Chapter 1
nerkall stood in complete darkness, two his left there was a glowing scepter, and then there was two red glowing eyes ran towards him and leaped. Nerkall woke up in his bed. Wiping the sweat off forhead as he grabbed his Kakama and put it on. He then left his dome shaped hut towards Turaga Onewa's home. He had a feelling that the dream he had was no ordanary dream.
He finaly reached the house of Turaga Onewa. He entered the house and there was Turaga Onewa which said,
"hello Nerkall, You have something to ask me?"
Nerkall sat on a stone stool and said,
"I had a strange dream."
Onewa gave Nerkall a puzzled look and sat down infront of him and said,
"Please tell me what happened in you in this dream?"
After Nerkall finished telling Onewa his story, Onewa said,
"It is as I feared, Vakama said that I should send the first person that had a dream like that should go to Ta-Koro and talk to him. Nerkall, go home and get your backpack and take provisions for the trip."
Nerkall stood up and said, "I will go there."

Nerkall left Turaga Onewa's house and headed home. On the way he met Sisa. Sisa had an Orange Miru, she said,
"Hay Nerkall, want to go on a date, I was thinking maybe the north ridge tonight and we could watch the stars?"
Nerkall said in a disapointed voice,
"Iam sorry I can't Onewa said I have to go to Ta-Koro, but I will be back sone, then we can watch the stars."
Sisa kissed him on the cheek and walked away.
Nerkall reached his house,grabbed a backpack and some food for the trip and left his house. He reached the gate and left Po-Koro.
Back in Po-Koro Sisa entered turaga Onewa's house and said,
" Why have you called me so sone I was just talking to Nerkall, when you called me after that I came as sone as possible?"
Onewa said, "Please sit down I know you and Nerkall have a bond, so you have to here what I must say."

Back in the desert. Nerkall thought of the storys Onewa told him about seven warriors named the Toa, and how they saved the island of Mata-nui 300 years ago...


So guys what do you think I will send the rest of the chapters later

This is an Epic...not a Theory.

It should be in epics.

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And just so you know, you need to pay attention to the "Mail Error" header atop this forum.

Moving to Epics...

{Ninjo}

Sorry guys it is my first time.

Chapter 2

Nerkall walked in the desert. The heat was horrid as always.
Suddenly there was a flash of light of in the distance, when Nerkall reached the spot were the light came from he saw something that confused him,a creature lay there in the sand. The creature was male (at least he thought it was male)It didn't have a mask like other matorans, and the face was different, there on its head was all these sort pieces of brown string.
It was getting dark so he decided to light a camp fire and wate till the creature awoke. The next morning Nerkall woke up from a bad dream to notics that the strange creature was not awake yet. He grabbed a nearby stick and prodded the creature in the chest. It gave a moan an sat up saying in a sleepy tone,
"O.k. I am awake already." It then looked at Nerkall and screamed. Nerkall couldn't understand a word the creature said, so he said,
"Uoy trih ot tahw ton od I!" (I do not want to hirt you!)
The creature stod there stearing at Nerkall, obviously not knowing what he said.
The creature made a stick figure in the sand and made the word HUMAN beside it. Nerkall looked at the pictograth but didn't know what he wrote down. so he drew a picture of him in the sand and in Matoran he wrote MATORAN, but the man didn't know what that said.
Frustrated, Nerkall made a hand single for the man to follow him, and he did so.

What is this suppose to be about?
Anyway, I like your story, hope it continues. What's the name for it? The Final Adventure?
Nar... There's gotta be a better name for that.

QUOTE (treetops matoran @ Jul 21 2003, 07:51 AM)

What is this suppose to be about? Anyway, I like your story, hope it continues. What's the name for it? The Final Adventure? Nar... There's gotta be a better name for that.

What do you think it should be?

Chapter 3

It was a long and quiet walk trough the desert, since the two couldn't understand each other.For no reason the tempurature was getting hotter and hotter, by the time they got to the tunnel entrince it was seirring hot.After an hour of walking in the lightstone lit tunnel they found Onu-Koro. The man was puzzled and dazed at the same time.
While walking in the market they passed a merhent selling lightstones.The man pulled out a ten dollar bill from his pocket, and said,
"How much will this get me?"
The merchent picked up the bill and looked at it in wonder.
Then he said to Nerkall,
"What did that thing say and what is this?"
Nerkall handed the merchant five widgets and put the lightstone in his backpack. Then handed the bill back to the man.After a wile they passed another merchent selling shinny round talismans. The man took a thick round devise from his pant pocket that had a long wire that ended in another very small devise. He picked up one of the talismans and placed it into the devise and pressed a button. He heard music.
He took the CD out of the device and looked at Nerkall, then pointed at the Talisman and then him. Nerkall talked to the merchant and gave three widgets to him and gave the talisman to the man.
They were about te leave when the cavern started shacking. Bits of stone fell from the ceilling. Nerkall and the man ran for the other tunnel. They reached the tunnel, then Nerkall jumped onto the back of a large crab and signeled to the man to get on the crab's back. Doing so the crab scuttled through the tunnel. The tunnel started to calapse they thought they would be stuck in this tunnel. Then they saw the light, but it was falling apart. The crab leapped and exited the tunnel just as it calapsed. They were In Ta-Koro, and they headed ro Vakama's house.

