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i announce the new update for a new comic.

And I'm glad you do, but what I'm saying is that the new ones will be easier to find and read if you mark the latest comic(s) as "new" in the main post and link to the new comic in the announcement post. The second thing is optional, but if you at least do the first thing, I can find your new comics a little easier. I'm not trying to beat you up or anything; I love your comics and you've improved when it came to announcement etiquette, but I initially had a tough time finding that Dallior comic. I think my overall observation skills (and I use the term generously) might have something to do with it, but it'll just be convenient, you know?

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i announce the new update for a new comic.

And I'm glad you do, but what I'm saying is that the new ones will be easier to find and read if you mark the latest comic(s) as "new" in the main post and link to the new comic in the announcement post. The second thing is optional, but if you at least do the first thing, I can find your new comics a little easier. I'm not trying to beat you up or anything; I love your comics and you've improved when it came to announcement etiquette, but I initially had a tough time finding that Dallior comic. I think my overall observation skills (and I use the term generously) might have something to do with it, but it'll just be convenient, you know?

 

okay, but can you show me the example ?? im confused...

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i announce the new update for a new comic.

And I'm glad you do, but what I'm saying is that the new ones will be easier to find and read if you mark the latest comic(s) as "new" in the main post and link to the new comic in the announcement post. The second thing is optional, but if you at least do the first thing, I can find your new comics a little easier. I'm not trying to beat you up or anything; I love your comics and you've improved when it came to announcement etiquette, but I initially had a tough time finding that Dallior comic. I think my overall observation skills (and I use the term generously) might have something to do with it, but it'll just be convenient, you know?

 

okay, but can you show me the example ?? im confused...

 

For starters, I see you're putting in the "new" marker! Nice touch! I hate to be nitpicky, but you don't need the quotation marks. Putting that aside, good job!

 

Now, let's pretend I'm you for a second. I just finished a comic and I'm going to make an announcement post.

 

"Alright, here's the new comic."

 

or

 

"I've posted a new comic.

 

Link"

 

You don't have to say what I said word for word, but you get the point. It'll save your readers some time and they can respond faster.

 

Also, saw the new panels. That arm thing took me by surprise too! And the spill thing, man. I dunno how Wairu kept it together. I guess he was too busy raging! And sitting on that alarmingly large pile of gaming gear.

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i announce the new update for a new comic.

And I'm glad you do, but what I'm saying is that the new ones will be easier to find and read if you mark the latest comic(s) as "new" in the main post and link to the new comic in the announcement post. The second thing is optional, but if you at least do the first thing, I can find your new comics a little easier. I'm not trying to beat you up or anything; I love your comics and you've improved when it came to announcement etiquette, but I initially had a tough time finding that Dallior comic. I think my overall observation skills (and I use the term generously) might have something to do with it, but it'll just be convenient, you know?

 

okay, but can you show me the example ?? im confused...

 

For starters, I see you're putting in the "new" marker! Nice touch! I hate to be nitpicky, but you don't need the quotation marks. Putting that aside, good job!

 

Now, let's pretend I'm you for a second. I just finished a comic and I'm going to make an announcement post.

 

"Alright, here's the new comic."

 

or

 

"I've posted a new comic.

 

Link"

 

You don't have to say what I said word for word, but you get the point. It'll save your readers some time and they can respond faster.

 

Also, saw the new panels. That arm thing took me by surprise too! And the spill thing, man. I dunno how Wairu kept it together. I guess he was too busy raging! And sitting on that alarmingly large pile of gaming gear.

 

as you look closer at the last panel, the sexy wet kanini just made dallior nosebleed.

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i announce the new update for a new comic.

And I'm glad you do, but what I'm saying is that the new ones will be easier to find and read if you mark the latest comic(s) as "new" in the main post and link to the new comic in the announcement post. The second thing is optional, but if you at least do the first thing, I can find your new comics a little easier. I'm not trying to beat you up or anything; I love your comics and you've improved when it came to announcement etiquette, but I initially had a tough time finding that Dallior comic. I think my overall observation skills (and I use the term generously) might have something to do with it, but it'll just be convenient, you know?

 

okay, but can you show me the example ?? im confused...

 

For starters, I see you're putting in the "new" marker! Nice touch! I hate to be nitpicky, but you don't need the quotation marks. Putting that aside, good job!

 

Now, let's pretend I'm you for a second. I just finished a comic and I'm going to make an announcement post.

 

"Alright, here's the new comic."

 

or

 

"I've posted a new comic.

