Onaku Posted April 13, 2015 Share Posted April 13, 2015 (edited) This is the review topic for Unknown Frontier. Comments and criticism are greatly appreciated. -Summary-When a new world is discovered through a technological revolution, it falls to two matoran, specifically chosen and trained, to explore this new frontier and report back with their findings. But what they find beyond the rift may prove to be more than they could ever have prepared for. Edited April 13, 2015 by Toa Onaku Quote BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavakaku Posted April 13, 2015 Share Posted April 13, 2015 So far, it's really fascinating! But I wonder why it's even a Bionicle story; will there be some reason you couldn't have just used humans instead? Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onaku Posted April 13, 2015 Author Share Posted April 13, 2015 So far, it's really fascinating! But I wonder why it's even a Bionicle story; will there be some reason you couldn't have just used humans instead?I just wanted to make it about matoran, that's all. Quote BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zatth Posted April 13, 2015 Share Posted April 13, 2015 Exploration of a new dimension with a universe that changes constantly and seems to defy all known laws? Well, I'm enthralled! Kudos especially on describing a very odd setting; I got the general gist of this ever-changing new dimension from the way you wrote it. I'm excited to see what's next! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irrie Posted April 19, 2015 Share Posted April 19, 2015 It's been a while since I've been active in the Epics scene, but this one might get me to check back in more often. I'm liking where it's going, and I can't wait to see what'll happen to them next. Great job! Quote bZpOwEr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onaku Posted April 20, 2015 Author Share Posted April 20, 2015 Exploration of a new dimension with a universe that changes constantly and seems to defy all known laws? Well, I'm enthralled! Kudos especially on describing a very odd setting; I got the general gist of this ever-changing new dimension from the way you wrote it. I'm excited to see what's next! Thank you! I hope the upcoming chapters will live up to your expectations. It's been a while since I've been active in the Epics scene, but this one might get me to check back in more often. I'm liking where it's going, and I can't wait to see what'll happen to them next. Great job! Well, there's a more on the way, so you can definitely look forward to that. Thank you! Anyway, Part 2 has been added, so check that out! Any thoughts on it are appreciated. Quote BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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