eye patch. It slightly ruins the feel IMO.
And what's that...thing he's wearing? O_o
I like the eyepatch, so Iím not removing it. True itís slightly storyline off, but who says he canít take it off and use is lazor beams that way? =P
And like Tarik said, itís a cloak.
QUOTE(-Googly Eyes- @ Aug 29 2008, 09:51 PM)
It's nice to see you fixed the stiffness of the bangs, though it'd be nice to see if you could establish a sense of form with the hair, since I imagine it is further back the further it is from the center of his head. Also, I think the neck is rather long. The shoulders, especially for this guy, should be a bit further up (the collar would probably be up to his ears). I also think there might be a bit too much of a highlight on his forehead.
Well, since it still has a hint of anime I didnít worry too much about the accuracy of the hair and made it however I thought would look good. The neck is a tad long, but after doing some studying with the original PS file, I donít think itís worth going back and fixing. Same goes for the other oddities, but thatís mainly because Iím too lazy to go back and fix any further. xD