CeeCee Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 (edited) This was some what experimental. Im still knew to this but I hope you all like it. Sometimes I Dream I am not your usual dreamer. Or Maybe I am. Because you can never really know what someone dreams about. When I watch you sleep, I like to pretend I can, I pretend you dream the things I dream but I know it not to be true. If you could see my dream, what would you do? Would you shun me from your life? Suppress me from you memory until I’m nothing more than a blinking light? There are some dreams you can never forget though. Do you dream the same things as me? I can not be who I want to be because who I want to be cannot be. It’s a sad and lonesome truth but it’s one I live with. Sometimes I dream for hours. I let the wave a sadness wash over me, Then let the fires of rage flow my blood through my blood and I let it spill. I know you can’t dream like me and the things I dream about. Sometimes I dream of you, And I dream maybe, just maybe, that you dream of me too. Edited February 11, 2013 by Commander CeeCee Quote Signature Guidelines: Avatar and signature total file size may not exceed 250 KB! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkyLandOceAnna Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 I think that was very interesting. I like your choice of words and the idea you placed in your work. Thank you! Quote Wordsmith <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeeCee Posted February 11, 2013 Author Share Posted February 11, 2013 Thanks for the kind words Quote Signature Guidelines: Avatar and signature total file size may not exceed 250 KB! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 It's really good. I like how some lines made it sound poetic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeeCee Posted February 13, 2013 Author Share Posted February 13, 2013 Thats probably becuase it is a poem XD Thanks anyway though TFO!!! Quote Signature Guidelines: Avatar and signature total file size may not exceed 250 KB! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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