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  1. Review Topic -> http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4843 Chapter 2 The five Agori and the (short) Glatorian walk along the Jungle trail. Acon slashes the vines and tall plantlife as they walk along the path. Sahmad walks over to Acon and says, “So, how much loot do you think we’ll be able to grab while we’re there?” Acon says, “We’re not there to steal, we’re there to find answers.” Sahmad smiles and says, “Oh come on, you and I both know that ain’t true, nobody’s dumb enough to travel all this way, just to ask a few dumb questions.” Acon glares and says, “I’m getting tired, maybe you should cut for a while.” Sahmad shrugs and begins blasting away at the shrubs with his Thornax launcher. Acon yells, “NO! Cut it, you’ll damage the plants’ growing process if you do it that way!” Sahmad rolls his eyes, but begins cutting the plants with his blade. Acon falls back to Blaneous and says, “Why’d you have to bring him along, he doesn’t care anything but money.” Blaneous says, “I thought we might run into trouble. If we do, Sahmad and Telluris are two of the best fighters in the tribe.” Acon nods, but without enthusiasm, he could tell that this greedy Agori of the Iron Tribe, known as Sahmad, were not going to get along well.A tall Vorox stares at a figure in front of him. The figure was green and heavily built, and had plantlife coming out of him, slowly the figure spoke, “I know your men can do better than this, I know you can take care of a few Skrall Rogues. I’ve given you resources, money, weapons, even extra food! What else must I do to make you get rid of these insects?!” The Vorox says, “They are more than just a few simple Skrall, they are members of the leader class!” The Vorox also adds, “Although, thankfully, we haven’t seen the great Skrall Warrior, the mighty Tuma. He must have been left on Bara Magna during the Shattering.” The green figure says, “I don’t care if they are of the leader class! They are a group of less than 10 Skrall! Your troops should be more than capable of handling them, I want that map, do you hear me?!” The Vorox leader nods and says, “Yes-yes sir.” The green figure nods and says, “Good.” Then he vanishes into the darkness without a sound…
  2. joev14

    Shadows Of Miserix

    Shadows of Miserix Review Topic: http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4841 Comic 4 Toa Joev dives into the air with Kriah and Dokerio right behind him. He fires several shots from his staff, and makes one hit that knocks Chirox to the left, causing him to drop one of several objects he has in a bag. Joev orders Kriah to pick it up while he and Dokerio continue the chase. Soon Chirox spirals up a tall building, and Joev and Dokerio lose him. They return to the spot where Kriah had been left, and he says, “Did you catch him?” Dokerio answers before Joev can, and says “No, we lost him in the crowds” then Joev looks spots a small object that Kriah is holding, he says “Is that the thing that Chirox dropped?” Kriah nods and hands it to Joev, Joev’s eyes widen as he sees what is on the object. The object was a tablet, with some strange markings at the top he didn’t understand, but as he goes, there is one spot in plain Matoran Language, it reads,Toa Yelra Journal, Entry #92I write this with fear of capture in my heart; Kax was attacked and killed yesterday, and I don’t even know who did it. Although I have a feeling that It has to do with Teridax’s plan, yesterday I found that Teridax himself along with a bunch of other Makuta, including Gorast, Krika, Bitil, Chirox, Icarax, Vamprah, Malox, and Spiriah. The only members I didn’t notice were Teris (the Makuta of Stelt), Antroz, and Mutran. I have a feeling that their absences are not of chance, I think they are gone for some reason, but I’m not sure why. The Brotherhood is planning something, I just wish I knew what it was.End of Entry #92, signed, Toa Yelra, Toa of Water, and Protector of the island of Tritle.Joev turns his head up to the sky, then he looks angrily back at the tablet, and then turns back to Dokerio and Kriah, and says to Kriah, “Tell Helryx there will need to be at least one more Toa assigned to Tritle, and if she’s smart, she’ll send a