Umm, I think the copy/paste didn't work, when I posted it it looked fine (hehe)If I'm right, it was the biography and the mask not having its own section, right?Here is is again:Name:ZaakSpecies: ToaGender: MaleAppearance: A young but muscular and tall toa, he has very light-looking armor. His armor is black, along with his mask, hands, and feet, but his arms and legs are orange. His armor is fairly new, and he has no scars.Weapons and Possessions: His main weapon is a cordak blaster modified to shoot on land. He has a shield made out of protosteel. His armor is very light, and will take very little damage before failing. He has a basic survival kit that includes a long knife, food, water, etc.Mask: He has a black mask of adaptation shaped like a Huna that allows him to barely survive in most extreme natural situations. (If a makuta shoots chain lightning, for example, the mask wouldn't work. If he falls underwater and can't get out, he could breathe shallowly for an hour so he could maybe escape) (if my mask power isn't approved, it is a mask of concealment)Powers: He has very little control over his powers, but he is a toa of plasma that can radiate heat, and is resistant to it. He can shoot small streams of pure plasma, whichwill melt most substances. He is slow, like 3/4 of normal speed, but has amazing stamina and is really strong.Faction: The Children of the WellBiogrpahy: He believes he came from a parallel universe, as part of a botched experiment or warp gate, because he woke up in a cavern near Av-Metru with no memory. He decided that the Children of the Well were fighting for a better cause than the other factions, so he joined them.P.S. You were talking to me about looking at the rules and such, right?-sonyaxe