Elmerius Posted December 16, 2014 Share Posted December 16, 2014 Post your thoughts about my new multi-chapter story, Search for Takanuva, here! Link to the story: http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/16318-the-search-for-takanuva/ Quote -Elmerius [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Use the RIGHT MOUSE KEY to WHACK! and THE GREEN ARROWS to change what you want to WHACK! I've also got an YouTube channel!(the spinnies are made by Click) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavakaku Posted December 18, 2014 Share Posted December 18, 2014 Not bad so far, but it could use some more descriptiveness and detail. Right now it seems more like the skeleton of a good story. Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elmerius Posted December 28, 2014 Author Share Posted December 28, 2014 Instead of Chapter 2, i decided to make a little filler chapter set between chapter 1 and the upcoming chapter 2. I hope you understand that it's hard to come up with any good ideas for the plot. WARNING: The filler chapter is very lame, at least in my own opinion. Quote -Elmerius [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Use the RIGHT MOUSE KEY to WHACK! and THE GREEN ARROWS to change what you want to WHACK! I've also got an YouTube channel!(the spinnies are made by Click) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elmerius Posted April 28, 2015 Author Share Posted April 28, 2015 Topic can be deleted. Thank you! Quote -Elmerius [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Use the RIGHT MOUSE KEY to WHACK! and THE GREEN ARROWS to change what you want to WHACK! I've also got an YouTube channel!(the spinnies are made by Click) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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