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  1. Oh wow, this looks nice. I really like that art style.Looks like I'll be enjoying this series as it goes on.Welcome back to comic making!-V-
  2. The Venom

    Corruption

    Huh. That last comic was... Interesting. Gavla's appearance was definitely far from expected.I appreciate the fact you're doing plot-driven comics, Terra! The style reminds me of my first comics.Since it seems you're looking to changing some things in your next season, I would recommend working on the text.I suggest making it a bit smaller so it fits in the panels more easily, and make sure none of it gets cut off from the panels and that it doesn't blend in with the backgrounds. This will make your story-telling a lot easier for yourself and the readers. Trust me.Good work overall.-V-
  3. Make that, check out V.3 every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday for updates!

  4. Lol, nice new comic! Love the Dark Knight references.That was a pretty humorous villain-backstory. Wondering who the mysterious character at the end could be..-V-
  5. The Venom

    Topic Closed

    I like the concept of this series. I actually can't recall seeing this concept done before,where the series revolves around a matoran who's had his "topic closed".You have a really great start, the backgrounds look decent enough to fair well with the sprites (Glad you're not using Chimoru like 90% of the forum ), and those speech bubbles are really well done. I like the humor in this as well. It's a nice change from the usual stuff other newbies bring in.Great job on these, so far. They're looking really spiffy.-V-
  6. Oh god. It's him.Run Blade. Run before it's too late.Run.Also, loved that last panel.Great comic, Kahi.-V-
  7. The Venom

    ~V.3~

    @Meso: Yup, one thing I'd love to work on is character development.I'm trying my best to keep that up without the characters being overshadowed by the plot.@Eljay: Sooner than you think! Camoflauge is a natural ability of symbiotes.I never shed too much light on that before, or other symbiote abilities, so I atleast want to do that for the rest of the comics.And lol, you and your team are going to play a pretty decent role for the rest of this season.@Chath: Something else I also didn't really shed light on, actually! Hybrid can be said to be Massacre's biological uncle. The symbiotes that form Hybrid are siblings with Dona, so of course, I have to play with that fact. I'll be working on the symbiote origins much better when I get back to work on the Reimagined Comics.Now, another new comic is here!Comic 259: May the Test BeginSo the comics have been updated pretty irregularly this week.This is because I was gone for the past weekend, but I still wanted to update.And I also wanted to announce that I'll be changing the schedule of new comics.V.3 will now be updated three times a week, every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday.Enjoy the new comic!-V-
  8. The Venom

    ~V.3~

    @Chath: Young people are crazy, man. And lol.@Meso: Of course I had to go back to the symbiotes at some point soon.And yeah, the next few comics will actually set this series forward in a more interesting direction.The show hasn't even started yet.Now for a surprise! A new comic today!Comic 258: Bare TeethEnjoy!-V-
  9. The Venom

    ~V.3~

    Thanks, guys!Some changes will be made very soon regarding updates to V.3.I'll be posting details on that sometime later.For now, here's the next comic!Comic 257: Staying Out of Sight-V-
  10. The Venom

    ~V.3~

    @Chath: You could say that. XP@Kahi: Lol, I really need to take a look at that comic sometime.I haven't been reading too many comic books lately... @_@ Strange.Time for the next comic!Comic 256: A Short-Lived BattleEnjoy!-V-
  11. The Venom

    Corruption

    I see this series has potential.While I'm not a big fan of the kit choice (almost everyone uses Chimoru nowadays =P), your graphic style isn't too bad.You have some decent looking backgrounds that do alright with the sprites, and it looks like you're doing okay with GIMP effects. The humor isn't too bad either. Kinda random, but it still works.This is a pretty good start for you, and I'll be looking here to see how you do through time. =D-V-
  12. Nice punchline at the end, Kahi. That actually got a nice chuckle out of me.And lol Miraka's attitude change.Looks like I have a bit of catching up to do, with the series being revived and all. @_@-V-
  13. Ah man. The good old days of expanding RZMIK.Great work, dude. I'm not a big fan of how Jaller's mask turned out, but everything else looks fine to me.I really like how Matoro's mask looks. Great job on that.Also, Mata Prime, an RZ topic was started a while back here.Don't post in it, though. It's dead.Maybe with a significant rise in interest for the RZ kit, a new topic will be started sometime.-V-
  14. Do it man.Do it.For Laze.Also, nice job on those effects. Very clean.-V-
  15. The Venom