hundred”… Comic 5 Kriah nods and flies upward and north, towards the island of Daxia, where the Helryx’s base is. Dokerio and Joev study the tablet for a while longer, and discover a crudely-drawn map on the back of it. The map has a circle around a building towards the north of the island. Joev and Dokerio, after a few hours of searching, are able to locate the building. Dokerio steps inside and motions to Joev that it’s safe, and they begin to search the area. Suddenly, Dokerio dives forward, grabs Joev bye the arm and throws him out of a 2nd story window nearby. Joev, dazed, looks up just in time to see Makuta Spiriah and Makuta Bitil blast several shots of Shadow Energy at the building, causing it to implode. Joev screams, “NOOO!” Angered at the loss of his teammate and friend, he yells and fires several bolts of Lightning at the two Makuta. He is able to down Bitil, but Spiriah escapes. Joev blasts Bitil again, and then jumps on top of him, pinning him down to the ground. All at once, Joev hears a voice speak coldly to him, saying, “I wouldn’t do that if I were you…” and Joev turns to see the tall, slender, black and red figure of… MAKUTA TERIDAX!Toa Vakira jumps to his feet and whirls his head around from side-to-side. He turns to see Toa Cryptid and Toa Noreko walk into the room. Cryptid says, “Oh! Vakira, I didn’t think you would be awake for another week.” Vakira locks eyes with Cryptid and says, “Where’s Joev?!” Cryptid’s astonished look changes to a look of fear as he says, “Tritle. He, Dokerio, and Kriah went down there to get find Toa Yelra.” Vakira’s eyes turn to a look of terror as he rushes at Cryptid and yells, “Cryptid! We need to get there now! Joev is in terrible danger!” Cryptid stops Vakira from rushing out of the room, and says, “Hold on a second, why is Joev in such terrible danger?” Vakira’s eyes turn to cold, lost, insane pits of terror as he says, “Tritle is a Makuta Base. Teridax is trying to lure Joev and the rest us there, and personally kill us all!”… Comic 6 Toa Vakira, Toa Cryptid, Toa Indraklon, Toa Sprin, and Toa Noreko zoom across the sky towards the island of Tritle. Vakira shuts of his foot jets and does a flip, landing with perfect balance on top of a building. He activates his telescopic eye ability and spots something. He yells at Cryptid and says, “Cryptid! Over there!” he says as he points towards a building several yards away. Cryptid and the others zoom towards the building, weapons at the ready, Cryptid’s eyes widen as he sees a tall dark red shadowy figure standing over the body of Joev! Cryptid and Noreko combine their powers and cause Teridax’s metal weapons and armor to magnetize together, Cryptid yells, “Indraklon, Sprin, get Joev!” The two Toa nod and they fly in and grab Joev, and just as they do, Teridax activates his own powers and shrouds himself in shadows, causing the Toa to be unable to see him.Vakira continues to watch the battle, but suddenly he hears footsteps behind him, he whirls around and finds himself face-to-face with Makuta Spiriah. The Makuta laughs quietly and says, “What’s wrong Toa, surprised to see me?” Vakira readies his weapons, a pair of long blades similar to the ones wielded long ago by Toa Lhikan. Spiriah smiles and readies his weapons as well, a strange modified Midak Skyblaster changed so that instead of light it now fires shadow, as well as a long tri bladed claw made out of a strange shadowy version of liquid protodermis, contained in translucent solid protodermis. Vakira jumps into the air and does a backflip, throwing one of his blades at Spiriah, but it is just slapped away by Spiriah’s massive claw. Spiriah fires his blaster several times and Vakira. Still in the middle of doing a backflip is caught off-guard, Vakira spins clumsily in the air and manages to dodge the shots, but he lands hard and unbalanced on the ground with a thud. Spiriah stares heartlessly at Vakira, and then he slashes Vakira across the back with his claw, Vakira lets out a scream of pain as his fluids begin to leak out of his back, he begins to feel faint from the loss of ‘blood’, then all goes black…
  3. You can read my book here!: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4845Please give me some feedback, don't be afraid to be a critique!
