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  1. IC: Wither/ Hallways Wither was aimlessly walking through the hallways of the school. The past few weeks everyone seemed to walk, speak and do other activities in a very slow manner. She sighed. When she had just joined the school as an unexperienced kraata, everything had seemed to be so lively. OOC: Wither is open for interaction
  2. Okay, no probs. Thank you for approving her. I'll get started in a few days
  3. Is there a way to notify Wyrd about my entry? I'm waiting for two weeks now
  4. Okay so maybe I'll just start with one character: Name: Wither Variation: Brown armor, tan kraata, power of fragmentation Level: 2 (currently). Gender: female Gear: Sharpened teeth; a chain (contained within her back just under her kraata’s tail) to strangle opponents if needed; a tan cloak, with hidden pockets which are filled with a total of 60 little throwing knifes. Note: these knifes are not lethal, unless the target is a kraata, due to it being small and soft; a little flask in another pocket, filled with a temporarily paralizing poison to tip her knifes in; a simple sword. Appearance: She wears a tan cloak to hide her personal belongings in. She has sharpened her teeth to hunt as a true rahi predator if needed. She has customized her armor with dark brown paint so that her armor looks like it’s covered with cracks Personality: Competative, sinister, bossy, ambitious. Bio: Wither started out life just as pretty much any other rahk. But when she got her weapons of choice, she soon started performing random ambushes on her brethren, just for the sake of practicing assassinations, though she often left her victims with just a few cuts and bruises. Nowadays she is looking for people to start alliances with, to use in future assignments, maybe even to really befriend
  5. Two people, uncluding myself, are trying to join, and the rest I dunno
  6. Wouldn't that hole in his casing be rather painful? You say its letting in light, and kraata aren't especially fond of that stuff. Description of his powers is also going to have to change. While the "creating small holes" thing isn't too far off what Molecular Disruption could do at that stage, manipulating density is its own power completely separate. I know, and as I already said in a previous quote, I am not very familiar with all 42-flavors of kraata, let alone the different levels of their power. I thought that people made up the powers, sorry for that. If she was going to imitate others, wouldn't Chameleon be a better choice of power? I suppose you could do it with Adaption, but it just seems easier to use a power designed for changing your appearance. I know, so I have to change that too. I'm still going with adaption though. Nothing wrong with this one, Approved Yay ^^ Who's she actually hiring herself out as an assassin/thief/spy to? She's hiring herself to other Corpus Rahkshi, and if the makuta might need her help she'd do it for free. By the way is the power with this one good or did I mess up again? If his intelligence is that low, why is he even at Corpus Rahkshi? I don't know. If its doesn't suit you, I could tune his intelligence up but keep his incapability to speak, and give him the manners that fit to a bestial rahkshi. And is the power ok or did I get that wrong too? Going to have to bring up the power levels again, because level 2 laser vision can only create blinding beams by focusing light. Got it. So, in the end, do you want me to edit them and then reupload them so that they can all qualify?
  7. Pfew, glad I'm not the only one who has made mistakes in the beginning, I was honestly a bit worried about it. I will of course make my characters interact with others, though I'm probably first going to observe a bit more how everything goes and to get an idea of the current events going on, and then let them loose XD Of course after my characters are approved
  8. Sorry, I only joined yesterday so everything is a little new here, my apologies for that. All of this I wrote down in a word document first, since my laptop has a bad habit of turning itself off for no apparent reason. And since I am still not very familiar with all 42 "flavours" of rahkshi, I decided to note the kraata of the characters next to them to learn them out of my head
  9. Oops, sorry. I thought some people just made up abilities that fit to their powers. I'll go check it out. But for the rest, are my characters good to go?
  10. Oh, great, so now apparently I've named a rahk after a rahi pet. Curious how Claw will react when he finds out
  11. Her are some new characters I want to introduce. If these get approved, I'll probably come with more, but first I want to know if there are some things I must change to my future characters and the ones listed below Name: Claw Variation: Light blue armor, gold reddish kraata, power of inorganic Molecular Disruption Level: 2 (currently). So far, he’s able to create small holes and manipulate the density of weak materials so he can pass through them (the original density of the material can’t be any thicker than wood for Claw to be able to use this ability) Gender: Male Gear: A spade shaped staff/ spear, with two little pockets tied to it; a small hip bag, to collect seeds, books and other things in; a set of pencils; a plush Appearance: Light blue armor, with a gash across his left arm, and a hole in the kraata containment part of his armor, which sometimes lets light shine through. Another distinctive aspect are his claws and feet: They’re way sharper than usual rahkshi feet and clwas (hence his name). He is also a bit smaller than your average rahkshi Personality: Slightly depressed, lonesome, righteous, creative, tactful unless angry, cropping up bad feelings, bad at being social, curious Bio: Claw didn’t experience his first time in his armor as others did. He got attacked by another rahkshi in his room, from who he received a huge gash across most of his lower left arm, and a hole the size of a decent apple in his containment chamber on his back. Because of this being his first experience with another rahkshi, Claw became untrusting towards others of his kind. Soon he started to use as much of his time reading books as he could, and used several spots on Chirox Causeway to read them. He also became fascinated by the Porters, because of their peaceful nature and affection for flowers. And so one of his habits became collecting flowers for the Fohrok. After experiencing the makuta saving him from several attacks by his other rahkshi brethren, who had the bad habit to pick on the weaklings, Claw became convinced that the Makuta were the forces of good. Still, that didn’t mean he trusted all of the brotherhood members. In fact, he was scared of them, but the fact that they were forces of shadow and also his creators made him stay in school. Because the rahkshi bullies