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The Makuta of Eoire Nui - Review Topic


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Hello and welcome to the review topic of The Makuta of Eoire Nui. This is the story of Makuta Lusiix, from his first moments awake to the last he ever spent in the Matoran Universe. The story will be as canon-compliant as I can make it, although there are some things I feel I should mention.

1: The Makuta, in this continuity, were originally created in the image of the Great Beings. As such, they closely resembled Glatorians back before they became beings of pure energy.

2: Eoire Nui is the small island directly between the Southern Continent and Keetongu's Island.

3: Although canon characters are mentioned/appear, for the most part the story will concern Lusiix and other OCs.

4: Due to the massive 100,000-year-long time period we're dealing with here, timeskips may occur rather frequently between major events.

5: Canon characters may act strangely, depending on how familiar I am with them. I have not read any of the Bionicle books in a very long time, so any differences can hopefully be explained by most of the events of this story taking place long before we meet these characters in canon. If not, then I apologize for the inconsistency.

...I can't really think of anything else to put here at the moment, so I'll leave it at that for now, and leave you to go read The Makuta of Eoire Nui. Do let me know what you think!

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  • 5 months later...

You should update! I don't often get to read stories written in second person : ) I'm interested to see your version of the Makuta species interact with the world. Haha, and I definitely agree with you, 100k years of Matoran Universe history to cover is no small feat, and I'm sure you're up for the task. 

Also, small thing: you should add a link to your review topic somewhere in your story topic, I didn't see one. 

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