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  1. Chapter 5: Mission Completed? As Ahkmou started to get out of the sand, he wondered why the Order sent him back to where they picked them up, so he asked the order agent named Mazeka why. The Ko-Matoran stated coldly "Because that is were Helryx decided to send us, don't you dare question her again, got it?" "So, where are we going?" asked Kana. "We must head towards the Black Spike Mountains, that is the general area that we last heard from Gresh." Mazeka answered in his usual demeanor. "So how exactly are we going to get there, Kana's half-track is broken." Ahkmou asked. "We use this." Mazeka said while reaching into his bag. The muscular matoran then pulled out an old Le-matoran flute. "Recognize this Ahkmou?" asked Mazeka "I think so, didn't Takua get that as a gift from the Le-matoran after he helped save them from Nui-Rama back on Mata Nui?" Ahkmou responded. "What are you guys talking about?" asked Kana. "History" Ahkmou and Mazeka said simultaneously. "So how in Spherus Magna will that help us?" asked Kana. "Watch" said Ahkmou as Mazeka started to play the flute. The flute sounded very distinctive and sad, indescribably ancient and hollow. When Mazeka stoped playing the flute, three large birds came and landed next to them. "Hop on." Said Mazeka to a stunned Kana. "What are these things?" asked Kana as he climbed onto the bird. "These are Kewa birds, they where commonly used for transportation, and honestly I thought they where extinct." Replied Ahkmou. "Not extinct, just rare in this part of the world, you see, after they came out of the Mata Nui robot they all migrated to the more forested areas, like the one we are on the edges of." explained Mazeka, slightly less coldly than he normally has been talking. As the birds took off, Kana and Ahkmou where clutching the birds with all of their strength, hoping they weren't thrown off by these graceful birds. When they looked down, they noticed that they where about 3 Bios above the trees. The beautiful greenery beneath him made Kana forget about his fear of falling off, while the nice breeze through his mask made Ahkmou forget about his. Once the matoran where on solid ground, they noticed they where in the mountains."Now be careful," Mazeka warned, "The black spike mountains may look beautiful, but they are one of the most inhospitable places on the planet, ok?" The two Po-matoran nodded. "Good, we should probably set up camp for the night, we will easily use a lot of energy trying to traverse this terrain." Mazeka said as he took off his large backpack. "Kana, could you help me set up the tent?" asked Mazeka "Sure"said Kana. "Ahkmou, would you please get some fire wood, we don't want any of the area's Rahi coming into our camp while we sleep."Mazeka continued. "If I have to." muttered Ahkmou. Once the camp was set up and the fire was going, the three matoran were sitting by the fire and started to have questions. "So Mazeka, how long have you been in the order?" asked Kana. "I have been in the order since five years before before the Toa Nuva traveled to Karda Nui, not that you would understand any of that Kana" confused Kana asked what really happened in the past, to which Mazeka and Ahkmou told Kana every major event up to the creation of the new Matoran. "Wow, that's a lot to process, I think I am going to go to bed, good night guys." "Good night my friend." said Ahkmou, while Mazeka just nodded. "So, I remember Helryx mentioning another matoran member, what happened to him?" asked Ahkmou. "First off the member was a girl, and second off, I don't like to talk about it." "I take it you two where close?" "Yah, very." The next morning, once Mazeka got out of the tent, he noticed they had a visitor. "Good morning Mazeka, I have been expecting you to come." The green warrior said. "Gresh," Mazeka exclaimed loud enough to wake up Ahkmou and Kana, "Where have you been soldier?" "Relax Mazeka, my communicator has been broken and I lost my compass, I have been trying to contact you." the two Po-Matoran came out of the tent. "Who are they?" asked Gresh. "Some new recruits, the order didn't want me to come here alone so they got some more matoran to accompany me." Read and discuss.
  2. You're setting him up to die aren't you?
  3. That comic was very Punny. (Ba-dum-che) And electrifying.
  4. Well, for anyone that wants to do the first challenge, here it is I am in need of some backgrounds for the game, First background that I need is the inside of a room, the game is 3rd person point of view. This room is the room the character starts in. My game takes place after the reformation of Spherus Magna, so don't try to use one of the backgrounds from one of the mnogs. I figured that the game would start in a new Ta-Korro, so to clarify I am looking for the inside of a room from a new Ta-Korro. The image must be 800 pixels wide and 600 tall.
  5. Really, when I tried to go to the site my laptop told me that the page was taken down.
  6. No, the program I'me using requires that you make or download a picture and then upload it as a sprite, the program is Gamemaker 8.1
  7. So I am making a bionicle game in the style of The mata nui online games and I have the programing skills, all I need some help with the art. This is kind of a competition to see whom will get some art into my game every week I will post a new assignment for anyone that is willing to try it. Anyone that gets in will get credit for their work, so good luck and Godspeed. Before I give the first assignment, I wanna see how many people are interested in this, so just follow this topic so I can get a good count. I am looking for anything that looks like it could easily fit into one of the mnog games, so use any means you are comfortable with.