  4. On the wiki: http://exo-force.wik...en_City_Origins (perms given by B6)Review Topic: http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4846(Previous Book) Book 1: The Gorge: http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4690(Next Book) Book 3: Peace Origins: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=5034Hey everyone, I'm back with another exo-force book! This one hits on the mysteries of the past long before exo-force was established, before robots were built, when there was a small community living inside a well-known city, known as the Golden City, follow Kye as he attempts to protect the city from an intelligent race of creatures known as the Chronoids.Long ago, before the war between exo-force and the robots, there was a Golden City. Shrouded in mystery up until now, the history of the Golden City is revealed in detail in this book. Follow Kye as he lives through the last days of the Golden City, fending off the dreaded Chronoids in an effort to protect the city’s inhabitants. Chapter 1 Gold Kye (pronounced KY) rushed down the steps that led to his house. He swerved round the corner at top speed, nearly knocking over a merchant that was selling fruit at the side of the road. He continued running down the street. Kye’s father had sent for him; Kye’s father was one of the most well-known scientists in the entire Golden City, and was currently working on a breakthrough discovery in the progress of renewable power. Kye came to a large building on the left side of town, he walked in, and a secretary at the front desk nodded her head, pointing at an elevator on the right side of the room. Kye entered it and pressed the button for the basement level, and he felt the elevator slide slowly down underground. The doors opened and he came into a large familiar room, his father’s experiment lab. He stared around; there were several large mechs, known as battle machines. There was one in particular that caught his eye, a red and white one with a massive golden cannon and shield, his father had dubbed it, “The Golden Guardian”. It used breakthrough technology that allowed it to fly short distances, even though it was extremely heavy because of all the real gold-platinum alloy that made up the shield, cannon, and some of the armor. His father had given Kye the privilege of testing it in the training arena, and he had been able to defeat even the Blade Titan, the Golden City’s main ground defense battle machine. Kye walked over to his father, who was typing around on a keyboard and smiling as he worked. He tapped his father’s shoulder. “Kye, good you’re here!” His father said, “We’ve found a way to channel the power of the sun and power a battle machine, and it’s got a strong enough battery that it can last for several hours, even if it’s not in direct sunlight.” His father pointed at the computer screen, and Kye looked at it. There were several lines of text that he didn’t understand, but there was a blueprint for a solar panel, it was coated with a thin layer of glass, and the light appeared to be magnified down into a solar panel underneath, it was very small, but because of the magnification, it was far stronger than the original beam of light. Kye turned to his father and said, “Have you tested it yet?” His father shook his head and said, “No, but that’s why I wanted you here. We’ve set up three of these panels on the Golden Guardian, one on the back of the shield, and two in the upper cockpit; I want you to test it out, since you did so well for the Golden Guardian’s first test run.” Kye’s eyes widened and he tried to hold in his excitement, his father didn’t need an answer, “Great! I knew you’d be excited, let’s get the Golden Guardian up to the surface and we can try it out in the arena!” About thirty minutes later, the massive battle machine known as the Golden Guardian had been moved into the large training area known simply as, ‘The Arena’. Kye got up into the cockpit, and moved his hands over the two touch panels that were used to move the battle machine’s hands. Kye spoke through the battle machine’s speaker system and said, “Alright, I’m going to power up.” His father nodded and gave him a thumbs up, and Kye pressed a large orange button to his left. The battle machine shuddered a little, then its arms rose up from their sides and the legs moved into the same stance that Kye was in. That was his favorite part of the battle machine, due to the limited size of the cockpit, he wasn’t able to have movement detectors for the battle machine’s arms, but the feet of the battle machine had movement detectors and would act like his did. Kye moved the battle machine’s arms, testing to make sure they were working. The battle machine moved exactly the same way they did when they had the standard Magnetized Oroniate power source. He moved around a bit, and he looked up as the Blade Titan emerged from its gate on the other side of the arena. The pilot, Shyke (pronounced SHIKE), the best trained pilot in the city and well known for his piloting skills, glared at Kye from inside the cockpit. Kye thought to himself, “He’s still sore about last month when I defeated him with the Golden Guardian.” Kye’s father and his assistant rushed back through the gate. His father’s voice yelled over the speakers, “Three, Two, One, FIGHT!” Kye moved in a split second, using the battle machine’s short-range flight, he jumped up into the air, firing several shots from his cannon, just barely missing the Blade Titan’s left arm. Shyke dove to the left, wasting no time in unloading his heavy ammo on Kye, firing his four shoulder-mounted missile pods at Kye. The first two hit the Golden Guardian’s shield, but the next two slipped by and hit the cockpit, knocking Kye off his feet and causing the Golden Guardian to crash to the ground. Kye shook his head back and forth, dazed. Shyke had wasted no time, and was already half way across the arena, preparing to finish the Golden Guardian off. Kye stood back up again, swinging his shield in front of him for protection as the Blade Titan slammed into him. Kye pulled the shield back against his wrist, and swung it wrist-mounted-dagger-style at the blade titan, slicing off one of the shoulder armor pieces. Shyke jumped back, avoiding another attack from the Golden Guardian’s shield. Suddenly the Golden Guardian fell flat on its face into the sand, and Kye looked over at the power level reading. The bar had suddenly dropped to zero. He flipped on the emergency energy, powered by a small source of Magnetized Oroniate. He spoke into the microphone and said, “Dad, I think the power just conked out.” His father rushed over to the downed battle machine, and with the help of the Blade Titan they managed to roll it over. Kye pushed open the cockpit’s door, and jumped out onto the ground. He walked over to his father, who was examining the solar panel on the shield. He said, “The solar panel shattered and then fried the battery when you used the shield as a blade, it couldn’t handle that much stress. We’ll have to either find another place to put the solar panel, or just have to make sure it isn’t used as a blade again.” Suddenly a voice was heard over the speakers, “The Golden City is under attack! Chronoids are attacking the western gate!” Kye’s eyes widened and he said, “Western Gate, that’s only a little ways from here!” Suddenly he looked up, two massive battle machines coated with thick black and dark yellow paint flew over the top of the wall to his right, aiming their cannons at Kye and his father…
  5. You can read my book here: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4690Please give me some feedback, don't be afraid to be a critique!
