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Greg Farshtey's Flaw


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See if you can find how many times he uses 'even as' in his works. It makes me cringe whenever he uses it. It's like his signature saying.

 

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Like I said. Right a story without any editing whatsoever, without deliberately trying to avoid it, and you'd be surprised how often you end up using it.
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Eh, it's not really a flaw. I mean, it's no where near as bad as saying something like 'could of' instead of 'could have'. Or repeating different phrases. Like, beginning each sentence with 'The' over and over again.

 

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There is worse. My old cross country coach could not go five words without saying "ummmm" or "like". My teammates and I would have contests to see how many times she would say "ummmm" or "like".

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Like I said. Right a story without any editing whatsoever, without deliberately trying to avoid it, and you'd be surprised how often you end up using it.

I can tell that you didn't edit this post.

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Give us five minutes and we'll give you the world.

Can I borrow first? D:

 

Yeah, I can understand how he ends up using it frequently. Could be hard to avoid. :/

 

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