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Zarayna's Review Exchange


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Hello everyone. All writers, myself included, enjoy reviews. So now, I'm proposing an offer to anyone who cares: You give me a short story, epic chapter/short epic (for now) to review, or if you do not have that and still wish to participate, I will attempt to review other artwork you should list, be it drawing or MOCing. In exchange, you review one of the stories I list below. I can't promise that my reviews will be SSCC length, but I will make them a minimum of 100 words; in return I request that you leave a decent review for me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

My Stories

The below stories are listed in order of how badly I want them reviewed. Please note, these are only suggestions to the prospective reader: Although, for instance, one of the stories I want reviews for the most is Safe and Sound, should you desire to read and review We Wanted Those Infidels Dead! instead, I will not have a problem.

 

 

Safe and Sound

Posted: Aug 25 2012, 06:24.

Jaurius, son of the highly controversial senator Gementa, sets out to escort his sister home, in his heart hoping that he will only have to do that...

Song: Safe and Sound by Taylor Swift.

 

The Refugee

Posted: Nov 18 2012, 09:07 PM.

A boy flees from the enemy, but the enemy relents not in their inadvertent encircling of him.

 

Shredded Radiance

Posted: Oct 24 2012, 09:39 PM.

Templar fic: A traveler walks though the evening woods, his emblem and life alike in tatters.

 

Destiny's Scourge

Posted: Sep 05 2012, 03:48 PM.

In the capitol of the republic of Dinaru, Makuta is reminded startingly that he has not escape the grasp of Destiny.

 

We Wanted Those Infidels Dead!

Posted: Oct 21 2012, 09:22 PM.

Templar fic: A group of brigands settles down after a day of plundering, not realizing that a group of warriors have been observing their every move.

 

And should you wish me to review a longer work (an epic) I will gladly accept in return for reviews of this short epic of mine:

 

Survive

Review Topic

Posted: Jun 16th, 1:33 PM.

As the Toa/Dark Hunter war begins, a toa is called from a remote island to the legendary city of Metru Nui.

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I am tempted to take this offer, but might have to put it off until after the school year is over. Hope you get some takers; this is how I got to know some other authors back in the day, by reading and reviewing each other's work!

 

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:kaukau: I wrote a review on The Refugee. I'm sorry to conclude that for the most part the entire thing was the basic pitch you provided here, but just expanded with a lot of description. Don't worry, I had positive things to say, but seeing it so simply worded here...yeah, I just had to point that out.

 

(Also, it was longer than your story.)

 

Meanwhile, I have given Shredded Radiance a review, and I will get to Destiny's Scourge, because Chro's comment was pretty short.

 

In return, here are the two pieces I would like reviewed:

 

The Son Becomes the Father

A Tombstone Story

 

EDIT: I have now also reviewed Destiny's Scourge.

 

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