Ride Another Day Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 (edited) Voices?What?I have no idea anymore! AH! And I was introduced, as a dude who saved people. Sweet!I'm still waiting for that sniper shot. Edited January 30, 2015 by Philips Quote Thanks Photobucket. Love you too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted January 30, 2015 Author Share Posted January 30, 2015 The Triplets report to White Thirteen, Portalfig passes a test, Shadow Ignited meets a Makuta... and Voltex finds some old friends. All of our narrators are now (finally) revealed! --- Releasing a little earlier this week due in part because of an agreement with Luroka and because I'll be away for most of tomorrow and don't want to keep you all waiting. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ehksidian Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 This is getting very interesting indeed.Very, very interesting.white thirteen is second best white councilman after white seven 2 Quote Steam name: Ehksidian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Franco Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 I wonder how Chambliss got his job. Quote [Profiles] Wisdom. Restraint. Emptiness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Smoke Monster Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 (edited) I was never a fan of the Red Star's ability to revive people who died, so I'm glad someone is planning to destroy it in this story. Joking aside, I am glad that not everyone has been revived since dying in this story. That was one of my unspoken concerns with the Red Star reveal in Chapter four. I really don't like it when characters are killed off and then brought back without having a very good reason to be brought back. But you dodged that bullet here IMO, with people dying for good if they die in the Red Star. The Rust Weapon permanently killing someone without him going to the Red Star was good move too, since it makes it an even deadlier weapon. I can't wait to see where we go from here. Edited January 30, 2015 by The Master Sword Quote Everyone is one choice away from being the bad guy in another person's story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted January 30, 2015 Author Share Posted January 30, 2015 This is getting very interesting indeed.Very, very interesting.white thirteen is second best white councilman after white seven But of courseI'm also rather fond of White Eight and White Nine, although to lesser extents; and White One is a real gem. I wonder how Chambliss got his job. I think that might be explained later on? I'm not entirely certain whether it was cut or not. I was never a fan of the Red Star's ability to revive people who died, so I'm glad someone is planning to destroy it in this story. Joking aside, I am glad that not everyone has been revived since dying in this story. That was one of my unspoken concerns with the Red Star reveal in Chapter four. I really don't like it when characters are killed off and when brought back without having a very good reason to be brought back. But you dodged that bullet here IMO, with people dying for good if they die in the Red Star. The Rust Weapon permanently killing someone without him going to the Red Star was good move too, since it makes it an even deadlier weapon. I can't wait to see where we go from here. With this technically being a sequel (the third in a trilogy, really, even though it's also standalone), I knew that the Red Star was the easiest way to allow members whose characters had died to re-join the cast. That said, I also dislike the idea of everyone reviving, so the destruction of the Red Star became a mandatory inclusion for Book 3, and the rust cannon was added in as a weapon that could feasibly erase someone from existence so permanently that not even the Red Star can revive them. 1 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xaeraz Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 So, basically, the Red Star is the recycle bin, and the Rust Cannon isTerrifying Xaeraz's biggest weakness and Like playing Lose/Lose with someone's lifeIn any event, the Red Star plot should be interesting, especially considering it's a Closed Circle scenario. Now I just need to admit to wishing I had more screentime down on the islands =p Quote All are not the same But three shall be as one Freedom in the flame The end has just begun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 I can't wait for the Voltex vs White Thirteen showdown... Narrator... I wonder what my part will be? Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Burnmad Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 I can't wait for the part where I shatter a White Councilman's mask with my bare fist oh, wait *Snaps fingers* Quote Avatar by Brickeens Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 Well, the inevitable has occurred... TEXTERMINATION is updated! Check it out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted January 30, 2015 Author Share Posted January 30, 2015 So, basically, the Red Star is the recycle bin, and the Rust Cannon isTerrifying Xaeraz's biggest weakness and Like playing Lose/Lose with someone's lifeIn any event, the Red Star plot should be interesting, especially considering it's a Closed Circle scenario. Now I just need to admit to wishing I had more screentime down on the islands =p Xaeraz is given a few moments to shine in this epic, although I reckon that ToaD gives him a run for his money. I can't wait for the Voltex vs White Thirteen showdown... Narrator... I wonder what my part will be? Honestly, the way things worked out, none of the new characters are really suited to being narrators; your character is one of the very few where it made any sense at all. I can't wait for the part where I shatter a White Councilman's mask with my bare fist oh, wait *Snaps fingers* Sorry BurnmadIt had to be done Well, the inevitable has occurred... TEXTERMINATION is updated! Check it out! gogogo Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted January 31, 2015 Share Posted January 31, 2015 They'd better destroy the RS the way I think they'll destroy the RS and you know exactly what I mean Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted January 31, 2015 Author Share Posted January 31, 2015 They'd better destroy the RS the way I think they'll destroy the RS and you know exactly what I mean I don't know exactly what you meanWhat do you mean? Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Smoke Monster Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 They'd better destroy the RS the way I think they'll destroy the RS and you know exactly what I mean I don't know exactly what you meanWhat do you mean? I'm going to take a guess here and say that it would be similar to how the Death Star was destroyed, AKA epic explosion. Quote Everyone is one choice away from being the bad guy in another person's story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 (edited) They'd better destroy the RS the way I think they'll destroy the RS and you know exactly what I mean I don't know exactly what you meanWhat do you mean?I'm going to take a guess here and say that it would be similar to how the Death Star was destroyed, AKA epic explosion. And a just in the nick of time escape... or a sacrifice. 300th post!! Edited February 1, 2015 by Shadow_Ignited Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 What if they smash it with a bigger thing? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Burnmad Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 What if they smash it with a bigger thing? They could always use my ego. *Snaps fingers* 5 Quote Avatar by Brickeens Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted February 2, 2015 Share Posted February 2, 2015 (edited) I'm going to take a guess here and say that it would be similar to how the Death Star was destroyed, AKA epic explosion. Nope Sort ofWhat if they smash it with a bigger thing?Nope Sort of They'd better destroy the RS the way I think they'll destroy the RS and you know exactly what I mean I don't know exactly what you meanWhat do you mean?Remember when we wrote for SM.comAnd you/we created a fantastically interesting concept before Eljay and Kahi appearedInvolving the destruction of the Red Star in a very particular manner Edited February 2, 2015 by Anung Un Rama Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 2, 2015 Author Share Posted February 2, 2015 I'm going to take a guess here and say that it would be similar to how the Death Star was destroyed, AKA epic explosion. Nope Sort ofWhat if they smash it with a bigger thing?Nope Sort of They'd better destroy the RS the way I think they'll destroy the RS and you know exactly what I meanI don't know exactly what you meanWhat do you mean?Remember when we wrote for SM.comAnd you/we created a fantastically interesting concept before Eljay and Kahi appearedInvolving the destruction of the Red Star in a very particular manner Possibly? Get on Skype or Steam. I don't actually remember said conversation but I know we would have discussed it and I think I might have an idea of what we talked about? Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted February 4, 2015 Share Posted February 4, 2015 No one listened to TEXTERMINATION... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 4, 2015 Author Share Posted February 4, 2015 No one listened to TEXTERMINATION... I read every chapter, but I'm very busy with other things; I've got Extermination that I'm looking over, I've got Bionifight Infinite starting up, and I've got a few other projects in the works as well. And that's just on BZPower. So I may not review, but you can be sure that I'm following. 1 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 6, 2015 Author Share Posted February 6, 2015 Portalfig meets with White One; Agent 64 encounters the Shadow for the second time; JiMing storms an outpost; and White Thirteen takes a valuable prisoner. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Smoke Monster Posted February 6, 2015 Share Posted February 6, 2015 Another great chapter! (And an action-packed one too! ) The battle JiMing and his team against White Eight and White Nine was really good. I wasn't expecting such shocking deaths for them though. But that isn't a complaint. The Shadow continues to be a scary character. I can't wait to learn more about him in future chapters. He is probably one of my favorite characters in this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Quote Everyone is one choice away from being the bad guy in another person's story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted February 6, 2015 Share Posted February 6, 2015 I smell a battle between Agent 64 and the Shadow incoming. Action-packed chapters all. Looks like A64 needs a new cloaking device. Still wondering how Voltex and Co. are going to escape the Red Star. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 6, 2015 Author Share Posted February 6, 2015 Another great chapter! (And an action-packed one too! ) The battle JiMing and his team against White Eight and White Nine was really good. I wasn't expecting such shocking deaths for them though. But that isn't a complaint. The Shadow continues to be a scary character. I can't wait to learn more about him in future chapters. He is probably one of my favorite characters in this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter! White Eight and White Nine are, I believe, the only characters in this epic that... yes. In other news, good to hear that I'm succeeding with the Shadow. I smell a battle between Agent 64 and the Shadow incoming. Action-packed chapters all. Looks like A64 needs a new cloaking device. Still wondering how Voltex and Co. are going to escape the Red Star. Your first mistake is assuming that Voltex escapes the red star Yes a battle might be coming Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted February 7, 2015 Share Posted February 7, 2015 So much action!And The Shadows is turning out to be more and more like Lord Vile Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted February 7, 2015 Share Posted February 7, 2015 (edited) This TEXTERMINATION update is a whopper! check it out!...notice me, senpai Edited February 12, 2015 by Ghidora131 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 13, 2015 Author Share Posted February 13, 2015 The White Council members meet before the final battle.An old friend reminds Ehks of who he really is.Voltex leads an attack on the Red Star.And then...The final battle begins. 