joev14 Posted October 31, 2013 Share Posted October 31, 2013 So, I whipped this model up about two months ago, and have slowly been adding things to it over time, and I now feel as though it's ready to be displayed. Wudda y'all think? FrontBackClose Up of HeadHopefully I'll have some better photos up in a while, my camera battery is dying. The back-view shot turned out pretty well though. Quote My Revamp MOCs (flickr) (Brickshelf) My Short Stories The Last Memories | Birth of the Kal | Key of the Codrex Web of Karzahni | The Depths Below | Monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrickPharaoh Posted October 31, 2013 Share Posted October 31, 2013 Sweet torso construction! Though the legs are a bit bland, so maybe enlarge and customize them a bit? Also, a tiny nitpick but I think might have helped the look: If you could place some sort of armor at the back of the neck, that would be marvelous. Quote "Welcome to Valhalla, Warrior." Recent MOC's: The Headless Horseman (BBC71 Finalist) LDD CCBS Chess The Shadowed One (BBC69) Nydoretha (Netherealm Empress) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted October 31, 2013 Share Posted October 31, 2013 I think the MOC could benefit from some more bulk on the limbs to match that of the torso. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrSciFiGuy Posted November 2, 2013 Share Posted November 2, 2013 Torso looks great! I just think that the only part lacking is the arms. They seem a bit scrawny when compared to the rest of his limbs/body. Quote Bionicle: ANP aims to create narrated versions of all the Bionicle books, with voice actors for each character, and music taken from various media to enhance the story. Check here if you're interested in voicing a character, and here for the chapters that've already been released!Formerly: Tahu Nuva 3.0Looking for a Bionicle Beanie. Black one with the symbol on it. Contact me if you are willing to sell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joev14 Posted November 5, 2013 Author Share Posted November 5, 2013 (edited) Torso looks great! I just think that the only part lacking is the arms. They seem a bit scrawny when compared to the rest of his limbs/body. I think the MOC could benefit from some more bulk on the limbs to match that of the torso. Added more armor to the arms, and made a few slight changes to the shoulders as well. Will update with new photos soon! Sweet torso construction! Though the legs are a bit bland, so maybe enlarge and customize them a bit? Also, a tiny nitpick but I think might have helped the look: If you could place some sort of armor at the back of the neck, that would be marvelous. What parts are able to connect to the neck? I can't think of anything aside from a tire (Which I've already tried, and it looks terrible IMO). Edited November 5, 2013 by joev14 Quote My Revamp MOCs (flickr) (Brickshelf) My Short Stories The Last Memories | Birth of the Kal | Key of the Codrex Web of Karzahni | The Depths Below | Monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrickPharaoh Posted November 6, 2013 Share Posted November 6, 2013 Sweet torso construction! Though the legs are a bit bland, so maybe enlarge and customize them a bit? Also, a tiny nitpick but I think might have helped the look: If you could place some sort of armor at the back of the neck, that would be marvelous. What parts are able to connect to the neck? I can't think of anything aside from a tire (Which I've already tried, and it looks terrible IMO). Well, off the top of my head (see what I did there? LOL), maybe replace the buzzsaw blade (?) with a Glatorian neck and one of these pieces. They always look like a decent piece of armor. Alternatively, one of these might do. Quote "Welcome to Valhalla, Warrior." Recent MOC's: The Headless Horseman (BBC71 Finalist) LDD CCBS Chess The Shadowed One (BBC69) Nydoretha (Netherealm Empress) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joev14 Posted November 6, 2013 Author Share Posted November 6, 2013 (edited) Sweet torso construction! Though the legs are a bit bland, so maybe enlarge and customize them a bit? Also, a tiny nitpick but I think might have helped the look: If you could place some sort of armor at the back of the neck, that would be marvelous. What parts are able to connect to the neck? I can't think of anything aside from a tire (Which I've already tried, and it looks terrible IMO). Well, off the top of my head (see what I did there? LOL), maybe replace the buzzsaw blade (?) with a Glatorian neck and one of these pieces. They always look like a decent piece of armor. Alternatively, one of these might do. I don't really use Hero Factory parts. I only own two HF sets. Edited November 6, 2013 by joev14 Quote My Revamp MOCs (flickr) (Brickshelf) My Short Stories The Last Memories | Birth of the Kal | Key of the Codrex Web of Karzahni | The Depths Below | Monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Cup of Fail Posted November 12, 2013 Share Posted November 12, 2013 The MOC don't look good in my opinion, the body is too big plus i don't like the star foot on it, the lower leg i think should be custom and i don't like the double. The upper arm is really odd but too long for the MOC, the lower arm is just a normal inika arm and okay, the weapon i think you should made it something different then just Ackar Sword, last the head is too small but it is a glatorian so i'm okay with it. Quote My Topics MOCs: Construct-a-Astronaut __________________________________________________ Find Me On Flickr Twitter Youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joev14 Posted November 19, 2013 Author Share Posted November 19, 2013 The MOC don't look good in my opinion, the body is too big plus i don't like the star foot on it, the lower leg i think should be custom and i don't like the double. The upper arm is really odd but too long for the MOC, the lower arm is just a normal inika arm and okay, the weapon i think you should made it something different then just Ackar Sword, last the head is too small but it is a glatorian so i'm okay with it.A lot of people seem to like the large torso. Although I haven't updated the photos, I've bulked up the arms a bit. Although I disagree with you on the head, there really wouldn't be a whole lot I could do about enlarging it anyway. In the updated version I also added a shield to him, as well as the sword. Quote My Revamp MOCs (flickr) (Brickshelf) My Short Stories The Last Memories | Birth of the Kal | Key of the Codrex Web of Karzahni | The Depths Below | Monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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