 

Link"

 

You don't have to say what I said word for word, but you get the point. It'll save your readers some time and they can respond faster.

 

Also, saw the new panels. That arm thing took me by surprise too! And the spill thing, man. I dunno how Wairu kept it together. I guess he was too busy raging! And sitting on that alarmingly large pile of gaming gear.

 

as you look closer at the last panel, the sexy wet kanini just made dallior nosebleed.

 

Oh, I noticed! ;) Just forgot to bring that up. Bled less than I thought, to be honest.

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i announce the new update for a new comic.

And I'm glad you do, but what I'm saying is that the new ones will be easier to find and read if you mark the latest comic(s) as "new" in the main post and link to the new comic in the announcement post. The second thing is optional, but if you at least do the first thing, I can find your new comics a little easier. I'm not trying to beat you up or anything; I love your comics and you've improved when it came to announcement etiquette, but I initially had a tough time finding that Dallior comic. I think my overall observation skills (and I use the term generously) might have something to do with it, but it'll just be convenient, you know?

 

okay, but can you show me the example ?? im confused...

 

For starters, I see you're putting in the "new" marker! Nice touch! I hate to be nitpicky, but you don't need the quotation marks. Putting that aside, good job!

 

Now, let's pretend I'm you for a second. I just finished a comic and I'm going to make an announcement post.

 

"Alright, here's the new comic."

 

or

 

"I've posted a new comic.

 

Link"

 

You don't have to say what I said word for word, but you get the point. It'll save your readers some time and they can respond faster.

 

Also, saw the new panels. That arm thing took me by surprise too! And the spill thing, man. I dunno how Wairu kept it together. I guess he was too busy raging! And sitting on that alarmingly large pile of gaming gear.

 

as you look closer at the last panel, the sexy wet kanini just made dallior nosebleed.

 

Oh, I noticed! ;) Just forgot to bring that up. Bled less than I thought, to be honest.

 

dont forget to add a like.

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Haha. Kanini with them sorting struggles just to get most of it sorted, but then finds out she's missing one batch of colors. Nice silly comic.

http://phinto.wikia.com/wiki/Rahkshi_kaita-xo 

 

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Glad to see the wiki's coming along! I just might make some contributions later.

good, i made a new comic anyways.

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Glad to see the wiki's coming along! I just might make some contributions later.

good, i made a new comic anyways.

 

Oh, the one about Kanini's pieces? Yeah, I hate it when I lose pieces, too.

 

kanini? oh she was organizing the neon colors. and making new elements.

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Glad to see the wiki's coming along! I just might make some contributions later.

good, i made a new comic anyways.

 

Oh, the one about Kanini's pieces? Yeah, I hate it when I lose pieces, too.

 

kanini? oh she was organizing the neon colors. and making new elements.

 

Making new elements? Impressive. I wonder what elements she could make...

 

I expanded upon Wairu's page in the wiki! More contributions to come!

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Glad to see the wiki's coming along! I just might make some contributions later.

good, i made a new comic anyways.

 

Oh, the one about Kanini's pieces? Yeah, I hate it when I lose pieces, too.

 

kanini? oh she was organizing the neon colors. and making new elements.

 

Making new elements? Impressive. I wonder what elements she could make...

 

I expanded upon Wairu's page in the wiki! More contributions to come!

 

i think hot magenta violet if the Lego.comp possibly made this color REAL.

and include the neon turquoise. that's florescent blue, mixed with a pit drops of florescent bright green or alien lime yellow.

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Glad to see the wiki's coming along! I just might make some contributions later.

good, i made a new comic anyways.

 

Oh, the one about Kanini's pieces? Yeah, I hate it when I lose pieces, too.

 

kanini? oh she was organizing the neon colors. and making new elements.

 

Making new elements? Impressive. I wonder what elements she could make...

 

I expanded upon Wairu's page in the wiki! More contributions to come!

 

i think hot magenta violet if the Lego.comp possibly made this color REAL.

and include the neon turquoise. that's florescent blue, mixed with a pit drops of florescent bright green or alien lime yellow.

 

Don't you mean "hot magenta pinky"? :D

 

What element would those colors correspond to? Poison?

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Glad to see the wiki's coming along! I just might make some contributions later.

good, i made a new comic anyways.

 

Oh, the one about Kanini's pieces? Yeah, I hate it when I lose pieces, too.

 

kanini? oh she was organizing the neon colors. and making new elements.

 

Making new elements? Impressive. I wonder what elements she could make...