5 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted February 13, 2015 Share Posted February 13, 2015 How much more damage can Metru Nui take? O_O Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 13, 2015 Author Share Posted February 13, 2015 How much more damage can Metru Nui take? O_O Well, Onu-Metru has been destroyed, half of Ta-Metru is in ruins, and the rest are all in pretty rough shape. I did originally plan to have BZ-Metru sunk beneath the waves as well, but it didn't end up fitting in. That said, I doubt it could take much more. That's assuming it's not dead enough to kill the universe already. 2 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Smoke Monster Posted February 14, 2015 Share Posted February 14, 2015 How much more damage can Metru Nui take? O_O Well, Onu-Metru has been destroyed, half of Ta-Metru is in ruins, and the rest are all in pretty rough shape. I did originally plan to have BZ-Metru sunk beneath the waves as well, but it didn't end up fitting in. That said, I doubt it could take much more. That's assuming it's not dead enough to kill the universe already. Mata Nui must be having a major headache from all this destruction going on in the city. Anyways, another action-packed chapter. The battle in the Red Star was really well done. I can't wait to see the final battle in the coming chapters! Quote Everyone is one choice away from being the bad guy in another person's story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted February 14, 2015 Share Posted February 14, 2015 ERMERGERSH That was very interesting! I'm really impressed at the way things carry out there in this, Voltex. Er, Vol-Tex. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted February 14, 2015 Share Posted February 14, 2015 You liar. <3 Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 14, 2015 Author Share Posted February 14, 2015 How much more damage can Metru Nui take? O_O Well, Onu-Metru has been destroyed, half of Ta-Metru is in ruins, and the rest are all in pretty rough shape. I did originally plan to have BZ-Metru sunk beneath the waves as well, but it didn't end up fitting in. That said, I doubt it could take much more. That's assuming it's not dead enough to kill the universe already. Mata Nui must be having a major headache from all this destruction going on in the city. Anyways, another action-packed chapter. The battle in the Red Star was really well done. I can't wait to see the final battle in the coming chapters! Hmm... the Red Star battle is one of my least favorite scenes, so I'm glad that it worked out regardless. Outside of Ehks losing an arm, that is. I feel like that part was okay. ERMERGERSH That was very interesting! I'm really impressed at the way things carry out there in this, Voltex. Er, Vol-Tex. Like I said above, I'm not really a fan of the fight overall, but if it works it works. You liar. <3 Well I couldn't very well let you think that you knew what was happening~ Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ehksidian Posted February 14, 2015 Share Posted February 14, 2015 Hmm... the Red Star battle is one of my least favorite scenes, so I'm glad that it worked out regardless. Outside of Ehks losing an arm, that is. I feel like that part was okay.You know what the best part of this is?The actual MOC I made had a robotic arm. Same arm, too.It's kinda hilarious how coincidental that is. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Quote Steam name: Ehksidian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted February 14, 2015 Share Posted February 14, 2015 (edited) Surprise surprise, everyone dies. Whoopee. (Lolz not really) In other news, Textermination is almost updated! EDIT TEXTERMINATION is updated! Yayz! Edited February 14, 2015 by Ghidora131 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted February 14, 2015 Share Posted February 14, 2015 Stabbed in the head, stabbed in the neck, shot in the head... Will there be no White Council member that shall die from head/neck injury? Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 14, 2015 Author Share Posted February 14, 2015 Hmm... the Red Star battle is one of my least favorite scenes, so I'm glad that it worked out regardless. Outside of Ehks losing an arm, that is. I feel like that part was okay.You know what the best part of this is?The actual MOC I made had a robotic arm. Same arm, too.It's kinda hilarious how coincidental that is. I cannot wait for the next chapter. In the original plans, you actually died this chapter; the Shadow was supposed to appear after the crash and execute you right after Voltex woke up. But then I realized that made no sense, because there was no reason for the Shadow to leave everyone else alive. So you got to live. Surprise surprise, everyone dies. Whoopee. More accurate than you'd think. Stabbed in the head, stabbed in the neck, shot in the head... Will there be no White Council member that shall die from head/neck injury? On the contrary, that is the only place that they can be injured at all, except from very specific weapons (or from each other). The rest of their armor is too tough. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ehksidian Posted February 14, 2015 Share Posted February 14, 2015 In the original plans, you actually died this chapter; the Shadow was supposed to appear after the crash and execute you right after Voltex woke up. But then I realized that made no sense, because there was no reason for the Shadow to leave everyone else alive. So you got to live. THE MEDIC LIVES UNTIL HE DIES Quote Steam name: Ehksidian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xaeraz Posted February 14, 2015 Share Posted February 14, 2015 In the original plans, you actually died this chapter; the Shadow was supposed to appear after the crash and execute you right after Voltex woke up. But then I realized that made no sense, because there was no reason for the Shadow to leave everyone else alive. So you got to live. THE MEDIC LIVES UNTIL HE DIES That does tend to be true of most things. And so, the White Council prove even they are not above the dumbest trope anyone in armor follows: Never Wear A Helmet. 3 Quote All are not the same But three shall be as one Freedom in the flame The end has just begun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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