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flameman

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  1. all the first generation mask are cool, so i'll just mention the one i like aside of themwhich is:-toa mahri's mask, except for volitak and garai, i didn't really like them-toa phantoka's mask and onua mistika's mask-kualsi-the 2008's ignikayeah that's alot
  2. I don't really have much to say here as this is a simple MOC, it's good though, the design is nice and well detailed, although i don't think that tire around the body isn't a good idea, you don't have any chains ?and yeah agreed with onewa7 about the waists, and this guy really need some hands and legs, other than that the MOC is great, especially the weapon, i like the fact that you use noble mahiki, the mask shape fits really well with the matoran
  3. Overall i see thi is a very good MOC, i like that chest design which make him looks really good, the whole MOC itself is really well greebled and detailed, looks really good, those blue armor on the sides of his head somehow make him looks really awesome and manly, and it's been awhile since i see that old styled noble matatu used in MOC so it really give a good lookWeapon, i think is really good, i like that schyte which fits him really well, and the idea of making that bowgun-styled zamor launcher is geniusThere are, however, some part that i think need great improvement, i have two major complain here, first, the belly looks really skinny and too long, perhaps you can fix it, the chest and lower body is already good, and the secong the lower arms needs bulking, the shoulder is already good but the lower arms look small compared to other part of the MOCSome other minor complain that i have is the haus sticks out a bit far if you look it from the side, but again it's just a minor problem, i like that wheeled feetSo overall, it's a really great MOC, awesome job
  4. This is one awesome creation with one awesome spine, the idea of using that bendable stick (or whatever you call that piece ) above the original rahkshi spine is really great, perhaps if you were to change those axles to something with sharper end it will be better.The body overall is okay, i pretty like it, the things that bug me are the hand looks kinda blocky for me, maybe making it look more organic will help,and you might wanna fill that gappy space on his elbows, the upper legs are good but the feet, just like hand, look kinda blockyThe tail is okay but can be better if you make it a bit longer and turn it to the other side so it's poiting to the back, not a big problem thoughOverall, it's a great creation, and btw i don't think you have too many black here, the color distribution is good, awesome job and keep MOCing
  5. thanks guys, what's wrong with the legs if i may know ? honestly it was my favourite part
  6. ^^^^click to enlarge^^^^hey guys, got a new MOC here, it's actually been finished since about a month ago but i just have the time to post it now, a red mechanical robot unit, with shoulder mounted cannon MOCpages Flickr BrickshelfC& C are welcomed
  7. and i thought this topic is dead alreadymeh, good thing it hasn't thanks, it was inspired by furno's bike yeah, takanuva's ussanui, and furno's bike, and also some other several vehicles, i based this think on many stuffs thanks, yeah i make it looks rather organic than technic on purpose actually if you look at the riding pics, it was removed, it didn't fit the guys well when he was riding, thanks anyway
  8. this is awesome, wings make it looks really cool, and i always love vahki :Danyway, although it's just a simple toamod build, you've made it really well, that claws remind me of exo toa, which is very nice, and perhaps if you could make the body bigger or bulkier it'll be much betterand try to take pic in a plain background, so it can be seen better,, and try to add some more color maybe red to match the vahki's head ?
  9. agreed with Fsnorglepuff about this guy being looks really similar with matoro mahri, and i actually pretty like the idea of using that mata bodym, but as what fsnorglepuff(typing this name is a pain) said, it might be better if you don't rely on the inika build, maybe do some costum build or something, or if you still want to use it try to costumise it a bit, add something to cover that empty place below the mata body and on the upper sides of the mata body too.as for the arms i think it looks a bit too long, maybe use other pieces as lower arms ? and you might wanna bulk the legs a bit to make it betteranyway, nice job on this , although needs improvement, but still nice
  10. tohunga was the species name before they change it to matoran in 2003(if i'm not wrong),but at the time they were still called tohunga, all the matoran character sets released were still on their weakened form, so some people still use the term tohunga to refer to the matoran's 2001/2002 weakened form/buiild
  11. somehow it looks nice, although basically it's only a toamod build, but it looks really nice, i like the idea of using that vezon's head as shoulder, although it looks a bit big, but still nice, and the use of that corrupted hau make it alot better, and that whip is nice too, maybe if you were to make the toros a bit longer and the belly a bit thiner it'll be better, IMO at leastanyway nice job on this guy
  12. i'll say you're one of the few MOCer who i know have been using modified pieces in a very good way, it's really alot of improvement from the previous one, you really did a good job to the mask, and the overall body design, and the proportion is just awesome, especially the belly partso, overall, awesome job, keep MOCing
  13. tohunga, somehow it sounds nicer to mebut i still use the term matoran when speaking with another Bionicle fan
  14. i don't really have much to comment here other than awesome costum feet and nice way to put the zamor, which has been said by many others here, my additions are i love the way you made that costum limbs there, flows really well, adn if you want to you can add something to the head, since it looks kinda empty, maybe small horns or something ? other than that i think it's a great MOC