 

I expanded upon Wairu's page in the wiki! More contributions to come!

 

i think hot magenta violet if the Lego.comp possibly made this color REAL.

and include the neon turquoise. that's florescent blue, mixed with a pit drops of florescent bright green or alien lime yellow.

 

Don't you mean "hot magenta pinky"? :D

 

What element would those colors correspond to? Poison?

 

for green and violet? poison

for turquoise and pink, plant-life

for turquoise and cyan, mist

for yellow-green and orange, neon (plasma)

 

you know what? it docent matter what color means...

what matters is what color there inner posidermus was...

posidermus is (positive protodermus).

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Glad to see the wiki's coming along! I just might make some contributions later.

good, i made a new comic anyways.

 

Oh, the one about Kanini's pieces? Yeah, I hate it when I lose pieces, too.

 

kanini? oh she was organizing the neon colors. and making new elements.

 

Making new elements? Impressive. I wonder what elements she could make...

 

I expanded upon Wairu's page in the wiki! More contributions to come!

 

i think hot magenta violet if the Lego.comp possibly made this color REAL.

and include the neon turquoise. that's florescent blue, mixed with a pit drops of florescent bright green or alien lime yellow.

 

Don't you mean "hot magenta pinky"? :D

 

What element would those colors correspond to? Poison?

 

for green and violet? poison

for terquoise and pink, plantlife

for terquoise and cyan, mist

for yellow-green and orange, neon (plasma)

 

Interesting elements, but why turquoise and pink for plantlife? Is that supposed to represent flowers? And why green in plasma?

 

I apologize for all the questions; I'm just curious.

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Glad to see the wiki's coming along! I just might make some contributions later.

good, i made a new comic anyways.

 

Oh, the one about Kanini's pieces? Yeah, I hate it when I lose pieces, too.

 

kanini? oh she was organizing the neon colors. and making new elements.

 

Making new elements? Impressive. I wonder what elements she could make...

 

I expanded upon Wairu's page in the wiki! More contributions to come!

 

i think hot magenta violet if the Lego.comp possibly made this color REAL.

and include the neon turquoise. that's florescent blue, mixed with a pit drops of florescent bright green or alien lime yellow.

 

Don't you mean "hot magenta pinky"? :D

 

What element would those colors correspond to? Poison?

 

for green and violet? poison

for terquoise and pink, plantlife

for terquoise and cyan, mist

for yellow-green and orange, neon (plasma)

 

Interesting elements, but why turquoise and pink for plantlife? Is that supposed to represent flowers? And why green in plasma?

 

I apologize for all the questions; I'm just curious.

 

 

it okay... but you know what? it docent matter what color means...

what matters is what color there inner posidermus was...

posidermus is (positive protodermus).

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Glad to see the wiki's coming along! I just might make some contributions later.

good, i made a new comic anyways.

 

Oh, the one about Kanini's pieces? Yeah, I hate it when I lose pieces, too.

 

kanini? oh she was organizing the neon colors. and making new elements.

 

Making new elements? Impressive. I wonder what elements she could make...

 

I expanded upon Wairu's page in the wiki! More contributions to come!

 

i think hot magenta violet if the Lego.comp possibly made this color REAL.

and include the neon turquoise. that's florescent blue, mixed with a pit drops of florescent bright green or alien lime yellow.

 

Don't you mean "hot magenta pinky"? :D

 

What element would those colors correspond to? Poison?

 

for green and violet? poison

for terquoise and pink, plantlife

for terquoise and cyan, mist

for yellow-green and orange, neon (plasma)

 

Interesting elements, but why turquoise and pink for plantlife? Is that supposed to represent flowers? And why green in plasma?

 

I apologize for all the questions; I'm just curious.

 

 

it okay... but you know what? it docent matter what color means...

what matters is what color there inner posidermus was...

posidermus is (positive protodermus).

 

If color doesn't matter, then I guess that's okay. I'm just used to the coloring system of BIONICLE Generation 1; that's all.

 

What sets posidermus apart from regular protodermis or antidermis?

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Glad to see the wiki's coming along! I just might make some contributions later.

good, i made a new comic anyways.

 

Oh, the one about Kanini's pieces? Yeah, I hate it when I lose pieces, too.

 

kanini? oh she was organizing the neon colors. and making new elements.

 

Making new elements? Impressive. I wonder what elements she could make...

 

I expanded upon Wairu's page in the wiki! More contributions to come!

