Chro Posted December 1, 2012 Share Posted December 1, 2012 Hey all! Another MOC today. This time it's Ateveno, Toa of Fluorine. Due to issues with keeping his element in check, and the fact that fluorine is the most reactive element, Ateveno wears immensely strong armor. He wields a heavy Electronegative Sword and two sets of double-barrel guns that fire bursts of fluorine gas, which can have numerous effects, anywhere from combustion to oxidation. Ateveno's Kanohi Sanok aids his aim with his weapons and elemental attacks. ^ CLICK TO GO TO GALLERY ^ Bit of an older MOC, made back in April. I know he's a bit strange in terms of proportions and stuff, but I still like him enough to post him, so I might as well. If you want to see more recent (better) MOCs from me, feel free to check out some of my other recent MOCs (including Locnor, the Toa Kanau, and Dakatar). Feedback for Ateveno is appreciated! Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted December 1, 2012 Share Posted December 1, 2012 wow that is amazing i love the color scheme and also the sword you made for him. clever use of meltdown pieces especially the one's you used on the shin areas. Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted December 1, 2012 Author Share Posted December 1, 2012 Thanks, Vox. I don't actually have Meltdown, but a friend loaned me the pieces at one point, so I figured I'd do something with 'em. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted December 9, 2012 Share Posted December 9, 2012 Your moc could go great with my storyline. Nice Colors on the armor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted December 9, 2012 Author Share Posted December 9, 2012 Thanks. I guess you could use him if you wanted to, he only has a very minor part in my own stories anyway. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted December 11, 2012 Share Posted December 11, 2012 He will have some major parts in the story. But the rest will be mostly minor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted December 11, 2012 Author Share Posted December 11, 2012 He will have some major parts in the story. But the rest will be mostly minor.Like I said, use him if you'd like, but please remember to credit him to me. Also, just wondering- what is this story? An epic or something that you're writing? Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted December 12, 2012 Share Posted December 12, 2012 The story is about Bionicle. It takes place in Spherus Magna before the Shattering. I have also tried making this into a book series, by me writing it. So far it's slow. Mainly it's about a group of toa who are fighting a war against an evil for over 1,000 years now. They can't seem to end it no matter how many battles they won. Also they have the aid of matoran and agori tribes that they befriended. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted December 12, 2012 Author Share Posted December 12, 2012 The story is about Bionicle. It takes place in Spherus Magna before the Shattering. I have also tried making this into a book series, by me writing it. So far it's slow.Mainly it's about a group of toa who are fighting a war against an evil for over 1,000 years now. They can't seem to end it no matter how many battles they won. Also they have the aid of matoran and agori tribes that they befriended.Well, this is fanon, so I won't hit it too hard. But just so you know, there were no Matoran or Toa in existence before the Shattering, and if they were they'd all be inside Mata Nui (although he hadn't been built yet). Still sounds interesting, though. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~garnira returns~ Posted December 23, 2012 Share Posted December 23, 2012 Looks great overall! Alot of custom body parts. I must say, I'm not a huge fan of the seemingly pointless buildup of parts on his shins. My favorite part would have to be the inclusion of those variouse trans yellow/green parts. Quote "Copy and paste me into your sig! The shadows command you!" ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)#tumaislove,tumaislife Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted December 23, 2012 Author Share Posted December 23, 2012 Thanks Garnira.I must say, I'm not a huge fan of the seemingly pointless buildup of parts on his shins. Well, not pointless- the legs looked really bare, and I had a very over-armored appearance in mind, so I stuck the Meltdown parts on there. You're right, though, that could've been done better. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted December 24, 2012 Share Posted December 24, 2012 I think he looks fine. I like the shin armor and chest armor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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