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Toa Raika Review

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This is the review topic for my fanfic, The Toa Raika. The first chapter and the first three parts of the second chapter are already on the Lego Message Boards, so I will be copying them to here.

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-Toa Ouberry

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It's definitely starting off promising. I like the kind of mystery it has to it as well as mixing the Bionicle world with the real world. I will definitely keep reading once more content is available :)


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Iron Maiden    Journey    Mercenary    The Unguided    Trivium


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Yeah, I'll post more. I didn't know what size audience I have. 

Just keep doing what you're doing. As a musician, here's how it works: the artist may have made 4 or 5 works before there is a large following.

 

In simple terms, good things come to those who are patient. Keep updating the story and watch the audience grow with it.


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Other great bands:


Iron Maiden    Journey    Mercenary    The Unguided    Trivium


Boston    Stratovarius    Symphony X    Epica

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Yeah, I'll post more. I didn't know what size audience I have. 

Just keep doing what you're doing. As a musician, here's how it works: the artist may have made 4 or 5 works before there is a large following.

 

In simple terms, good things come to those who are patient. Keep updating the story and watch the audience grow with it.

 

Okay. :)


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-Toa Ouberry

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I'm going to speculate that because 6 Bionicle fans have been taken by some mysterious dimension traveler, the story is about to become much more intense :P


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Other great bands:


Iron Maiden    Journey    Mercenary    The Unguided    Trivium


Boston    Stratovarius    Symphony X    Epica

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Oooooh. Just to let everyone know, I have decided to rewrite this. Chances are I will be abandoning the first topic and making a new one. Consider this story closed.....

For repairs.

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