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Monday A U A Updates


TNTOS

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Posted the 20th chapter of An Unlikely Alliance today. That means there are only ten chapters left. Getting closer and closer to the ending of the Shika Trilogy, it looks like.

 

In this chapter, Hajax, having been defeated and knocked unconscious earlier by Oggak, awakens in the jail cells of Koro Nui only to discover that he is bound in heavy metal chains. He also finds that Turaga Joha, the Toa Shika, Oggak, Jokao, and the Dark Hunter Kigin have all gathered down here to determine whether he really is Hajax, as Oggak claims he is.

 

Hajax at first plays stupid, then reveals himself as Hajax, reveals the true origin of Oggak and the Tuikas, then defeats Chimoy and Kigin and teleports away with Oggak as his captive. He no longer has to pretend to be Barilo anymore and decides to initiate his plan to put the Tuikas under his control.

 

-TNTOS-

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So, I thought of something. If you're telling us to read the chapter, why do you give us basically all the plot points?

 

--Tahu

 

The problem is that when I try to summarize a chapter, I try to write it in a way that is interesting yet accurate to the chapter itself, which unfortunately can lead to spoiling the entire thing, as you have shown me. For some reason or another I want there to be some continuity to these summaries, so that people reading them won't go "What?" when the summary makes the next plot twist look like it came out of nowhere, when in the chapter itself the twist makes perfect sense.

 

But I shouldn't do that. The point of a summary is to detail the basic points, not show every single little plot point. It ideally should have enough to interest the reader, but not tell him everything, so that way he will have to read the story itself to get it all. Here, for this chapter at least, it seems like I have failed in that regard.

 

So essentially, I have no excuse except I am terrible at writing concise and interesting chapter summaries :P . However, I'll try my best to make the next summary less spoilerific, so people reading this blog will have to read the chapter itself to get the whole thing, even if it makes the chapter sound less-than-complete or whatever.

 

Thanks for pointing that out, though. I wasn't sure if anyone had noticed that flaw of mine besides myself.

 

-TNTOS-

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