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Thanks for the feedback, i'm looking forwards to actually having a successful comic series for once.>OM: Rub your eyes and walk to the right.OW OW OW. Which way is right again?Oh. Maybe you shouldn't walk with your eyes closed... What's that up in the corner?What will you do now?

Thanks a lot. I had read the rules at one point - but, i suppose i should give it a quick re-read! Never hurts, after all. Anyways! On with the show.>OM: Slowly get to your feet, and, striking a classic searching pose, gaze into the skyThus far, he has done well, and, gazing in awe of the beautiful sky, seeks -OW WHY DID YOU FORGET YOUR TELESCOPIC SCOPE ON YOUR MASKOW OW OWSTUPIDWhat will you do?

NOTICE! NEW TOPIC IS READY! CLICK HERE! Well everyone, before i begin, i would like to give a brief explenation.For quite some time now, i have hoped to start up a Choose Your Own Adventure, or CYOA.Recently, i have noticed a slight gain in popularity of this sort of comic - and, i assure you - i've had this idea for quite a lot longer, and have just recently managed to improve my skills as a spriter and artist to pull this off - of course, i still have plenty of room for improvements. I have seen several CYOAs, and i intend to keep references to them at a minimal - unless, of course, someone sends me an 'action' related to one. Some basic rules are as follows:1. Character 'actions' must be adressed to the character's name, once other characters are introduced. I.E <Name>: <action>2. Action commands should be sent in PM, to remove clutter to the topic.3. If you are interested in any sort of cameo appearance, be it recurring or singular, please PM it to me, so as to keep the topic relatively clutter-free. Cameos must include spritesheet, either chimoru Sixshade, Kal, or R, i won't accept any others, as well as their name, action-command abbreviation, description, and powers. Cameos can be either a Simple Cameo [Equivalent to GS, may be in a few strips, or be a background character], or a Lasting Cameo [Equivalent to PGS, will be recurring character and should be around for awhile.]4. I am most likely to post each new 'comic' in a new post, as putting them in links would sort of... 'ruin the effect'.[AUTHOR NOTE: Update frequency depends on, for the most part, how many action commands i recieve in PM! So, please don't not-send me a command just because you think someone else already has - it may or may not be very likely, although sometimes i may be already working on the comic. Keep trying though, for the sake of the comic!]PLEASE KEEP IN MIND.Once you become a cameo, your character will be at the whims of those who give action commands, and the whims of how i play things out. In this sort of comic, it's something that has to be done.Regardless, i will try to keep what happens to the character within their... 'description'.Current Lasting Cameos:1. King Joe2. Justax-Kal3. Soran4. Utah5. Facade(Technically closed, but, feel free to send in a request. I might be able to use you at some point.)Current Simple Cameos:1. JiMing2. RO - (Ptolemaios)3. Open4. Open5. Open(People will be removed from the CSC list as they are moved out of place by newer CSCs, to keep in track of the latest ones.)Current available people for ACsLeraku: LERJustax-Kal: JKKing Joe: KJUtah: UTSoran: SORFacade: FACACS are enabled for everyone at the moment.Trophies:Soran's SANDWICH trophyUtah's JOLAND SEAL OF APPROVAL trophyBannersSeason One bannerSeason Two bannerSeason One fan banner by Soran (Image is too large, please click first link for Soran's fan banner)Season Two Banner ReduxFeel free to contribute a fan banner!And now...Dents.Dings.and Disasters.An orange matoran has awoken on the beach. Nearby is what looks like a large boulder, and far off, further down the beach behind him, there seems to be an odd collection of 'lilypads'.He can remember his name, but he does not seem to know why he would want to recall it. He knows it after all.What will you do?

And not a single floorboard went undamaged that day.

...Wait, what?Uh... well. Okay... i'm not really sure how to respond to this....But, good luck and keep going!

I have to say those updated comics are full of win, pasta and cheese. That really adds more of the kind of emphasis needed, to make it sound more like a comic, rather than some sort of 'can't-go-a-sentence-without-dropping-a-curse-bomb' sort of movie/series.

Where did you see swearing? I don't remember any.In '100 Dollars?! part 2'. EDIT: Also in part 3. In both occasions, in my book, censoring swearing implies to the point as if you hadn't censored it at all, though most would differ in my opinion of this. Either ways, however, as said before, i'm certainly going to be watching this comic further on.

This looks pretty good. Good graphics, for one... It's rather interesting despite that i haven't seen the origional series...es. Serieses? Well, whatever, I've got to admit that i'm going to probably be coming here some more later. I could do some graphics works for you, banners maybe, i'm not sure. But either ways, i'm looking forwards to more!

This is an okay series, though it could use some work. I'd suggest speeding up things a bit instead of taking two panels for someone to say, sit up, as an example. Either ways, it's pretty good and i'll make sure to look back over here regularly. (Also, just as a side note. Swearing doesn't necessarily improve a comic's quality, or emphasis, so you might want to think of something more ingenuitive or amusing next time. When done correctly, certain phrases can add a bit of a punch to the punch line more than swearing or profanity can!) Keep up the good work!