A few criticisms.First, whilst looking at it, I was unable to tell if it was for a TBRPG or a videogame of sorts, and the layout seemed both sparse and cluttered at the same time. I realise that this is a very old and outdated version, but I must ask if it's changed much in the fifteen months since you came up with it. If the idea is to help newbies make a game, this, I feel, would not work well from the incarnation I just read. I love the concept, and I think you're on to something very cool and nice, but it has to be cleaner and clearer before anyone can use it.I also noticed some minor spelling mistakes.That being said, once more, I think you have an awesome concept. Just stick with it. Can I get a glimpse at the newer version?