PhoenixFireBlaze Posted September 1, 2012 Share Posted September 1, 2012 (edited) Here is an amateur kit i made its still in process I called it the arrow kit. here feel free to leave your opinion on this sprite sheet. (it will most likely fail anyways ) Edited September 3, 2012 by Phoenixfire Quote ~After they make Styrofoam, what do they ship it in?~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted September 1, 2012 Share Posted September 1, 2012 That looks too much like Chimoru, buddy. Needs to be more original looking. And the masks look a little small... Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted September 1, 2012 Share Posted September 1, 2012 I think the mask size was to better proportion them as heads for Matoran.However, that is set inaccurate and it does look too much like Chimoru. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P~M Posted September 2, 2012 Share Posted September 2, 2012 (edited) BroBroBroThat's Chimoru.As the others have said, that looks a lot like Chimoru, especially the body and hands. In fact, on closer inspection, those ARE Chimoru hands. Now I don't have anything against Chimoru fan additions (ahem, please direct your attention to the links in my sig), but this is technically plagiarism.EDIT: The fists, I mean. Kudos on the open hands. Edited September 2, 2012 by Piraka~Mistika Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhoenixFireBlaze Posted September 2, 2012 Author Share Posted September 2, 2012 here thanks for your opinion but is this better? Quote ~After they make Styrofoam, what do they ship it in?~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted September 2, 2012 Share Posted September 2, 2012 Yes, that's much better. A rigid, mechanical-looking style. Now all you need is shading, that 3/4 view so they aren't staring at the viewers, and oh dear Mata Nui please don't base the masks off of RZMIK they look terrible. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted September 2, 2012 Share Posted September 2, 2012 That looks so much cooler and authentic than your smooth Chimmy stuff. Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhoenixFireBlaze Posted September 2, 2012 Author Share Posted September 2, 2012 (edited) That looks so much cooler and authentic than your smooth Chimmy stuff.Thanks! but what is chimmy?Yes, that's much better. A rigid, mechanical-looking style. Now all you need is shading, that 3/4 view so they aren't staring at the viewers, and oh dear Mata Nui please don't base the masks off of RZMIK they look terrible.And what is RZMIK? And thats actually ally the best 3/4 view i can do right now.. Edited September 2, 2012 by Phoenixfire Quote ~After they make Styrofoam, what do they ship it in?~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted September 4, 2012 Share Posted September 4, 2012 Chimmy=Chimoru.RZMIK=Rahi Zaku Mini Kit, a kit famous for good poses and use in MASes...and equally famous for having masks that aren't quite great. And the masks you made look heavily based on that kit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dRoko Posted September 4, 2012 Share Posted September 4, 2012 TNG, i think if a guy asks what RZMIK means, he does not even know what that means..... Anyways, the masks can be better, but it is good. Quote 8% of the people epically wins with comic making. If you are the 92% that fails at it, copy and paste this into your sig100% of people here are humans. If you are somehow a matoran, pate this in your sig.http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=9187 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P~M Posted September 15, 2012 Share Posted September 15, 2012 Yeah, that's much better. The shading needs some work, but it's much better and more original. I like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maphrox: Toa of Polygons Posted September 18, 2012 Share Posted September 18, 2012 It needs shading. At the moment it looks somewhat flat.Also, I think the age of black outlines in sprite kits is somewhat bygone. Quote I make stuff sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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