 

i think hot magenta violet if the Lego.comp possibly made this color REAL.

and include the neon turquoise. that's florescent blue, mixed with a pit drops of florescent bright green or alien lime yellow.

 

Don't you mean "hot magenta pinky"? :D

 

What element would those colors correspond to? Poison?

 

for green and violet? poison

for terquoise and pink, plantlife

for terquoise and cyan, mist

for yellow-green and orange, neon (plasma)

 

Interesting elements, but why turquoise and pink for plantlife? Is that supposed to represent flowers? And why green in plasma?

 

I apologize for all the questions; I'm just curious.

 

 

it okay... but you know what? it docent matter what color means...

what matters is what color there inner posidermus was...

posidermus is (positive protodermus).

 

If color doesn't matter, then I guess that's okay. I'm just used to the coloring system of BIONICLE Generation 1; that's all.

 

What sets posidermus apart from regular protodermis or antidermis?

 

negadermis. the black energy.

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Glad to see the wiki's coming along! I just might make some contributions later.

good, i made a new comic anyways.

 

Oh, the one about Kanini's pieces? Yeah, I hate it when I lose pieces, too.

 

kanini? oh she was organizing the neon colors. and making new elements.

 

Making new elements? Impressive. I wonder what elements she could make...

 

I expanded upon Wairu's page in the wiki! More contributions to come!

 

i think hot magenta violet if the Lego.comp possibly made this color REAL.

and include the neon turquoise. that's florescent blue, mixed with a pit drops of florescent bright green or alien lime yellow.

 

Don't you mean "hot magenta pinky"? :D

 

What element would those colors correspond to? Poison?

 

for green and violet? poison

for terquoise and pink, plantlife

for terquoise and cyan, mist

for yellow-green and orange, neon (plasma)

 

Interesting elements, but why turquoise and pink for plantlife? Is that supposed to represent flowers? And why green in plasma?

 

I apologize for all the questions; I'm just curious.

 

 

it okay... but you know what? it docent matter what color means...

what matters is what color there inner posidermus was...

posidermus is (positive protodermus).

 

If color doesn't matter, then I guess that's okay. I'm just used to the coloring system of BIONICLE Generation 1; that's all.

 

What sets posidermus apart from regular protodermis or antidermis?

 

negadermis. the black energy.

 

Ah, the "light vs. dark" dynamic. I get it now.

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Glad to see the wiki's coming along! I just might make some contributions later.

good, i made a new comic anyways.

 

Oh, the one about Kanini's pieces? Yeah, I hate it when I lose pieces, too.

 

kanini? oh she was organizing the neon colors. and making new elements.

 

Making new elements? Impressive. I wonder what elements she could make...

 

I expanded upon Wairu's page in the wiki! More contributions to come!

 

i think hot magenta violet if the Lego.comp possibly made this color REAL.

and include the neon turquoise. that's florescent blue, mixed with a pit drops of florescent bright green or alien lime yellow.

 

Don't you mean "hot magenta pinky"? :D

 

What element would those colors correspond to? Poison?

 

for green and violet? poison

for terquoise and pink, plantlife

for terquoise and cyan, mist

for yellow-green and orange, neon (plasma)

 

Interesting elements, but why turquoise and pink for plantlife? Is that supposed to represent flowers? And why green in plasma?

 

I apologize for all the questions; I'm just curious.

 

 

it okay... but you know what? it docent matter what color means...

what matters is what color there inner posidermus was...

posidermus is (positive protodermus).

 

If color doesn't matter, then I guess that's okay. I'm just used to the coloring system of BIONICLE Generation 1; that's all.

 

What sets posidermus apart from regular protodermis or antidermis?

 

negadermis. the black energy.

 

Ah, the "light vs. dark" dynamic. I get it now.

 

i or you can make a topic for "posi" and "nega" dermis if you want. 

BTW i made new one for temporary heroes.

http://phinto.wikia.com/wiki/Onipex_%26_jevik?venotify=created

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Glad to see the wiki's coming along! I just might make some contributions later.

good, i made a new comic anyways.

 

Oh, the one about Kanini's pieces? Yeah, I hate it when I lose pieces, too.

 

kanini? oh she was organizing the neon colors. and making new elements.

 

Making new elements? Impressive. I wonder what elements she could make...

 

I expanded upon Wairu's page in the wiki! More contributions to come!

 

i think hot magenta violet if the Lego.comp possibly made this color REAL.

and include the neon turquoise. that's florescent blue, mixed with a pit drops of florescent bright green or alien lime yellow.

