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Tifosi 92

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It's been a long-awaited plan of mine to go back and touch up my only existing epic, Search and Destroy. Finally, I've found the time to start making revisions. If you've read any of my work other than S&D, then you shouldn't expect much from it. The writing quality is much lower, and I've since adopted a higher standard in what I want to have posted here on BZP. As such, I'm going back and revising much of the epic, making some relatively big changes to the style of narration and description, hopefully to bump up the quality a notch. No changes to the plot will be made.

 

The revised Chapter 1 has been posted in the epic's topic. If you haven't read it before, now would probably be a good time to start. :P I'll keep you updated as each chapter is revised. When I'm done revising them all, maybe I'll finally be able to post the last chapter. *lol*

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Search and Destroy

 

If you're coming in here for the first time, please know that a review would be mush appreciated!

Small typing error there.

 

As much as I'd love to write a review I'm afraid I just can't. The maximum I could say will probably be 'It's a good story' and that's not much. Anyway I have read the first chapter and I think it's a great story so far. :)

 

I couldn't write to save my life, and I'm top set English at school. :P

 

~IceToa~

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Search and Destroy

 

If you're coming in here for the first time, please know that a review would be mush appreciated!

Small typing error there.

 

As much as I'd love to write a review I'm afraid I just can't. The maximum I could say will probably be 'It's a good story' and that's not much. Anyway I have read the first chapter and I think it's a great story so far. :)

 

I couldn't write to save my life, and I'm top set English at school. :P

 

~IceToa~

 

Fixed--thanks for pointing that out.

 

You can read the whole thing if you want, I don't mind, but if you wait for the revisions you'll (hopefully) get a much better story.

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I'll have to re-read the first chapter, then. Definitely let me know when the second [and more] is revised, and then I'll continue with my reviews [speaking of which, I need to reply to yours... I'll do that after I read the new Chapter 1].

 

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