Zatano

Excellent moc Oblivion,your style has gotten a lot more refined since I last seen your stuff.I like the head a lot,it really makes the whole gila monster/snake thing work.The back is another thing I am really fond of,particularly the roundness of the shoulders/upperback really appeals to me.I think you did well on giving Gila Monstrosity an organic feel,so well done.I wasn't sure how I felt about the proportions at first,but I ended up really liking the unique look it gives the moc.Good luck in the contest,I bet you'll do really well!

That is an impressive moc! The smooth flow and general porpotions of the moc make it look like a realustic character,rather than an assembly of parts (I hope I'm making sense).The layering of the colors is also superb.The hat is very well done,it definitely give it the feel you were looking for.The desciption was definitely fun and has as much personality as the moc itself.Even if I was overly picky I don't think I could find anything to criticize about this moc to be honest,well done!

This is one of the best revamps of Breeze I have seen,great job.The part usage is very clever.I also like how it stays very true to the sets original feel,yet takes it to another level.Aside from the lack of armor/lime parts in the back I have no complaints.Keep it up!

Thanks,that is a Pakari Nuva on the chest.I definitely plan to swap those tubes out for black sometime.I tried adding bits of silver,personally I thought it detracted from the feel of the MOC (I probably just wasn't doing it right though).The lower arms are one area of the MOC I was experimenting with,it didn't come out as well as I hoped.Your definitely right about it needing fixed.Thanks again Sumiki.

I was talking about the clear one,I have a rather nasty habit of referring to it as white. Really,I'll defintely check BrickLink.That has always been my "dream mask" for this MOC.Thanks again,you have been very helpful.

Ok,yeah I can see that.I think I'll try and get a white kaukau or kakama,probably a kakama.Thanks!

Thank you! I do wish I could switch the tubes for black,but alas I do not have any,nor do I have the means of purchasing any right now (ok that last part is not entirely true,I'm just trying to save money).I don't have much HF,but I am sure I could do something for that.Thanks again.

Thanks a lot! I Personally I like the shoulders like that,but that's just me. To be honest,I was originally going to take the moc in a different direction,which involved gear.The only reason those gears are still there is a mix of oversight and laziness on my part.I would love to swap the grey for black,but I don't have any.White,to me seemed out of place (made my already shaky color layering worse).Thanks,the tubing is one of my favorite parts of this moc.I'll might get a picture up without the sword,thanks again. Thanks man.Personally,I haven't found a mask that fits the feel I am looking for,that fits the colors (though I might go back to a black miru,which is what I used to use for him).The color layering,to me is my foremost problem with this moc,something I hope to fix in the future.Thanks agian for all the comments and great advice!

First I will say this is a very good MOC overall.The build is very suiting of him.The dark colors really do give him a nice look,even if you had to paint some parts to get it.My only complaint personally is that I'd perfer to see custom work on the upper arms.The parts your using now seem I a bit out of place to me,custom work,done right would lend a very nice flow to the moc.(Keep in mind though,that complaint is mostly a stylistic thing.I perfer for a MOC to have such a flow,that you barely notice the parts that make the model,thus making the MOC it's self seem more like a more solid model.)Overall this is a truly good work and I hope to see more from you.

I would also love the see that pulled off. :biggrin:Good job on this moc!The colors mesh well (though it wouldn't hurt to even out the color scheme) and the armor is very solid.I see a lot of interesting part usage here,keep trying new things!

This is the latest version of my self moc Zatano,originally conceptionalized as a Toa of Energy.http://www.brickshel...aleForm/025.jpghttp://www.brickshel...aleForm/027.jpghttp://www.brickshel...aleForm/031.jpghttp://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/ToaHikari/ZatanoFinaleForm/041.jpghttp://www.brickshel...aleForm/039.jpghttp://www.brickshel...aleForm/043.jpgYour feedback is greatly appreciated.

I'm back after a long time off.I have been really busy with studying for college(among other things).I haven't had much time to make MOCs,but I've got a couple to show.First up is Nightmare,one of my best MOCs(very,very loosely inspired by shockwave from the latest transformer movie).http://www.brickshel...ghtmare/010.jpghttp://www.brickshel...ghtmare/045.jpghttp://www.brickshel...y.cgi?i=5376653http://www.brickshel...ghtmare/011.jpghttp://www.brickshel...ghtmare/043.jpgYour comments and criticism are appreciated.

I must say,you have gotten even better. Chaos Dragon:Excellent work here,the whole model is great.I do have to say the wings in particular are brilliant.Terra Tank:Great work,the orange works well with the grey.Scavenge:I really love the look of this one,very creative,smooth and all around awesome.It would make a really cute pet robot.Deity of the Temple:Again really well constructed,very creepy.I like the touch of orange inside the ribcage,really makes it seem like it's burning from the inside out.Aperture Science "Testing Assistant":This one is great as well,the feet are really impressive. I could go on,but I am begining to feel like a broken record.As always great work,keep on MOCing.