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I already told you my thoughts about this a while ago.

 

Though, I forgot to mention, the head looks a little small with all the buffness of the body. Maybe a custom one? If not, this is definitely better than Strakk, but I just noticed that.

I must do everything in my power to stop you.

 

Because it's too good D:

Is the use of Hockey armor inspired by my entry?

I already told you my thoughts about this a while ago.

 

Though, I forgot to mention, the head looks a little small with all the buffness of the body. Maybe a custom one? If not, this is definitely better than Strakk, but I just noticed that.

Well, he's got 5 heads wide on the shoulders. If I'm remembering correctly from my superhero drawing book, that's about right.

 

I must do everything in my power to stop you.

 

Because it's too good D:

=3

 

Is the use of Hockey armor inspired by my entry?

I don't think I've actually seen your entry.

-Laka

Frankly, I don't like the color scheme. :/

Frankly, I don't like the color scheme. :/

Would that be the colors or the way I put them together?

-Laka

Frankly, I don't like the color scheme. :/

Would that be the colors or the way I put them together?

-Laka

Couldn't say for sure (this is why I don't often review MOCs anymore >___>), but the yellow-black-white scheme just seems a bit off. There's the white thighs then the black and yellow shins then the white feet.

 

I'd need to see more angles to comment any further on it.

 

Also I'm tired.

Is the use of Hockey armor inspired by my entry?

It's a very common idea, you didn't invent it. Besides, I think Laka has used that hockey chest armour piece in the past already.

 

 

 

 

Is the use of Hockey armor inspired by my entry?

It's a very common idea, you didn't invent it. Besides, I think Laka has used that hockey chest armour piece in the past already.

This one. Wasn't original when I did it, either, and that was like three years ago.

 

Also, I swear, if somebody goes and revives that topic.....

Is the use of Hockey armor inspired by my entry?

It's a very common idea, you didn't invent it. Besides, I think Laka has used that hockey chest armour piece in the past already.

This one. Wasn't original when I did it, either, and that was like three years ago.

 

Also, I swear, if somebody goes and revives that topic.....

IT HAS BEWBSSSSSSS *zomg

 

Also I told you that the color layering sucks.

Why aren't those arms filled in? D=

BtB

Was your use of LEGO inspired by LEGO? 8O

Nice WIP thar!

Color Scheme wise, I like the white/black/yellow, but I just don't like the overall placement; I would recommend a bit of yellow on the torso.

The build is excellent; you made an excellent torso (love the shoulder armor). The main gripe I have is with the thighs. There are some unsightly gaps and the apparent technic holes and pins look unsightly. I would say add some smoothness in there (IMO ) Also, the only apparent black is in the arms and legs (but even there it's in the back); I would suggest you change that white metru torso armor on his lower torso to black. Right now it's all white.

While I wouldn't think of Certavus as yellow white and black, if you do a good job of pulling of a balance of the colors in the MoC I'm sure that the idea would grow on me. You've got a pretty impressive MoC here Laka; good luck in the contest!

~GBG~

Lower legs need fixing, switch the Piraka legs out for white/off-white ones and switch the 3L white bits to black. That way it'll match the shoulders/not look fugly.

Couldn't say for sure (this is why I don't often review MOCs anymore >___>), but the yellow-black-white scheme just seems a bit off. There's the white thighs then the black and yellow shins then the white feet.

 

I'd need to see more angles to comment any further on it.

 

Also I'm tired.

Oic. Wait until it's finished and then tell me if it looks better. I have to fix up the colors.

 

Why aren't those arms filled in? D=

 

BtB

I was lazy. They are now.

 

Was your use of LEGO inspired by LEGO? 8O

OBVIOUSLY 8O

 

Nice WIP thar!

 

Color Scheme wise, I like the white/black/yellow, but I just don't like the overall placement; I would recommend a bit of yellow on the torso.

 

The build is excellent; you made an excellent torso (love the shoulder armor). The main gripe I have is with the thighs. There are some unsightly gaps and the apparent technic holes and pins look unsightly. I would say add some smoothness in there (IMO ) Also, the only apparent black is in the arms and legs (but even there it's in the back); I would suggest you change that white metru torso armor on his lower torso to black. Right now it's all white.

 

While I wouldn't think of Certavus as yellow white and black, if you do a good job of pulling of a balance of the colors in the MoC I'm sure that the idea would grow on me. You've got a pretty impressive MoC here Laka; good luck in the contest!

 

~GBG~

Thighs will receive some attention before I post it.

 

The point was he's wearing white armor, which is why his torso armor is white. I'm trying to cut down the black in other places to compensate.

 

Yeah, the colors are the biggest problem right now. I'll definitely fix them up some before I post the final. Thanks.

Lower legs need fixing, switch the Piraka legs out for white/off-white ones and switch the 3L white bits to black. That way it'll match the shoulders/not look fugly.

Meh to the Piraka legs. Other armor might replace them.

-Laka

Darnit Laka, I'm a revamper, not competition!

 

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Seriously, this is awesomer than nearly every entry I've seen so far.