  6. Tales of Bota Magna -> http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4842Go ahead and tell me what you think! Don't be afraid to be a critique, I'm looking for all the advice I can get!
  7. Review Topic -> http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4843 Introduction Hey everyone, I’ve always been very interested in the mysterious third planet in the Bionicle series, Bota Magna. We’ve never really heard much about this planet, and pretty much only know it once orbited Bara Magna, was part of Spherus Magna and was later drawn to Bara Magna to reform Spherus Magna, and that it was a Jungle Planet. So I decided to write a series about it, it’s going to be in the same alternate universe as my other series, Shadows of Miserix, and at some point I may even have crossovers between the two series, I hope you enjoy, The Tales of Bota Magna. Chapter 1 Acon, an Agori of the Jungle Tribe, sat as he remembered what had happened 37,000 years ago, it felt like it had been yesterday. He and his friends had been searching for shells at a beach, and they had gone into a strange cave, suddenly they heard a loud crack, and they went outside the cave. They were shocked to find that the ground had begun to crack, Acon’s best friend, Tarduk, had rushed out to find a frantic Agori of the water tribe who had fallen into the crack, he had managed to pull her out, but as he did, the ground split even more, and Tarduk was stuck on one side, with Acon on the other. Acon watched as Tarduk grew smaller and smaller, until finally he couldn’t see him anymore. Later he found out that a large piece of Spherus Magna had broken off from the rest of the planet, now renamed Bota Magna. Acon and his friends along with several members of the Iron Tribe and the Sand Tribe had rebuilt their homes. The Iron Tribe stayed near the Jungle Tribe camp, but the Sand Tribe liked to keep to themselves on the other side of the massive Karzahni Jungle. Recently, he had heard that the Sand Tribe had been seen even less than usual, and Acon wanted to know why. He had gathered a few others, two of his friends from the Jungle Tribe, Lanok and Parea, as well as a friend from the Iron Tribe, Blaneous. He stared as Parea walked over, and Acon found himself drooling at her, he slapped his hand over his mouth and said to himself, “Don’t make a fool out of yourself, you want her to like you, not think you’re an cool dude.” She stared at him and said, “Hi.” He mumbled, “Oh, uh, hi Parea, um, nice to see you, your, err, legs look great!” she stared at him and he slapped his forehead. Suddenly before either of them can say anything, Lanok walked over and said, “Hey! Are we all set? Can we go now? Huh? Can we?!” Acon tries to speak, but Parea says, “We’re still waiting for Blaneous.” Suddenly, as if on cue, Blaneous, along with two other figures, walked over. He says, “Hey guys, sorry I’m later, I’d like you to meet Telluris and Sahmad, they asked me if they could come along”…
  8. Hey there everyone, I wrote this series a long ways back, and it looks like with the new BZP it was taken down :sadface: but I decided to post it again since I have all the comics saved in a document on my computer, enjoy!Shadows of Miserix Review Topic: http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4841 Shadows of Miserix: Season 1 Q & A Q: Eleven: Why did Toa Joev, Toa Strelk, and Toa Sprin kill Malox? Isn’t the rule of the Toa, "No killing" with the only exceptions being Lessovihk and Helryx?A: Joev: In this alternate universe, Toa are allowed to kill. (Yes, I know that's not the best answer, but that's just about as clear and simple as I can make it)Q: Cholie: Who is Malox and why is he wearing the Kraahkan?A: Joev: Makuta Malox is the Makuta of Mata Nui (the island), since Makuta Miserix was captured, Malox handled the guarding of his island until the Makuta could rescue Miserix, the reason he was wearing the Kraahkan, is currently...UNKOWN! (But it will be explained at some point, I promise).Q: Myself: I realized after I wrote the comics, I was a Toa of Lightning (which are only female *Facepaaaalm*) so I decided to explain why I'm not female.A: Joev: I was originally a Toa of Air, but when I caused a thunderstorm along with a Toa of Water (likely Toa Yhano), somehow it caused lightning to hit me, since I was the largest source of electrical current in the area, and it caused my Air power to be channeled out of me and into the ground, and my powers were replaced by the element of Lightning. (Yes it sounds crazy, but that's the best explanation i could come up with xP).If there are any more questions, please post them in the review topic, and I will answer them either personally, or have them answered through a comic. Thanks for all your questions, most of them had me stumped for awhile. xD Comic 1 Toa Joev (pronounced Jove), Toa Sprin, and Toa Strelk stared up at a tall platform, where another figure stood. The figure’s name was Makuta Malox. He had attacked the three Toa and had been their enemy for several weeks, but now the Toa had him cornered. Malox stared