often chased him down and picked a fight with him, he developed the habit to sharpen his claws on rock, to scare off his opponents by scratching them and then quickly running (or flying) away. At the day he chose his name, Claw, he met with a female rahkshi named “Glow”, from whom he knew she was also a victim of the bullies, but often fought back. A few days later they became friends. Name: Glow Variation: Black and purple armor, bright yellow kraata, power of adaption Level: 2 (currently). In this level she’s able to immitate other rahk’s voices and change eyecolor Gender: Female Gear: A pair of extended claw-gloves; a pair of arm guards; a set of daggers; a cloak, and a piece of cloth hanging from her waist, both colored dark purple. Appearance: Although her natural colorscheme is black with purple, she has painted her shoulder armor in white. Her eyes glow brighter than with usual rahkshi. The spikes on her back are short and thick, and branch off into several smaller spikes. A white stripe painted over her forehead Personality: Righteous, fierce, friendly and moral. Bio: Her origin went just as with many other Corpus Rahkshi, but later she got bullied for her glowing eyes. Most bullying parties quickly regretted that though, because as soon as she had picked her weapons, a set of daggers, she went on a rampage of paybacks, leaving almost every bully injured. She later met up with Claw and became friends with the lonesome rahkshi. Name: Edgewalker Variation: Silver armor, lemon metallic kraata, power of Chain Lightning Level: 2 (currently). Currently able to use his power to deal little shocks. Used to control his grapple chains Gender: genderless (though referred to as male) Gear: Grapple chains hidden in tubes within his arms. Appearance: He has painted most of his armor black. He engineered a tube in both of his lower arms to contain his grapple chains in. He shortenend the spikes on his back. He’s also way more muscular than most rahk Personality: Agressive, competitive, strong, fierce, treacherous and mischievious, quiet when necessary Bio: Simply put, Edgewalker got his name from his sneaky habit and his ability to maintain balance on surfaces as wide as the edge of a sheet of paper. He quickly turned out to be a skilled and competitive hunter, making him a threat to whoever his target is. He quickly became popular under the newer Corpus Rahkshi, and formed his group of bullies, who picked on the lonelier and weaker rahkshi. But later he disbanded from the group and dedicated as much of his time to training. Still, he has kept his vile nature. Name: Wither Variation: Brown armor, tan kraata, power of fragmentation Level: 2 (currently). For now wither is only able to create holes not bigger than a rahk’s head. Gender: female Gear: Sharpened teeth; a chain (contained within her back just under her kraata’s tail) to strangle opponents if needed; a tan cloak, with hidden pockets which are filled with a total of 60 little throwing knifes. Note: these knifes are not lethal, unless the target is a kraata, due to it being small and soft; a little flask in another pocket, filled with a temporarily paralizing poison to tip her knifes in; a simple sword. Appearance: She wears a tan cloak to hide her personal belongings in. She has sharpened her teeth to hunt as a true rahi predator if needed. She has customized her armor with dark brown paint so that her armor looks like it’s covered with cracks Personality: Competative, quiet, loyal, ambitious. Bio: Wither started out life just as pretty much any other rahk. But when she got her weapons of choice, she soon started performing random ambushes on her brethren, just for the sake of practicing assassinations, though she often left her victims with just a few cuts and bruises. After a month she made herself available as an assassin, thief and spy for hire, taking every bid as long as it was high enough and the target interesting enough. She is always loyal to the makuta, and will do anything they ask from her without asking for a payment Name: Predator Variation: Blue and green armor, bright red kraata, power of teleportation Level: 2 (currently). He isn’t able to teleport any distance that is farther than 5 metres (5 yards) from his original position. His teleportation ability also costs him twice as much energy as a flying trip of 20 minutes. Gender: Male Gear: A light axe that is good for both throwing and close-up combat Appearance: His spikes are very shortened, to give him more manouvrability. he also has a huge bleached mark on his head, because of an accident that made some accid drop on his head Personality: Brutal, agressive, loyal. Predator is what you would call a true trained hellhound. Though certainly not competative, he does whatever task that others demand of him, as long as it has been given by a person of higher rank (higher level don’t count for him) or level of respect, and involves hunting and killing. Bio: Once again a normal origin. But because of a malfunctioning part in his brain, he remained more like a normal rahkshi in terms of personality, and intelligence, than the other Corpus Rahkshi. This led to him not being able to speak, and being just a bit smarter than a loyal dog. Both Wither and Edgewalker got a liking for him, but after the latter quit his bullying habit, he became almost befriended with Wither, and sometimes joined her on her missions. His name was chosen by the makuta themselves. Name: Floor Variation: Red and orange armor, lemon metallic kraata, power of laser vision Level: 2 (currently). At the moment they are only capable of beaming rays not further than 6 metres (6 yards) with a maximum heat of 85 degrees celsius (358 degrees kelvin, or 185 degrees fahrenheit) Gender: Genderless, is whatever they feel like Gear: A quite big rectangular shield, and a double edged sword Appearance: Floor has nothing modified about their armor, simply because almost every Corpus Rahkshi has modified something about themselves, and they want to stand out by not doing anything like that Personality: Lighthearted, teasing, friendly, caring and moral. They have the habit of teasing other rahkshi by posing as their opposite gender and flirt with them (they won’t go any further than that, it’s just a weird habit that is pretty awkward to humans XD). They don’t have faith in the Makuta, and despise their cruel and violent ways. Bio: Floor is really just a simple rahkshi, nothing special has happened in their life. Although they have befriended Glow at some point, who has thaught them to fight if they’d need to. They plan to either escape the school, or rebel against it. For some kind of reason they made a promise that only then they will choose a definitive gender. May I add to that that Claw's claws are modified to retract, so he wouldn't cut everything up he picked up?
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