 

Don't you mean "hot magenta pinky"? :D

 

What element would those colors correspond to? Poison?

 

for green and violet? poison

for terquoise and pink, plantlife

for terquoise and cyan, mist

for yellow-green and orange, neon (plasma)

 

Interesting elements, but why turquoise and pink for plantlife? Is that supposed to represent flowers? And why green in plasma?

 

I apologize for all the questions; I'm just curious.

 

 

it okay... but you know what? it docent matter what color means...

what matters is what color there inner posidermus was...

posidermus is (positive protodermus).

 

If color doesn't matter, then I guess that's okay. I'm just used to the coloring system of BIONICLE Generation 1; that's all.

 

What sets posidermus apart from regular protodermis or antidermis?

 

negadermis. the black energy.

 

Ah, the "light vs. dark" dynamic. I get it now.

 

i or you can make a topic for "posi" and "nega" dermis if you want. 

BTW i made new one for temporary heroes.

http://phinto.wikia.com/wiki/Onipex_%26_jevik?venotify=created

 

You oughtta do the dermis stuff; you know it better than I do.

 

I might expand on that page, too.

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This is probably your best comic so far! You've outdone yourself in pretty much every way! The mystery aspect has drawn me in more than usual, the humor is easily the greatest in the whole series, and the newly-introduced drawn expressions are really well-done and they really convey what the characters are thinking/feeling. Now to get into detail!

 

Did I see Mupaei and another Rahkshi? It's clear that there are more villains in there and that the subplot you've introduced will be driven further. I'm excited to see where you'll take the story!

 

When I said "drawn expressions", I mean the ones where Wairu is coming up with a strategy while Husker blankly looks at his screen. I really like how you used them, as they were used rather appropriately and like I said before, they served their purpose by showing us how the characters were thinking. The extreme detail in Wairu's face was also incredible. The over-the-top anger and determination in his expression is hilarious and it's among the angriest faces I've ever seen.

 

As for the humor in general, again, it's your best so far. Dallior walking in on all the discarded consoles (why were there so many duplicates?!), Wairu's frustrations shown in greater detail, and the boys tidying up the room and playing nice in the last panel all made for a great scenario. The execution was amazing as well.

 

Overall, I really love this comic. Definitely worth the wait and it was a fantastic read. If you can top this, I'd love to see it.

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This is probably your best comic so far! You've outdone yourself in pretty much every way! The mystery aspect has drawn me in more than usual, the humor is easily the greatest in the whole series, and the newly-introduced drawn expressions are really well-done and they really convey what the characters are thinking/feeling. Now to get into detail!

 

Did I see Mupaei and another Rahkshi? It's clear that there are more villains in there and that the subplot you've introduced will be driven further. I'm excited to see where you'll take the story!

 

When I said "drawn expressions", I mean the ones where Wairu is coming up with a strategy while Husker blankly looks at his screen. I really like how you used them, as they were used rather appropriately and like I said before, they served their purpose by showing us how the characters were thinking. The extreme detail in Wairu's face was also incredible. The over-the-top anger and determination in his expression is hilarious and it's among the angriest faces I've ever seen.

 

As for the humor in general, again, it's your best so far. Dallior walking in on all the discarded consoles (why were there so many duplicates?!), Wairu's frustrations shown in greater detail, and the boys tidying up the room and playing nice in the last panel all made for a great scenario. The execution was amazing as well.

 

Overall, I really love this comic. Definitely worth the wait and it was a fantastic read. If you can top this, I'd love to see it.

if you look closely there 4 anime reference see if you can find one.

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This is probably your best comic so far! You've outdone yourself in pretty much every way! The mystery aspect has drawn me in more than usual, the humor is easily the greatest in the whole series, and the newly-introduced drawn expressions are really well-done and they really convey what the characters are thinking/feeling. Now to get into detail!

 

Did I see Mupaei and another Rahkshi? It's clear that there are more villains in there and that the subplot you've introduced will be driven further. I'm excited to see where you'll take the story!

 

When I said "drawn expressions", I mean the ones where Wairu is coming up with a strategy while Husker blankly looks at his screen. I really like how you used them, as they were used rather appropriately and like I said before, they served their purpose by showing us how the characters were thinking. The extreme detail in Wairu's face was also incredible. The over-the-top anger and determination in his expression is hilarious and it's among the angriest faces I've ever seen.