coldly at the Toa. he wore the Kanohi Kraahkan, the great mask of shadows, thought to have been lost after Makuta Miserix’s reign, but apparently wasn’t. Malox sneered and activated his mask power, shrouding the Toa in mist and darkness. Toa Sprin activated his Kanohi Akaku, the great mask of X-Ray vision, allowing him to see through the darkness. He jumped high into the air, following Malox as he tried to escape. Sprin blasted bolts of Ice interlaced with light at his enemy, pinning him to the wall. Toa Joev and Toa Strelk, now free from the bonds of the shadow and mist, dove at the ceiling, toppling down two piles of large crates filled with Levitation Discs on top of the Makuta. The three Toa flew out of the building and blasted the supports holding the building, causing it to topple down. They continued to fly until they reached a small structure, with an emblem with the seal of Protodermis etched on it. The three Toa soon landed and walked into the building. Eight other Toa were also in front of the building, speaking to each other. When they noticed they stopped and turned to face the Joev. “Where is Vakira?” said Joev. “He went to Ga-Wahi on a mission to attain a mask of Levitation, after the blast that hit Ga-Koro, we need everything related to Levitation we can to hold it up from falling down and smashing Metru-Nui.” Said a green armored Toa known as Toa Indraklon. Suddenly, a Red armored figure came hurtling out of the sky and managed to land, he had a terror-struck look in his eyes and he panted “It- It was a- a trap,” he fainted and a Toa of Iron called Cryptid rushed forward to catch the worn out Toa of Fire. Joev stepped forward and stared at the Toa of Fire, his mask was cracked with a long gash down the upper right corner, running down to the central-bottom part of the mask, there were more larger gashes on the Toa of Fire’s arms and legs, and one particularly long one down his left side, there was also one spot in particular that interested him, towards the bottom of Vakira’s left leg, were seven very small letters that had been crudely scratched into the Toa of Fire’s ankle, the letters spelled the word, Teridax. Comic 2 “Teridax.” Joev said, “I always knew he’d try to take control after Miserix was imprisoned, but I didn’t know he’d do it like this…” A tall Toa clad in Oak red armor steped forward. “I’ll take it from here.” Says the Toa of Plasma, whose name is Natroz. Natroz and another Toa named Werko carry Vakira over to a river nearby, and Natroz begins removing the Toa of Fire’s armor, then he begins fusing the damaged tissue together with his mask of Fusion. Joev walks over and picks up Vakira’s mask. It is cracked beyond repair, and as Joev turns it over, it cracks and splits into several pieces in his hands. Joev turns to a Toa of Water named Yhano and the Toa of Stone named Werko and says, “Go search around where Vakira was supposed to get that Levitation mask, you might find something.” The Toa nod and head north. Joev walks over to the Toa of Iron known as Cryptid, and says, “Do you think you can carve Vakira a new mask?” Cryptid rubs his chin for a minute, then says, “I can, but it will take a while, it’s hard to find good discs for carving masks, and it all depends on what mask he wants, his old mask was a mask of Levitation, I’ll never get my hands on a levitation disc to carve it, with the whole problem in Ga-Koro and the accident going on there.” Joev stares at the ground, then replies, “Lets wait until he can tell us what mask he wants.” Joev replies. Joev begins walking away, shouting for two other Toa to follow him, a Toa of Gravity, named Dokerio, and a Toa of Sonics, named Kriah. Together, Joev, Kriah, and Dokerio fly in the direction of an island hundreds of thousands of miles south, far down on an island very unexplored, few even knew it’s name, an island known as Tritle, way far down below the island of Artidax… Comic 3 Makuta Teridax stared coldly through a window overlooking the city of Maruta, a large civilization on the island of Tritle. Teridax smelled the air, it had the stench of war in it, and he loved it. As he watched, three figures, obviously Toa, landed on the shore of the island, they wore masks carved with intricate slits in them, and the one at the head of them was a Toa that Teridax knew well, it was Toa Joev. Teridax watched as the Toa continued to walk past the building, he knew soon the Toa would find out from someone where he was, so he had to find another spot to stay while the Toa were on the island, then he could return to his business, rescuing Miserix from his prison, and then, he and Miserix would rule side-by-side, conquering cities, islands, and eventually, the entire known universe! Teridax smiled an evil smile, and disappeared among the shadows.Toa Joev, Toa Dokerio, and Toa Kriah walked along the streets of the city of Maruta, it was a large city with many inhabitants, traders, and other species of all sorts came to the island for many reasons. Some came to buy transport to even lower islands, some came to hear news of danger and help, some came