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Looks sweet.

You should totally keep the peg leg look.

Part of me says that the legs should be skinnier, and another part of me wants to see how it would look with those bulky legs. And I don't really care for the arm in it's current state, though maybe it'll look better with the wing.

 

But goodness gracious that torso & head <3

Love.

 

Could use some more trans light blue. The chest looks kind of along in all that black.

Keep the left (his right) leg a peg leg!

 

And maybe do a minimalist arm to match on the left/his right.

The amount of liftarms used bothers me. Also it looks a bit too bulky.

 

I'll add another vote for peg leg too.

The more I look at this, the more I want to build it for myself, so I can see where I'd take it.

 

I think that entirely different legs of similar bulk and are also pseudo-digit-grade would look better than the current ones because they don't have the same texture as the torso does. The legs just seem to be needlessly complex. I like the proportions of the legs and the arms, I just don't exactly care for the construction of them. You've got a pretty good idea going here, and the execution in the torso is top notch. The legs and arms seem to be behind the torso in terms of construction. It's like your transitioning from overly custom Neo-Toas to stuff that is considerably better. So that's good. I think you should take the idea that you currently have with the arms and legs and try to experiment with different pieces.

 

I think this is going to be a pretty solid creation if you keep it the way it is going to be. But I also think that it can be an awesome creation if you sit on it a little and experiment with some different piece configurations for the arms and the legs.

 

Edited so that it's at least a little bit more not idiotic sounding.

Looks sweet.

You should totally keep the peg leg look.

Thanks. I could make it a space pirate.

 

Part of me says that the legs should be skinnier, and another part of me wants to see how it would look with those bulky legs. And I don't really care for the arm in it's current state, though maybe it'll look better with the wing.

 

But goodness gracious that torso & head <3

Yah, I usually get carried away with bulk on my MOCs. The arm does looks better with the wing, and I'm currently trying to figure out a way to connect it. Thanks for you critique and complients.

 

Love.

 

Could use some more trans light blue. The chest looks kind of along in all that black.

Thank-you. The hard part is, I can't find much trans blue that matches Takadox's hue.

 

Keep the left (his right) leg a peg leg!

 

And maybe do a minimalist arm to match on the left/his right.

Maybe, maybe... Not sure if a minimalist arm would work, but I'll try.

 

The amount of liftarms used bothers me. Also it looks a bit too bulky.

 

I'll add another vote for peg leg too.

I suppose I can reduce the number of liftarms. Again, I usually put too much bulk on most of my MOCs. I'll try to remove it.

 

Whoa, 3 votes for a peg leg.

 

The more I look at this, the more I want to build it for myself, so I can see where I'd take it.

 

I think that entirely different legs of similar bulk and are also pseudo-digit-grade would look better than the current ones because they don't have the same texture as the torso does. The legs just seem to be needlessly complex. I like the proportions of the legs and the arms, I just don't exactly care for the construction of them. You've got a pretty good idea going here, and the execution in the torso is top notch. The legs and arms seem to be behind the torso in terms of construction. It's like your transitioning from overly custom Neo-Toas to stuff that is considerably better. So that's good. I think you should take the idea that you currently have with the arms and legs and try to experiment with different pieces.

 

I think this is going to be a pretty solid creation if you keep it the way it is going to be. But I also think that it can be an awesome creation if you sit on it a little and experiment with some different piece configurations for the arms and the legs.

 

Edited so that it's at least a little bit more not idiotic sounding.

I spent much more time on the torso than the legs, but hopefully everyone comments will help me. So now I guess I should make the legs look less cluttered and more smooth in some areas. Thanks for a second critique!