I'm going to be writing a bionicle war story, called "The Toa Nuva War". I need one guest star in particular, but any others would be fine.
Heres what I need:
An exiled matoran who starts all the trouble.

Also, if you want to be a guest star, I need:
Your characters name
his/her personality
his/her mask
where he/she's from
what he/she's good at

this belongs in epics, but don't worry, i made the same mistake when i was new. its because it says STORY lines and theorys so i thought it was place for theorys and stories. this will get moved to epics

Hi, couldn't pass up a chance for stardom! If you want you can use me. I'd be a matoran with:
A clever mind but a bit arogant.
Pakari mask.
From Po-Koro.
Good at mining, climbing and planning.
Bad at stealth, being subtle and forvever clumsy.
About the name, you could make up a name or just use our forum name, like I would be Thrawn. Don't worry about this getting moved, it will still work in the epics.

if you need any other guest stars i could be it

name: Hasa (he's a he)
village: ta-koro
mask: miru
good traits: good at fighting, loyal, determend
bad traits: reckles, short tempered

I'm not sure, but this sounds like a short story to me, so off to Short Stories it goes!
Moving to Short Stories...

Thanks for the help, guys. I'll post the first part in a day or two.

I'll still need:
an exiled matoran who starts all the trouble. (from no village in particular)

i guess you could make Hasa that guy

Can I be in the story?

Sure, Tahu Flare, i'll do that.

I need guest stars!



Merry Christmas!

Sorry for doubleposting, but yes, protodermictoa, you can.

I need information on your character.

Name: Proto
Village: lives around the kini-nui
Attitude: Dosen't take threats seriously
Mask: it is Krana Vu but his not being controled.
Good at: jumping from tree to tree and running
Bad at : lifting heavy things

CCCOOOLLLL CHARACTER



P.S. Whoever wants to be a guest star can be one, but i need info about your character.

Thanks

Name: Seo
Mask: (Mask of Night vision. Don't know it's name). Maks color: Dark grey
Body color: Black
Arm color: Black
Leg color: Purple
Onu-Koran

Clever, decietful, yet cowardly when in danger. (He's evil)

Im gonna make Seo the bad guy.



I'm probably going to post the first part tomorrow. (Sunday)

oh can hasa have a copper miru

Sure (he's not going to be the bad guy after all.)

I'll post the first part soon.

Chapter 1 "The Dividing of the Villages"

Evening, in Ta-Koro....

Vakama was worried. He had just recieved word from a strange Matoran named Seo, who said that the villages were dividing against each other. There was a knock on the door. "Come in." It was Hasa.
"Turaga, we have lost contact with all the villages but Le-Koro." It was as Vakama had feared: there was soon to be a full-scale war.
"Where is Tahu?" Vakama asked.
"In the Guard-room, talking with Jala."
"Give this message to him." Vakama handed a piece of paper to Hasa.

Ko-Koro....

"I can't believe it!" Kopaka exclaimed, hurrying Seo out the door. "The villages are dividing? Impossible! How come that wicked-looking Matoran was the only one to know?"
Nuju mumbled something in jibberish. Matoro spoke up.
"Nuju says: Be patient. If there is a war, do not use your full powers, for they can destroy the island."
"Matoro!" Kopaka commanded, "Send Kopeke to Ga-Koro. Tell him to ask Gali to come here. She's the only one I can trust." Kopeke hurried off with the message.

And so the Toa divided into teams against each other: Tahu and Lewa, Onua and Pohatu, and Kopaka and Gali.

In Kini-Nui.....

Makuta sat on his dark throne, smiling wickedly. His young servant, Seo, had accomplished his task.
"Seo!" he commanded, "send to Cahdock and Gahdock, tell them to ready their swarms for battle."

Next Chapter: "Air vs Earth"

I just want to enter as Mata-nui, he's totally white, and he haves a silver hau on...

I need more info on Mata-Nui, Makuta.

How do you like the chapter?

QUOTE (hwoarang12 @ Dec 8 2002, 06:57 PM)

I need more info on Mata-Nui, Makuta. How do you like the chapter?

The chapter's nice.

Mata-nui dont haves a town, he's a wanderer. He is a great fighter, and haves the sword of light. Can he be the leader of the Matoran-army???

the chapter is good, very good...

Thanks, Makuta! Takua is going to be the leader, but Mata-Nui can be second. Can I cal him Mata?

I would like guest stars. If anyone wants to be one, list the following info:
Your characters name
His/her village
Whether its a he or she
His/her mask
Whether or not you will be offended if i have him/her die
His/her good traits
His/her bad traits

a better name? eeeeeeeeeeeehhh... Takua j.r? just kidding...

eeeeeehh... Taihatu?

name:notmin :Village:none
Attitude: cold unforiving
Mask:necotin (ni cut in) power life and death
Good at:helping and killing
Bad at: nothing
weapons:right hand dagger of death left hand stone of life
not a bady

Is that Taihatu?

