Toa Kayn Posted July 26, 2013 Share Posted July 26, 2013 (edited) This is my Titans V Monsters entry topic. All hope is lost for BZ Koro. Kayn is dead. Pakare is wounded. Toa Uhat and his Titan powers are the only hope left. Is 'The Monster' a paranormal being bent on destroying BZPower? Or is it just a sadistic kid playing with his Bionicles? YOU DECIDE. In BZ Koro: The Movie! Edited August 15, 2013 by Hahli Husky Quote Kayn's Thought: My hiatus of Bionicle has ended Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanakalackin Posted July 26, 2013 Share Posted July 26, 2013 Great opening! You set the emotional tone extremely well with the heroes falling. I absolutely loved the "gotta get myself back together" line XD! The middle was okay, I didn't really like the fact that Uhat shoved Pakare into the box and found out that Uhat was happy that Pakare was dead. The ending was a bit humorous. For your future movies, I would suggest stop-motion animation. Quote I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Kayn Posted July 26, 2013 Author Share Posted July 26, 2013 Great opening! You set the emotional tone extremely well with the heroes falling. I absolutely loved the "gotta get myself back together" line XD! The middle was okay, I didn't really like the fact that Uhat shoved Pakare into the box and found out that Uhat was happy that Pakare was dead. The ending was a bit humorous. For your future movies, I would suggest stop-motion animation. Thanks for the feedback I started off trying to make a serious short but I just decided to try and make it funny when I accidentally made Uhat wriggle too much at the start. If I ever make another one of these, I'm still going to go for the non stop-motion approach but I'll take more time in making it smooth. I'll also make sure to not let my hand appear in any of the shots haha. I enjoyed making this! Quote Kayn's Thought: My hiatus of Bionicle has ended Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FallenCor Posted August 12, 2013 Share Posted August 12, 2013 The first two minutes of that were just...The comedy bits were pleasantly unexpected, and certainly brought a smile to my face. Except for the unsteady camerawork, I have no complaints, ha ha. Quote Hero Factory RPG 2.0 PCs: | Erik Jet | Daren Wolfe | Henry Flint | Helen Corona | Ethan Rez | Dr. Xaal | Wasteland RPG PCs: | Mina | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Kayn Posted August 12, 2013 Author Share Posted August 12, 2013 The first two minutes of that were just...The comedy bits were pleasantly unexpected, and certainly brought a smile to my face. Except for the unsteady camerawork, I have no complaints, ha ha. Thanks man I appreciate the feedback, I'll make sure to be more steady in the sequel. Quote Kayn's Thought: My hiatus of Bionicle has ended Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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