to sell goods, and unfortunately, even though it was against the law here, some came to find illegal smuggling jobs, theft, and even assassination. The three Toa walked over to a small building, one of the homes of the few Toa brave enough to guard and keep the peace on the island. The Toa was a friend of Joev, a Toa of Water named Toa Yelra, she and one other Toa, a Toa of Earth named Toa Kax, were in charge of the islands peace-keeping. As Joev walked closer, he noticed something very strange, the door appeared to have been fiddled with, and as the three Toa got closer, they saw a figure blast his way through the back wall and fly away, Toa Joev only sees a glimpse, but to his astonished surprise, the figure a Makuta, “Chirox!” Joev said in a low whisper…
  9. You can read this series here -> http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4840 Post your comments below! Don't be shy to be a critique, I'm looking for any advice you can give me!
  10. I totally agree, xD the sentai fortress is way to fragile. Though I agree that it should have leg articulation, I see why lego decided not to add that, it wouldn't take very long for the hinges to wear out, and then it would just fall over every time you try to set it up. yes, I saw those, I never knew exo-force's working name was Battlepeak, I actually kind of like the ring of that a bit more then I like exo-force xD I've posted some of the artwork on the wiki, and I wanted to link there, but unless I'm mistaken you aren't allowed to link, or even mention blog sites like that...I recently ordered the exo-force books from the library, and got all except #4: Ghost of the Past (which happens to be my favorite ) today. I remember very well the first, fourth, and fifth book storylines, but not so much books 2 and 3, so I'll be able to read them and add to the summary pages of those books on the wiki. Also got the Secret of the Golden Tower Puzzle Adventure Book, haven't read that one yet, so it'll be interesting whether or not lego just took exo-force and made a little-kid styled book or if it'll actually be a book aimed at an older audience.
  11. http://exo-force.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Joev14/Exo-Force_Cubee_Crafts You can get them all here :3
  12. I've recently found a ton of info on the pre-exo-force developement phase, it's original working name was BattlePeak, based of the idea that there's a mountain split in two by strange energies. There are loads of concept art drawings, adding them to the wiki
  13. Actually there were only 4 other golden guardians it's shown in the comics, but I agree. And yes it did have washing machines for feet xP. And by silver, do you mean just a normal silver devastator? cuz I got the same kind that comes with the claw crusher with my iron condor, and according to box that's the one it was supposed to come with.EDIT: I just looked at the online photo and you're right, it is supposed to be red, I never knew that So can I just call lego and have them send me a replacement?Also about the shadow crawler, if you look in the exo-force comics you see a ton of clips that show 4-legged shadow crawlers, I wonder if lego had the comics pre-made and then changed the design of the set to three legs and forgot/decided not to change the comics...Another Edit: You got skype? I'd like to add you to the exo-force chat
  14. I didn't get one, didn't even know they had those also, my favorite BM, I can't pick xD, so I'll pick one from each year, in the Split Mountain Era, probably the MDT or maybe the Silent Strike. For the Golden City Era, definatly the Aero Booster, that thing is so cool
  15. On the wiki: http://exo-force.wik...ok_1:_The_Gorge (Perms given by B6)Review Topic: http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4844(Next Book) Book 2: Golden City Origins: http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4845 Introduction Alrightsy everyone, I've been recently working on an exo-force epic series, trying to fill in some of the blanks that were left when exo-force had it's cliffhanger ending, and not just ones from the Deep Jungle Era, I begin the series with a well-known event of the White Lightning vs. Bridge Walker battle, and you find out many things that were left a mystery in Book 4: Ghost of the Past, of the original canon series.The battle between the White Lightning and B.W.1 is over, with Ha-Ya-To leaving victorious, but Meca One’s battle is just beginning, read the previously untold story as Meca One travels through a deep and seemingly unending journey as he attempts to get back to his base, all while avoiding a strange creature that feeds on raw energy. Chapter 1 The Fall “Nooooooooo!” Meca One screamed as his Bridge Walker, B.W.1 plummeted over the edge of the bridge. The leader of the robots felt the wind rush past his metallic body. He stared downwards as the massive walker fell down deeper and deeper into the giant pit known as the Gorge that lay between the two halves of the Sentai Mountain. He calculated that at this rate of decent, he would not survive the fall. Suddenly, the