Chapter 4

Nerkall and the Man stood up and brushed the dirt of there faces. They then went in search of Vakama. They found him by the wall of history, talking to Turaga Nokama. Nerkall said to Vakama,
"Onewa sent me because I had a dream, and I found this creature in the desert."
Vakama talked to Nokama and to the man she said,
"Hello Leinad."
The man staired in awe and said,
"How do you know my name and how did I get here?"
I know you name because the stars told me it, but I do not know how you got here."
Leinad said as he took the CD out of his pocket,
"Who is are these people and how did you find this?"
Nokama said,
The people here are the Matorans, and that talisman is commonly found in the onu-koro mines."
Vakama said to Nerkall,
"That dream you had was real you were in Kini-nui, and you saw what is about to emerge from the darkness and you saw the only hope of Mata-Nui. You are now the cronicler Nerkall just like your great great grandfather Takua,
and you must stay with the human and help him retreive the staff and it's essences."
Vakama spoke to Nokama and she said,
"Leinad I know only one thing about your destiny, YOU must find the Staff of elements and YOU must find the six essences of elements and YOU must save Mata-Nui."
Leinad said,
"I am only 13! how can I save the world?"
Nokama said,
"YOU must for it is your destiny and the only way you can get home."
With a reluctant look on his face Leinad said,
"I will."
Vakama handed leinad a flat round stone with carvings on it and spoke, Nokama then translated,
"Take this talisman of rememdering, it will help you rememder what it true when you can't tell."
Leinad said,
"Where is this staff?"
Nokama said follow Vakama and I."
After an hour of walking up the volcano the crossed a wooden bridge and after about an hour, They reached Kini-Nui.

QUOTE (T-Hybrid @ Jul 20 2003, 09:36 PM)

This is an Epic...not a Theory. It should be in epics. *hits report button* And just so you know, you need to pay attention to the "Mail Error" header atop this forum.

I don't understand what you mean because this is in the epics forum.
And what mail error?

QUOTE (Pohatu_Nuva_31 @ Jul 22 2003, 07:34 PM)

QUOTE (T-Hybrid @ Jul 20 2003, 09:36 PM) This is an Epic...not a Theory. It should be in epics. *hits report button* And just so you know, you need to pay attention to the "Mail Error" header atop this forum. I don't understand what you mean because this is in the epics forum. And what mail error?

I accidentaly put it it thearys

QUOTE (leinad661 @ Jul 22 2003, 07:37 PM)

QUOTE (Pohatu_Nuva_31 @ Jul 22 2003, 07:34 PM) QUOTE (T-Hybrid @ Jul 20 2003, 09:36 PM) This is an Epic...not a Theory. It should be in epics. *hits report button* And just so you know, you need to pay attention to the "Mail Error" header atop this forum. I don't understand what you mean because this is in the epics forum. And what mail error? I accidentaly put it it thearys

Oh ok... what theories forum? I have never heard of that

QUOTE (Pohatu_Nuva_31 @ Jul 22 2003, 07:39 PM)

QUOTE (leinad661 @ Jul 22 2003, 07:37 PM) QUOTE (Pohatu_Nuva_31 @ Jul 22 2003, 07:34 PM) QUOTE (T-Hybrid @ Jul 20 2003, 09:36 PM) This is an Epic...not a Theory. It should be in epics. *hits report button* And just so you know, you need to pay attention to the "Mail Error" header atop this forum. I don't understand what you mean because this is in the epics forum. And what mail error? I accidentaly put it it thearys Oh ok... what theories forum? I have never heard of that

Do any of you like my story?

Chapter 5
Nokama said,
"Here is were you will find the Staff of the Elements.When you have it come to Ta-Koro and talk to Vakama. Nerkall take this" Vakama handed Nerkall a talisman. She then said,
"This will aloy you to talk to Leinad and you will both understand each other."
Leinad and Nerkall decended into Kini-Nui. The first chamber they entered was huge and was filled with rusted parts of large crab creatures.
They entered another room this one had a red glow in it, and Nerkall said to Leinad,
"This is Were the Toa fought Makuta, but we must go deeper."They entered another room with a huge hive in the middle and Nerkall said,
"This must be were the Bothrok emerged." They crept through another tunnel till they reached a huge room, That had a blue glowing in it and two large creatures suspended in mid-air in a ball of blue light, and Nerkall said,
"This is were the Bathrag sleep forever."They entered another room that was empty. The floor fell loose and they plummeted into the darkness.............



................Leinad woke up in comlete darkness and stumbled right into Nerkall.Then they noticed thet there was light, a dim gray light coming from infront of them. They walked up to the light and there was the staff, Ametal rod two meters long, on one end there was the hollow shape of a cube with one of the corners connecting to the staff and the other end looked like it fits into something.Then in the darkness was the sound of creatures. THey came towards the leinad but Nerkall and Leinad were teleported to Ka-Koro.

How can you make links in your signiture?