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Toa of Snow and slush

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    Iowa, U.S.A
  • Interests
    Agriculture, Bionicle, Skiing, Reading, Fishing, History, and Breathing.

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  1. I'm cautiously optimistic. I think this story will be MUCH better for the new generation of fans. If it had been connected too closely with Spherus Magna, new fans would have struggled. Even if it had been somewhat distanced, there would have been a point when new fans would have been limited in how much they could get into the story. This will allow them to really dig into it the way we did. Don't get me wrong, I really want to know what happened on Spherus Magna, but I think this is better for Bionicle as a whole compared to trying to directly fit this with everything else. As far as the story goes, this seems to be a good start, I'm excited to see the Toa again.
  2. I liked it, but don't be afraid to put more details in. I think the story would be easier to understand if we knew more about what they were working on. Otherwise, very good.
  3. To be fair, Toa Lesovikk's team was the first. They etabilshed a system/tradition that is still in use. They must have had some success before they got killed or there would be no Toa teams.
  4. Wow. That was good.I'm not the best at reviewing, but I'll do my best. I liked the imagery here. Over all you did a good job keeping charactors constant though out the story too.nice job.
  5. I liked it. Cask of Amontalato, right? Sorry I have no idea how you spell that. It stuck really close to the origianal story, maybe a little to close, but over all I give it an 8/10.
  6. I would like it, but UltraHau is right. I'm sure there would be copywrite issues. I missed the first half of them.
  7. I was always facinated by the story. I would like to see how the Agori and the Matoran fuction together.
  8. Well... long time no see?

  9. Welcome to bzpower. Keep writing, I really liked "I am No Longer Your Brother".

  10. Thanks for the happy birlthday

  11. Welcome! BTW, you wouldn't know any hot, available vampires, would you? (I'm a 14-year girl, too!)

  12. Hello there! Welcome to bzpower! :]

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