If it's him i think : COOL!!!

wow cool character and i was just wondering if Hasa is going to be one of the heroes or a member of taiuta's fellowship

Takua, Taihatu and hasa... when they fuse they are Takhasa
... Tak-ha-sa
Sounds good...

Umm..Tahu Flare, that's priviledged info. But, whatever. Hasa is gonna be both. The members of Takua and Taihatu's fellowship ARE heroes.

I still would like guest stars. If anyone wants to be one, list the following info:
Your characters name
His/her village
Whether its a he or she
His/her mask
Whether or not you will be offended if i have him/her die
His/her good traits
His/her bad traits



Before I do the next one, I would like 2 more guest stars, 1 more Le-Koronan and 1 Onu-Koronan.

Name:Rathu
Village:Onu-koro
Gender: He
Mask: Purple KauKau
Offended: Yes I will be
Good Traits: Good at Firing Discs, Stealth, and following orders.
Bad Traits: Locating, Ambush, and preparation.
Arms+Torso Color: Black
Leg color: Purple

Cool. I still need a Le-Koronan.

I'm a heroooooooo... I'm a herooooo! chacha CHA!

hwoarang12! You are the best!


P.S.

when is the next part??? I'm so exited, can't wait... I want it now!

I'll post the next part this afternoon. Thanks for the ancouragement.

When is this afternoon?

(I live in holland and the times... they're different... here in holland it is 05:46 PM, where do you live???And what's the time there???)

I forgot about that. I live in Nebraska, (U.S.A) and its almost 1:15 pm. Just so you know, Taihatu won't appear in the story for a while, sorry! Anyway, here's the next chapter:

Chapter 2 "Air vs Earth"

Ta-Koro.....

Lewa Nuva and Tahu Nuva were hunched over a map of Le-wahi. They had just recieved word that Onua Nuva was marching underground with the Onu-Koronans to Le-Koro.
"Lewa, take your army and set up camp just beyond these trees." Tahu said, "that is probably where the Onu-Koronans will surface."
"Alright."

Underground, near Le-Wahi......

The Onu-Koronan army was marching to Le-Wahi
"Keep moving!" Onua said, "We're almost there."
"Oh, my pack is heavy!" groaned Taipu, walking beside Rathu, "Why do we have to carry all these weapons?"
"Because we're going to war with Le-Koro." explained Rathu.
"Why?"
"Taipu, your hopeless."

The Battle of Le-Wahi...........

"Alright, my good Le-Koronans," Lewa said, "soon we will be called upon to defend blessed singsong Le-Koro, I urge you, fight strong and don't give up!" Loud cheers came up from the Le-Koronan army.
The Onu-Koronan army was now assembled on the otherside of the valley. They were 3,000 strong. The Le-Koronans, 2,000.
The ranks were now drawn up against each other.
"CHARGE!" Lewa shouted.
The armies dashed against each other, it was the fiercest battle Le-Wahi had seen. Kahus soared through the sky, sending volley after volley of disks into the Onu-Koronan army. The tide of the battle was turned when Onepu cried, "Unleash the Ussal Cavalry!"
The Ussals drove the Le-Koroans back into the trees, leaving only Tamaru and Lewa fighting on.
All of a sudden, Kongu soared down from the sky, and jumped off his Kahu next to Tamaru.
"If you surrender now, We will spare your lives." Onua said.
"Never!" shouted Lewa. "Tamaru, Kongu! get back into the trees! I can handle Onua Nuva myself." The two toa nuva circled each other, waiting for the other to strike.
"You are foolish, Lewa, to think you can defeat me."
"We'll see about that!" Lewa dashed forward, spinning with his machetes. Onua blocked every blow, dissapeared into the ground, then reappeared on the other side of Lewa. Lewa was enraged.
"You will die, you earth dog!" But Onua moved first, ducking Lewa's blow, but giving him a dash with his chainsaws. Lewa recovered, and jumped forward slicing one of Onua's arms off. The Onu-Koronan army gasped. But Onua Nuva was not defeated, he jumped forward and pinned Lewa to the ground with one hand. But, all of a sudden, a tornado appeared and lifted Onua off Lewa. Lewa then jumped into the tornado and swirled off. His voice came back through the wind: "We will meet again, Toa of Earth."

Next Chapter: "The Fall of the Stone Lord"

Cool chapter! Onua Nuva: AAAAHH! I'm UNARMED!

LOL!!!

Can't wait for "The fall of the Stone Lord"

Ok, look, this topic obviously hasn't gotten anywhere. It's just spam and chatting. If you want to work out gust stars, you must do so via PM. Only post a thread when you're actually prepared to start.

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