    ~V.3~

    Thanks guys! And of course, I have a new comic today.Comic 255: Now It's Serious BusinessEnjoy!-V-
  16. Awww heck yeah. That Venom minifig, dude.It's finally here after all these years of wanting one. @_@(And lol yes. Just. Yes. J. Jonah Jameson)I also really like that Beetle minifig on Marvel's end.Spidey looks alright, but they really should've given him a red torso with blue printing like before. =/I'm lovin' the Arkham City and TDKR based minifigs on DC's end, too.Dat Batman. Dat Bane. And woohoo for Red Robin.-V-
  17. The Venom

    ~V.3~

    @Eljay: Yup, it's very important that this was established. It becomes significant later on in the series. Thanks!@Meso: Thanks! In this portion of the season, I'm trying to make the comics in a way that you don't exactly have to worry about back-tracking if you're just starting to follow the series by giving brief explanations here and there. This starts with Comic 250, in which you're featured.@Bio: Thank you! I'll try not to disappoint.@Kahi: Lol, yup. In my version of the comic land, Hapori Tohu shares his power with all of the comic makers in order for them to run their studios. As I mentioned above, this becomes very significant later on. And oh god. I'm never giving Deadpool a symbiote. XPAlright, well with BZP being down yesterday, I couldn't properly update the topic.But obviously, now I can! With a new comic.Comic 254: Business SucksStick around for the next comic coming soon!For now, Enjoy!-V-
  18. Check out V.3 every Tuesday and Friday for a new comic!

  19. The Venom

    ~V.3~

    Lol thanks guys. New comic is here!Comic 253: Trash TalkEnjoy!-V-
  20. Hmm. That hissing doesn't sound too good for Laze...Great plot progression. Truly looking forward to what happens next.-V-
  21. Oh, man, trust me. If it wasn't for that deadline, I would've put more depth into those parts.So yeah, I won't deny that it may look rushed. Cuz kinda it was. =PI'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Thank you very much for your feedback.-V-
  22. The Venom

    ~V.3~

    Thanks guys. I definitely wanted to give Spidey a biggerrole for the rest of the series right now for reasons you stated, Chath.I think I could do much more with his character. He deserves it. I loved that part so much. Thanks! I redesigned him the best I could to represent his new costume in the new movie.Doing that in RZ of course has some complications, but yeah.The backgrounds are partially my work, and partially ripped from an old SNES video game.I'll be citing everything when I finish the series.So I've decided on a schedule for new comics. I will update at least twice a week: Tuesdays and Fridays.I may or may not update more than twice a week time to time for special/random occasions. XPSo since today is Friday...Comic 252: Traffic JamEnjoy!-V-
  23. In the podcast, we looked at the comic as what it was- a joke entry.It's not a well hidden secret that it's a joke entry,and I know enough background information to even say a portion of the votes were riggedbecause people think its funny to get a comic like that into the finals.That's shameful. Perhaps not by fact, but by my opinion, it sure well is.And you of anybody shouldn't act like you don't know what I'm talking about, Superkid.If you and the others want to keep defending it so stronglyby trying to turn the tables against the offense, then fine.I'm sure you love the laugh you get from it.-V-
  24. I would kindly agree with you if the comic wasn't purposely made to look terrible as a joke-entry.That's why I don't think it deserved any more votes than the other entries,which were entered as actual entries, with effort actually put into them to make a good comic.Personally, it's not a huge deal to me. I'm not one to cry about it.But that doesn't make it any less shameful in my eyes. =/-V-
  25. I agree.Congratulations to the winners!I strongly concur.Congrats to first and third place.You deserved it.-V-
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