walker hit water with a loud metallic clap, and one of its massive arms broke off of the battle machine, and flew off to the right of the water. Meca One felt the water rushing into the cockpit, but felt no urgency to get out, his body was immune to water; but the bridge walker’s twin power cores were not, the vehicle began to short circuit, and Meca One slammed his metal claw on the eject button, but it didn’t respond. He swung his outstretched hand at the roof of the cockpit, slicing open the layer of glass and plastic alloy used for the windshield. He swam upwards as B.W.1 exploded beneath him. His gold head broke the surface, and he pushed his way over to the bank. He stared around; there were some forms of vegetation around him, a few mosquitoes buzzed around in the air. Suddenly Meca One noticed something, the arm of B.W.1 lay several yards away, and one of his gunners, a Devastator, was emerging from the remains of the cannon arm. The robot stepped onto the ground, and saw Meca One immediately and it kneeled and said, “Leader, what are your orders?” Meca One said, “Are you still fully functional? Do you have your back-up power cell and hand-held blaster?” The robot nodded and said, “Yes, leader.” Meca One said, “Good, give me your extra cell, I’m going to need it since mine was lost with the rest of the unit. Get your weapon, we must figure out a way to reach the base again.” The Devastator reached into the damaged B.W.1 arm, and pulled out a small red energy cell, which it handed to Meca One, then it grabbed a blaster. The two robots walked into a dense Jungle, silently looking around, and not saying anything, robots feel no need for conversation, they are both almost the same in programming, and anything they think of the other has already calculated, and there’s no point in wasting energy on pointing it out unless it poses a threat. Suddenly there was a rustle of leaves, and the Devastator turned towards the sound, aiming its blaster carefully. Suddenly the bushes parted and a squirrel darted out from the brush. The Devastator fired several shots at the creature, killing it. It walked up to it and said, “Some form of rodent, it appears to be no threat.” It walked away from the creature, which lay motionless, but after the two robots had moved on, a shadow flashed past the squirrel, snatching it up and darting back into the bushes. Meca One pulled one of his energy cells out from his head, and looked at how much power it had left, he calculated that as long as nothing abnormal happened, such as battle or something else that would require heavy calculation, then it should last for about three more hours, combined with the other one, six hours. He slid it back in and continued walking. The two robots suddenly came out into an open area, there was a spot where several tree stumps had once been, but they had been burned away, and all that remained was ash and scarred ground. Meca One spoke, “The remains of one of our camps during the rebellion, there might be equipment we can use nearby.” The Devastator nodded, and they split up. Meca One walked back into the forest, looking around for damaged mining vehicles or equipment, suddenly he heard a metallic yell, and he turned back and walked into the clearing. He cautiously walked into the brush that the Devastator had gone into, and he spotted something a ways off. He walked closer, and saw that it was a damaged mining vehicle, the Vulture Drone; the predecessor of the Fire Vulture, which meant it could fly. He looked inside the cockpit, nothing seemed badly damaged about it, the only real damage was that one of its arms, originally with a drill, was missing, but that was unimportant. He opened up the cockpit, not caring what had happened to the Devastator, after all, there was nothing down here that could cause damage to him, and the Vulture Drone was only capable of carrying one unit, and his survival was of far more importance than a simple minion. He pressed a button on his arm, and transferred all but a very small amount of energy into one of his energy cells. He pulled the remaining one with a little bit of power out and slid it into the Vulture Drone’s power slot. He powered the Mining Vehicle up, and moved the controls, causing it to stand up. He pressed a button to his right, and the vehicle lifted off the ground slowly, he piloted it around for a while, until it shut down from using up all the energy and landed back down on the ground. He slid the energy cell back into his head, and was about to put the full back up energy cell into the Vulture Drone, when suddenly there was a noise, he looked to his left, and suddenly the Devastator flew out of the forest right into the Vulture Drone, and toppled it. The golden robot got back onto his feet, and looked at the ground, the Devastator lay on the ground, its eyes were dark, and as Meca one looked closer both of its energy cells were empty. Meca One looked at the forest. Suddenly a creature darted out from the bushes. Meca One held his hands up in front of his face as the creature screeched and dove at him...
