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FIGHTING TO SURVIVE

I dreamed a dream in time gone by…

     In the rocky desert that houses the village of Gora-Koro on the Northern Continent, a dream is rooted in the captain of the village guard, the thoughtful and yet fierce Fe-Matoran Rahkan: their Toa Protector gone on a mission to rescue their kidnapped elder, the village is at the mercy of any incursion of the threatening beasts of the desert, kept at bay only by the hands of the Matoran villagers themselves.

 

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Well, I'm back from a long hiatus, and in the meantime I managed to write a good portion of another epic. To give a brief backstory, this is set some time before the Toa-Dark Hunter war, and it follows the life of a Fe-Matoran trying to survive the misfortunes of life. I will apologize for the prologue not beng the best--I wrote it two years ago, and couldn't really think of any way to improve it without completely deleting it and writing a new one.

 

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Thanks for the review... I actually was really bored, so I revised the prologue; hopefully you'll find it a bit better. Chapter 1 will probably be up tomorrow.

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