Rahkshi Lalonde Posted February 21, 2016 Share Posted February 21, 2016 My hand really hurts and i still think i was cutting corners here but whatever: page 1 page 2 page 3 page 4 page 5 page 6 I honestly had planned to add color, but the deadline approached a lil fast so i left it b&w, which kiiinda makes the sprite sections look odd? idk, i'll let you judge my scribbles uou 9 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logan Tec Posted February 22, 2016 Share Posted February 22, 2016 Ha thats a good use of Sprite and hand drawn interesting story. but should ppl know those characters from some where? Quote one day this will contain greatness only the best. But take this with the ocean of salt then you will know what to expect from this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahkshi Lalonde Posted February 22, 2016 Author Share Posted February 22, 2016 Ha thats a good use of Sprite and hand drawn interesting story. but should ppl know those characters from some where? nope, Vahki-tan, Emmel, and Rorkshi are fresh out of the blue, designed to simply resemble the average cast of a peak BZP studio comic u: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petewa Posted February 22, 2016 Share Posted February 22, 2016 Well, I'm definitely not voting for myself this time around. Quote Mataru Nui, an Interactive Adventure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted February 22, 2016 Share Posted February 22, 2016 This is one of my favorite comics I've seen on here for a long, long time (you know, counting actual comics, not Nova Orbis). Not only is the art well-done (as always), but I love the characters and the humor presented in here. You have my vote! Quote ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarn Posted February 22, 2016 Share Posted February 22, 2016 This is good stuff. Funny, and the art's nice. As a minor critique, though: some of the panel placement was a bit dodgy in page 2 and 3 and broke up the flow quite a bit. I actually lost my place at one point and had to backtrack a panel to understand why it seemed the dialogue had jumped ahead of me.BUT this is minor and it's a contest so you can't fix it so whatever. Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahkshi Lalonde Posted February 22, 2016 Author Share Posted February 22, 2016 This is one of my favorite comics I've seen on here for a long, long time (you know, counting actual comics, not Nova Orbis). Not only is the art well-done (as always), but I love the characters and the humor presented in here. You have my vote! that is really good to hear since i wasworried the rush i ended up putting on it (put off a lot of work till the last few days as usual) would heavily impact any quality. thanks! This is good stuff. Funny, and the art's nice. As a minor critique, though: some of the panel placement was a bit dodgy in page 2 and 3 and broke up the flow quite a bit. I actually lost my place at one point and had to backtrack a panel to understand why it seemed the dialogue had jumped ahead of me. BUT this is minor and it's a contest so you can't fix it so whatever. oh yeah, i see what you mean. oops. x: panel layout is one of my enemies in comic making, alongside pacing, dialogue, and background art. uou Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarn Posted February 22, 2016 Share Posted February 22, 2016 This is good stuff. Funny, and the art's nice. As a minor critique, though: some of the panel placement was a bit dodgy in page 2 and 3 and broke up the flow quite a bit. I actually lost my place at one point and had to backtrack a panel to understand why it seemed the dialogue had jumped ahead of me. BUT this is minor and it's a contest so you can't fix it so whatever. oh yeah, i see what you mean. oops. x: panel layout is one of my enemies in comic making, alongside pacing, dialogue, and background art. uou The dialogue and pacing was good, actually, so... Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evil_jaga_genius Posted February 22, 2016 Share Posted February 22, 2016 Oh man this is perfect, the hazmat suit =P Question: what software did you use, because I'm using Gimp and I can't get the lines that clean. Quote Avatar by Nicholas Anderson (NickonAquaMagna)My blog: The Jaga's Nest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahkshi Lalonde Posted February 23, 2016 Author Share Posted February 23, 2016 Oh man this is perfect, the hazmat suit =P Question: what software did you use, because I'm using Gimp and I can't get the lines that clean. thanks, Rorkshi was probably the most fun to draw, <: (odd, i use Gimp for all my stuff, tho notably i did draw bigger here n i usually do, and it depends on if you have a tablet, and set the pressure variables on or not. o: ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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