  15. I actually didn't intend it to be a water-specific vehicle, gahlok didnot only move on water right ? but still anyway that's a pretty interesting idea, thanks
  16. this thing is awesome, that's it, this got to be the neatest matoran build i've ever seen, and can still be easily recognized as taipu,very nice
  17. this is awesome, although it really looks a mata nui revamp, anyway, this is very nice, i like how the body is built, really looks good an bulky, although it seems here that the yellow pieces are all gathered to the torso while the yellow are the legs and crotch, maybe if you spread the color more equally it'll help, and that legs are nice but i think you need to bulk the hordika legs part, it looks kinda skinny compared to the body, anyway still, it's a very great job, nice work
  18. so far can see that it's an awesome MOC< it'll be better if you could provide a full image which shows the whole MOC, not just parts of it, as i can't find any of those in the brickshelf gallery, anyway, i love how you do the left arm, really bulky, the legs are nice too, i'm not a fan of those mechanical limbs though because they didn't look really mechanical to me, maybe add some greebles and/or cables, tube or something might help.and I don't know why, but that torso armor made of 3 blue HF pieces actually works hereoverall, pretty great job, keep up the great work
  19. okay so i left bzp for a few days and return to found a lot of similarly named MOC on the BZP, which confuses me, just for info my MOC's name is bohrohicle, which stands for bohrok vehicle, not bohronicle, yeah i saw a guy with a MOC named bohronicle but when I see it it doesn't look anything like my MOC (and no credit) so i guess it has nothing to do with me, just the name happened to be similar, maybe you guys are confused by that, there are only 3 bohrohicle i found so far in BBC, which is mine, this one, and a red one by clickanyway i love to see another revamp of mine, i'm happy this one is a little different from mine, it really looks good as a snowmobile although it looks a bit empty below the user's seat, fill it with something, and maybe trying to bulking up the left and right sides of that bohrok head plate might help, and those onua weapon as wheel on the back are perfect ideasas for the matoran i think it's a really good job, the design is very nice i think , so overall, great job
  20. not bad, in fact, i like it, you managed to create the vehicle really similarly to mine, i love the way you use those avtoran jetpack instead of zamor holder too, looks nice, although you need to improve the matoran IMO, maybe bigger legs, i think you've done a great job, :Dbtw to make the pic smaller, it took so long to load
  21. lol boxer ? you mean boxor ? :Pjk, thanks, i never got any boxor myself either, i started as bionicle fans at around 2003 so i don't have much sets from before that year okay, gotta admit, you did a really good job, it's awesome, i really like it, i also started thinking that your idea of using avtoran jetpack is better than mine which use zamor holder, too bad i don't have any, matoran seems nice, but legs need fixing IMO, other than that you've made a really great remake of my MOC, nice job tahnks, i don't have any idea for some krana shooting device though
  22. thanks , and yes it is lol thanks, and one thing, it's supposed to be gahlok, not gahdok, the krana is orange and grey because gahlok's krana is orange, and grey because i don't have any other blue, so i just find some neutral color, and yes i feel like putting something on the krana's back like the 03 matoran but gear somehow looks weird on it soDang it, I should have known that. They're just one letter apart! Guess I can remove my self-proclaimed title of canon master. :PToo bad you don't have at least Gahlok's (fixed ) arms to fix the grey, it would really improve the MOC. I already started on reverse engineering this MOC in red, with some alterations, but I'm having trouble with the front and bottom. Could you post a pic of the bottom and/or instructions ? Thanks!EDIT: Neverm ind, I didn't see the MOCPages link. Expect the red one tomorrow!!oh lol a red one must be great, can't wait for it heyy, thanks, actually i don't have any blue HF piece currently so i have to use the old pieces
  23. thanks, i actually just wanted it to be vehicle riden by normal matoran but since i don't have any good mask for the matoran soo thanks, bohrok are awesome lol thanks, and one thing, it's supposed to be gahlok, not gahdok, the krana is orange and grey because gahlok's krana is orange, and grey because i don't have any other blue, so i just find some neutral color, and yes i feel like putting something on the krana's back like the 03 matoran but gear somehow looks weird on it so that'll be cool, too bad i only have 3 bohrok so i can't make something like that, thanks anyway actually i didn't purposely leave it open for other bohrok colors, in fact i just realised it when you say it , thanks anyway thanks, i use blue zamor to fit the color okay why is everyone saying i's gahdok, it's clearly made of gahlok's part not gahdok , and well you can, but i don't have pieces for other colors so it's not possible for me, and as i said above, i was running out of blue thanks, that rpg of yours sound awesome
  24. honestly i never tried to make forts out of them (but it seems to be a good idea to try), i just used them for pieces storage
  25. it's been a while since I posted anything here, so i think i'm gonna post this oneso guys, imagine, what if, bohrok, has somehow became smarter, so they decide to rebuild themselves cause they already had enough time in their ball like body, so they use some of their parts to make a matoran-like body for its krana to use, and then use the rest of their body parts to make some awesome looking vehicle ?on to the pic ^^^^ click to enlarge ^^^^since the brickshelf gallery is not yet public you can see more images on the MOCpages instead EDIT: Okay the brickshelf gallery is public :)any C & C are welcomed
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