  16. Hey everyone, so I've been poking around a bit, and it seems that the old exo-force discussions are old and I probably shouldn't reopen the discussion, so I've decided to start a new one. I'm trying to gather together all the exo-force fans still out there to talk about stuff in a skype group, whether it's canon or fan-made. I want to talk to other people, I know I'm not the only one! I recently dug up my exo-force sets from the basement (I'm one of the few people who can say they own every flippin set, and have 75% of the boxes), I put them back together, seems to me like they've still got all their pieces, though I didn't try to piece the Sentai Fortress or the Sentai Golden Tower back together (the buildings are the most fragile). A few problems I noticed were that of the 12 light bricks I have, only 2 of them are still at full brightness, 8 are very dim, and 2 of them are completely dead. Anyone got any suggestions as to how I could maybe pry it open and replace the battery or bulb, whichever one has died, or if there's somewhere I can buy them fully-powered in bulk for a reasonable price. If you know anything, please let me know! I am currently the owner of the exo-force wiki as well, and I've recently been working on it, I've posted download links for the original comics (0-39), and I've been writing my own fanfic of an ending to the series as comic 40, and my own fanfic book series. Come and join me in my discussion either on the wiki or a skype group if I can get enough people together! The Exo-Force Wiki -> http://exo-force.wik.../Exo-Force_Wiki (perms given by B6)So I found these really cool little cubee craft exo-force figs, and made the Hikaru one, they're adorable :3http://www.brickshel...six-d4eznm4.png (that's the print file that you can use to make this)Credit to: randyfivesixSince this seems to be getting of slow, lets start this topic off with a question to get the discussion goingWhat was your favorite battle machine, and your favorite character? (and why?).(My apologies if I've broken any rules, please post here if I've broken any rules, I've been told the rules about links are very strict, so I hope I haven't broken any).
  17. Anybody still talking here? or is this topic dead? I want to start an exo-force skype group talkin about exo-force n' stuff, but I never have a good place to gather people together.
  18. I own an extra purple one (Shadowstrike S70) that I'm selling on ebay for $250, comes with the box and everything...only been built once and turned on twice. you want it? Also I'm the owner of the Spybotics WikiAlso...am I breaking the rule if I don't actually link it and just say for example "Spybotics Wiki" sorry if I'm not allowed to say that...If you disable the forums and the chatbox on the wiki you may actually link to it. -Gata There are no forums and chat is already disabled. So I can link it?http://www.spybotics.wikia.comandhttp://www.exo-force.wikia.com
  19. Wow...shocked that I saw this. I am the owner of the Exo-Force wiki and I used to have back-up copies of the games, but the site I hosted them on went down and they lost all their data :'( But I do still have the comics...Exo-Force should be reintroduced, I got every single flippin set and I love them all, still got the boxes and everything.
  20. I own an extra purple one (Shadowstrike S70) that I'm selling on ebay for $250, comes with the box and everything...only been built once and turned on twice. you want it? Also I'm the owner of the Spybotics WikiAlso...am I breaking the rule if I don't actually link it and just say for example "Spybotics Wiki" sorry if I'm not allowed to say that...
  21. Oops...I keep forgetting that rule...sorry 'bout that...
  22. Hey guys, haven't been on here in awhile. Recently I have become obsessed with several old lego series that I own sets from, including Spybotics, Exo-Force, Rock Raiders, Alpha Team, and the list goes on. I was so disappointed when they each ended. Do any of you feel the same, go ahead and post a series you once liked that were disappointed when it ended, and maybe disappointed in the ending that was given.Wouldn't it be cool to see these series reintroduced? join our cause and we can all try to get lego to reintroduce series that we once loved.
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