 

As for the humor in general, again, it's your best so far. Dallior walking in on all the discarded consoles (why were there so many duplicates?!), Wairu's frustrations shown in greater detail, and the boys tidying up the room and playing nice in the last panel all made for a great scenario. The execution was amazing as well.

 

Overall, I really love this comic. Definitely worth the wait and it was a fantastic read. If you can top this, I'd love to see it.

if you look closely there 4 anime reference see if you can find one.

 

I don't actually watch a lot of anime and I've only seen about 4 in their entirety. I remember the One-Punch Man reference you pointed out to me, but I can't spot any other references. I kinda see similarities between the rivalries of Wairu & Husker and Kyo & Yuki from Fruits Basket, but that's about it.

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I'm liking the plot you're setting up here! Sure, the premise is typical, having a number of travelers stumble upon a seemingly abandoned location, but I look forward to seeing your take on it. I already know it'll look great, seeing as the lighting in the second-to-last panel was fantastic. It isn't fantastic for Guurahk, but it was great to see on my end of things.

 

Valso, vhy voes Vemato vut v's vin vront vof vandom vords?

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I'm liking the plot you're setting up here! Sure, the premise is typical, having a number of travelers stumble upon a seemingly abandoned location, but I look forward to seeing your take on it. I already know it'll look great, seeing as the lighting in the second-to-last panel was fantastic. It isn't fantastic for Guurahk, but it was great to see on my end of things.

 

Valso, vhy voes Vemato vut v's vin vront vof vandom vords?

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I'm liking the plot you're setting up here! Sure, the premise is typical, having a number of travelers stumble upon a seemingly abandoned location, but I look forward to seeing your take on it. I already know it'll look great, seeing as the lighting in the second-to-last panel was fantastic. It isn't fantastic for Guurahk, but it was great to see on my end of things.

 

Valso, vhy voes Vemato vut v's vin vront vof vandom vords?

the answers are on the update.

 

 

Vah, zo ve zis va zampire. Vhe zaccent vis zlighty vexaggerated, zut vi zuess vit zakes vense.

 

 

Kudos on the awesome-looking Guurahk cheeks and the last panel. That last panel, man. I'm really excited for the next comic because of it!

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I have a feeling that Dark Hunters will figure out that we have the crystal and just drop by anyway. But hey, more fight scenes!

well I got bed news for you, I am on an ART BLOCK! why? because my brain cant even think about an idea design for the members of the dark-hunter gang. (D9) because I have other stuff to let it all out, Christmas comic (for reals), myst style game making, Christmas stuff. while I am doing stuff whatever.

I need each and every one of your art ideas, for making a dark hunter members for the comics. winner gets there ideas in the comic as a PGS enemy and to give credit. okay good.

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I have a feeling that Dark Hunters will figure out that we have the crystal and just drop by anyway. But hey, more fight scenes!

well I got bed news for you, I am on an ART BLOCK! why? because my brain cant even think about an idea design for the members of the dark-hunter gang. (D9) because I have other stuff to let it all out, Christmas comic (for reals), myst style game making, Christmas stuff. while I am doing stuff whatever.

I need each and every one of your art ideas, for making a dark hunter members for the comics. winner gets there ideas in the comic as a PGS enemy and to give credit. okay good.

Oh, I was actually gonna offer my help anyway! I'll have to see what I can do after work! :)

 

EDIT: How many designs can I submit?

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I have a feeling that Dark Hunters will figure out that we have the crystal and just drop by anyway. But hey, more fight scenes!

well I got bed news for you, I am on an ART BLOCK! why? because my brain cant even think about an idea design for the members of the dark-hunter gang. (D9) because I have other stuff to let it all out, Christmas comic (for reals), myst style game making, Christmas stuff. while I am doing stuff whatever.

I need each and every one of your art ideas, for making a dark hunter members for the comics. winner gets there ideas in the comic as a PGS enemy and to give credit. okay good.

 

Oh, I was actually gonna offer my help anyway! I'll have to see what I can do after work! :)

 

EDIT: How many designs can I submit?

 

i think 6 of them in different shapes and sizes. and opposite colors of the toa,

 

cyan/gray, grayblue/purple, white/black, violet/aliengreen, yellow/black, green/red,

 

because we have the 3 of them planned out.

 

the story need villains with new elemental powers, (different then the cannons because of the elemental powers are combined into one) they had to reflect on what the story's about, (when there was a indie game competition, then the computers will be taken over by a hacking dark-hunter antagonist, if there was pollution, then there was a toxic poison slug dark-hunter, etc. then etc.)

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