Grandmaster Lehvorak
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It might be a problem because you got to appeal to the audience of today. It is because you need to sell it to both old and new audiences. In the business world it is all about profit. Lego might have to work hard on getting the attention of new audiences out there aside from pleasing us old fans if they want to benefit. Lehvorak
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Now this is pretty cool! I really like how this is designed and the color scheme is quite interesting too. You did a good job on this, well done! Keep up with these Lego/bionicle designing skills.Lehvorak
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Well this is interesting that it is a form of memorial... And side note: why are people writing depressing stories... Anyways, at first I was a little confused on what was going on until the very end. Also, very interesting use of grammar. I'm kinda confused are they trying to make something for Matoro for his memorial?Lehvorak
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What made BZP a great community?
Grandmaster Lehvorak replied to Etcetere's topic in General Discussion
I believe what made us a great community is our determination and interest in Bionicle. Despite us separating in different categories in this society, we all still have something in common which is liking Bionicle at least. There has been a lot of sharing of new ideas and what is great about this place is it shaped our character and made us the very people of today. So yes, I agree it is the users that made this community great. It is all in the character of a person hehehe! Lehvorak -
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This was a pretty interesting story, it looked like inner conflict was occurring at first. There are also some words that can be reworded but they are just minor things, and this is a pretty interesting story for time fracturing. It captured me and got me into the story. Keep up the good work.Lehvorak
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It has been a while since I last spoken with you, how have you been Taka? Still drawing and making stories? haha!
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Interesting so he got injured and was sent somewhere... is there going to be a continuation of this because leaving a cliffhanger like that requires a sequel y'know? There were also some things that could be re-worded, but not too much to worries because I was caught up in the story, which is a good thing! Lehvorak
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Hmmm This sentence: This can be fixed by changing it to: "The adaptive armor he wore revamped his mask completely, which gave him a new visor that functioned as sunglasses. With this new mask, it helped shielded him from the scorching sun." There are more corrections that can be made to several more of the sentences. Make sure you read aloud before you submit it in, and also you can check spelling errors using the spell check on MS Word if you have that, if not you can use the G Docs. The story was kinda interesting though, good job on it. Lehvorak
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Apparently people keep writing depressing stuff here on the short stories for some reason... have no idea why but they keep showing up. The story is pretty uhhh short It is interesting how he kinda sacrificed himself at the end, I'm surprised she didn't go back to that seabed to make him a gravestone. Good job on the story, just some minor errors, but no biggy!Lehvorak
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This actually looks pretty interesting, I like the color scheme! It looks like something you would buy from the store! Good job!Lehvorak
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Interesting story, it kinda took me a while to figure out who the creature the story was based upon, but I remember! It has been a long time since I last heard of that creature. It was interesting, but something about the beginning needs to be fixed because it didn't really hook me into the story until I got into the middle. Lehvorak
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It isn't too hard to work on 2 series'... I mean the person that wrote both the light novel series of Sword Art Online and Accel World wrote those series almost the same time, the only problem that might hit him is writer's block which is what all authors dread. I say it is up to what the writer is willing to do and also what he is being paid to do. Lehvorak
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Well, it is good to always correct your work . I wasn't really paying too much attention of the grammar, because I was trying to understand what was happening in the story. Lehvorak
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Interesting and sorta depressing, is there a continuation? At least I get the idea he lost his memories and is looking for help. Also, I like this style of writing, kinda reminds me of a light novel. Lehvorak
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What BZPower Members Have You Met?
Grandmaster Lehvorak replied to Meiko's topic in General Discussion
WhispersAngels - I remember meeting him in Borders bookstore back in the day when that store was around before it went bankrupt. We decided to meet up there and I spotted him directly when he entered the building, for some reason my gut feeling told me the person that just came in was him so I asked if he was WhisperAngels and I was right on the money. Lehvorak -
What Are You Listening To At This Very Moment?
Grandmaster Lehvorak replied to Nescent's topic in Completely Off Topic
"No, Thank You!" - Yoko Hikasa (Hokago Tea Time) Lehvorak -
I have no idea if this is the right topic for this forum since I noticed many new forums here in BZPower now... Well, my question is, did you guys notice a little inconsistency between the homepage and the forums itself? It has been bothering me ever since the forums went online again back in 2011 or somewhere around then... So, how come the color schemes and style of the Forums and Homepage are different from each other? Just kinda curious, because in web design consistency is key. So, does this difference between the forums and homepage bother you guys also? Lehvorak
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Useless MNOLG Character and Background Things
Grandmaster Lehvorak replied to The Legendary TNT's topic in Comics
Interesting stuff you got here. Kinda reminds me back in the day BZP it had a MNOLG kit and all. With masks, body, and all! It's good to bring these things back . I sorta still have some of the things left from that old kit. Lehvorak I did find some old stuff I made when I goofed off with the MNOLG kit before back in the past. Here you guys go at least I found the images I made back in the day... http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z311/SaucyKing/MNOLG/CG2.png http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z311/SaucyKing/MNOLG/MC-S117.png Lehvorak -
This is interesting, just kinda curious do you plan on putting any shading on the drawing? Lehvorak
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What does your family think about you liking Lego
Grandmaster Lehvorak replied to CeeCee's topic in LEGO Discussion
My family doesn't mind... the only thing is I don't buy Lego toys anymore... but during the peaks of Bionicle when it was almost over, they wondered why I kept buying it and said there is no more room for it. Lehvorak
