Master Inika Posted December 14, 2016 Share Posted December 14, 2016 Makuta Maledrin stood proudly at the door, awaiting the arrival of his leader, Makuta Miserix. Inside his lab, held back by protosteel bars, was his newest Rahi creation. He anticipated Miserix being quite pleased with it. On the island of Destral in their state-of-the-art Rahi Creation Labs, Maledrin and his brothers worked hard to create the many Rahi beasts that populated the universe. It was often a thankless job, but nonetheless the job they had been created to do. Why, Maledrin wondered, were the peaceful Matoran so shy around Makuta? Was it the Rahi they made, were they too mean and scary? Was it because of the black, twisted spikes that lined their fortress? Was it the unblinking slit-like red eyes of their Rahkshi foot soldiers? Maledrin had little time to wonder, because Miserix’s footsteps were already echoing from down the hall! Miserix towered over Maledrin in his dragon-like form, clad in red armor with silver spikes jutting out of it. In comparison, Maledrin was only just taller than a Toa, in simple green hues, wearing a Kanohi Felnas. “Welcome, Miserix!” Maledrin said, bowing reverently. “Right this way!” Miserix followed, his gauntlet-covered hands clasped behind his back. “Thank you, Maledrin. I assume you are on schedule.” “That I am!” “So you have completed the Rahi lizard?” “That I have!” Maledrin announced as they reached the bars, and his monster rammed into them head-first, hissing and growling menacingly. “What in the name of the Great Beings is that?!” Miserix asked in horror. “What did you give it instead of legs?” “Oh! Well, I was thinking, why do all our Rahi have to have legs?” Maledrin explained, oblivious to his leader’s disapproval. “Then, it hit me: treads! It’s the only way to travel!” “Why is it… punching… the wall?” Maledrin was only too happy to tell his leader, “That’s so it can protect itself and attack prey! Isn’t it cool? It can even punch with both forelegs at once!” “Maledrin?” “Yes, my lord?” “In what sense does this even vaguely resemble a lizard?” Maledrin went silent a few moments, before saying, “Well… the head kind of looks like a lizard’s, if you don’t look at the rest of it.” Now, it was Miserix’s turn for silence. The leader of the Brotherhood of Makuta finally declared, “Maledrin, I think I’m going to transfer the remainder of your assignment to a different Makuta.” “Oh, um, you mean the bull, the tiger, and the battle crabs?” “Yes. Where are the viruses and liquid protodermis you were going to make them with?” Maledrin took a deep breath, glanced at the locked door in the corner of his lab labeled “Do Not Enter—Live Rahi” and said, “Yeah, about that…” 5 Quote "You are an absolute in these uncertain times. Your past is forgotten, and your future is an empty book. You must find your own destiny, my brave adventurer." -- Turaga Nokama Click here to visit my library! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wiriamu Posted December 14, 2016 Share Posted December 14, 2016 (edited) Brilliant. Edited December 14, 2016 by Wiriamu Quote Voicing your opinions with tact is the best way to keep a discussion from becoming an argument.So far as I'm aware, it's pronounced like this: We're ee ah moo. Check out my Creations:EpicsG1 Battle for Spherus Magna - G2 A Lingering ShadowShort StoriesG1 Fallen Guardian - G2 Shadows of Past and Future (The Legend Continues Entry) Head of Stone, Heart of JungleMOCsMask Hoarder, Desert Scourge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToaTImeLord Posted December 15, 2016 Share Posted December 15, 2016 Just amazing.Loved it. Quote Hey I got a Flickr because I like making LEGO stuff. https://www.flickr.com/people/toatimelord/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted December 16, 2016 Share Posted December 16, 2016 “Oh! Well, I was thinking, why do all our Rahi have to have legs?” Maledrin explained, oblivious to his leader’s disapproval. “Then, it hit me: treads! It’s the only way to travel!” “Why is it… punching… the wall?” ------------------------- “Oh, um, you mean the bull, the tiger, and the battle crabs?” “Yes. Where are the viruses and liquid protodermis you were going to make them with?” Maledrin took a deep breath, glanced at the locked door in the corner of his lab labeled “Do Not Enter—Live Rahi” and said, “Yeah, about that…”Easily the best parts of this whole thing That would explain a lot about the 2001 Rahi. Splendid work, my friend! Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Inika Posted December 17, 2016 Author Share Posted December 17, 2016 Thanks for all the feedback, it means a lot to me! You guys are what keep me going. New episode of Okoto High soon, I promise! Quote "You are an absolute in these uncertain times. Your past is forgotten, and your future is an empty book. You must find your own destiny, my brave adventurer." -- Turaga Nokama Click here to visit my library! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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