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BIONICLE: The Legend Imploded - Preview #7


TNTOS

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This is the final preview for my upcoming comedy, BIONICLE: The Legend Imploded, which is coming out tomorow, which is going to be awesome.

 

So here's the preview, from Chapter 6:

 

 

Just before Mata Nui could jump, however, a voice said, "I wouldn't do that if I were you, Mata Nui."

 

Mata Nui looked around until he spotted a familiar black-armored being standing on the other side of the pit. It was Teridax, who was leaning against the wall on the far side quite casually.

 

"Teridax," Mata Nui said, immediately raising his gun. "What are you doing here? How'd you know I'd be here?"

 

"It was easy," said Teridax. "My Rahkshi were but a distraction, the prod necessary to make you come down here and face me. By putting the golden mask down here, I gave you another reason to want to fight me, rather than run away as you have before."

 

"It was just a lucky guess, then," said Mata Nui. "Right?"

 

Teridax stomped his foot against the floor. "No, no, no! I planned it all and you fell for it! I'm right and you're wrong! Wrong, wrong, wrong, wrong, wrong!"

 

"Okay, okay, geez," said Mata Nui, holding his hands up. "Don't have a man, cow . . . wait, I don"t think I got that right."

 

"Anyway," said Teridax, suddenly regaining his composure. "If you want the mask, Mata Nui, you will have to fight me to get it."

 

"And if I don't?" said Mata Nui. "What if I just take the mask really fast and escape, before you can stop me?"

 

"You won't escape," said Teridax as he snapped his fingers.

 

From out of the tunnels came millions of Rahkshi. They blocked every exit, including the one behind Mata Nui. Mata Nui didn't doubt he could kill them all if he had to (or even if he didn"t have to), but with Teridax being here, it would be far more difficult.

 

"My Rahkshi will make sure you do not escape before we clash," said Teridax as he unsheathed something that looked like a sawed-off shot gun. "Let us do battle. The winner gets the golden mask. The loser is banished to the pit below."

 

Teridax pointed at the gaping hole that was opened below the suspended mask. Mata Nui still couldn't see the bottom of it, but he had no fears. After all, he was Mata Nui, the gun-toting, butt-kicking hero of this comedy. How could he, the main character, lose?

 

So Mata Nui said, "All right, then. Bring it on, Teridax. I don't need the golden armor to beat you."

 

"Then why are you and your friends trying to get it?" said Teridax.

 

"Because you better shut your mouth or I'm going to shut it for you!" Mata Nui said as he launched himself into the air.

 

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That's the end of the previews. Keep an eye on the Comedies forum tomorrow, Saturday, December 1st, where I will begin posting chapters of TLI on a weekly basis!

 

-TNTOS-

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