QUOTE(Xander004 @ Jun 10 2010, 01:57 AM) *
QUOTE(bonesiii @ Jun 8 2010, 11:11 PM) *
As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:

Nektann’s Trial by Xander004

I see problems with this entry. Mostly grammar, a few minor story problems. Easily fixable.


I've edited my entry according to what was pointed out in the review, and I also reworded a few things that I felt needed to be done.


EDIT/UPDATE: Another mistake was found in my entry dealing with a few things (grammar/spelling). May I have permission to edit it.


Yes, you have permission to edit the story again.