  8. Don't worry Soran, Bulik's comment made sense to me. BTW how do you pronounce your character's names?
  9. This is more for more obscure questions, and I recently looked at that chat with greg thing and Lego took that page down
  10. So, I am sure we all have some unanswered questions about the original Bionicle line, and I hope that eventually Greg Farshtey could answer some questions himself. I will try to give official answers to questions in the mean time using information from Biosector. My Question for Mr. Farshty is Whatever became of Tyrant?
  11. Chapter 4: Training Ahkmou and Kana where looking at their current situation. They where mask-less and felt their energy draining from them, being an older model Ahkmou had the least amount of time 'till he became comatose. Kana couldn't help but think that Ahkmou's face was very strange looking, probably because the old matoran where more robotic than him. As the two matoran where looking around the room, they saw a weapons training area, a target practice area, a hand-to-hand combat mini-arena, a huge column in the center of the room, and three doors, one that opened up to a hall that leads to the main chamber, one that was at the base of the tower, and one that Axonn said lead to the armory. Axonn was watching the matoran from the top of the tower with Helryx. "I hope you know what you're doing Axonn, those matoran can't do much on their own without a mask." "Well, this test is to help me determine how unified they are and to test their willpower." "I see." The two spoke to each other. Down below, the matoran finally spotted a mask, it was brown and silver, so that meant it must be Ahkmou's Kanohi Rau. There was one problem, it was on the edge on top of the tower. "How are we going to get up there?" asked Kana to no one in particular. "We should try the door for starters." stated Ahkmou, sounding a little annoyed. "Oh, right, good idea." said Kana foggily. When he went to the door it opened automatically, which surprised the newer Po-matoran, he had never seen a self-opening door before. "It detects movement." Stated an obviously tired Ahkmou, Kana had never known how bad an older model needed a mask. Once in the tower they saw moving platforms, they where white and rectangular and had no visible means of support. The platforms could only move front-and-back, left-and-right, or up-and-down. The matoran knew that timing would be difficult due to their lack of mask, Kana was doing much better at this point than Ahkmou, but was still not even at 70%. "I will go and get your mask Ahkmou, keep searching for mine while I do this, ok?" seeing the wisdom in his friend's words and not feeling well enough to get his mask himself, a weary Ahkmou agreed and headed into the training room again. Once Ahkmou was outside, Kana started the long journey to the top of the tower, he was jumping and ducking the whole time for two-and-a-half minutes. "Very impressive," thought Axonn "not even a toa of old could do it in that amount of time." Kana was at about ten percent and was only barley able to get to Ahkmou's mask, now his only thought was "How am I gonna get this back down?" Back at the base of the tower, while Kana was getting Ahkmou's mask, he spotted Kana's. The yellow kanohi Kakama was on top of the target arena this whole time, but there was a problem, it was in a target. Ahkmou was never very good with ranged weaponry. "This is going to be a challenge, heck, even with my mask it would be a challenge." Thought Ahkmou, but he was so out of sorts that he thought he may have thought out loud, but that didn't matter right now, After what felt like a long trek across the room, he made it to a station that already had a weapon, it was unlike any he had ever seen, it looked nothing like the thornax launchers the Glatorian used, the disk launchers the matoran used, or even like one of the more recent guns the Fe-matoran had recently made, this was something else, something completely different. The weapon was long and slender, it had something that glowed where a gun's stock would be, but he couldn't figure out what in Mata Nui's name it was. Regardless, he got a hold of the weapon and aimed it at Kana's mask, hoping that this strange weapon wouldn't break the mask, so he aimed through the weapon's massive scope and pulled the trigger. To his surprise it didn't shoot anything that he expected, it shot a laser beam. After he hit the target, the mask teleported next to him, to which he thought "Now, how on Spherus Magna am I supposed to get this to Kana?" Back on top of the tower Kana had an Idea, he could just wear Ahkmou's mask and find a way down, but his only concern was that Ahkmou's mask was so old it may not work for him. then he decided "Oh well, it couldn't hurt to try, could it?" So as he put on the mask, he felt his strength returning to him, but just as he was starting to get up, a sudden pain filled his whole brain, it hurt so bad that he had to take the mask off immediately, assuming that it was causing the pain. And sure enough, as soon as he removed the mask the pain stoped. "Well that didn't go as planed." thought Kana. So, now being at about 30%, he got an Idea. "Ahkmou, are you down there?" Kana yelled. To which he saw Ahkmou come towards the tower. "Come here so you can catch your mask, then you can find mine and bring it up here." Ahkmou did as his friend told him and put on his friend's mask and had a similar looking experience as Kana did, but was rejuvenated enough that he was able to make the trip back easier than to the range. Once he was at the bottom he yelled "Ok, I'me ready to catch my mask." "Here it comes." Kana replied. So Ahkmou was able to catch his mask, after he put it on he went into the tower, only to find that only a rectangular column with a door and a button. So, Ahkmou pushed the button and the door opened to reveal a room with three buttons on one of the walls. One said ground floor, anther said lookout deck, and the third said roof. Assuming that the buttons would take him to different locations in the tower, Ahkmou pushed the one that said roof and the door closed with him in it. He felt that the room was moving up and panicked, he didn't like small spaces due to him having once been traped in a storage sphere. Once the door opened he found Kana lying on the floor on his belly, he immediately rushed over to his friend and put the Kanohi Kakama on his friend's face and saw that Kana instantly started to regain his strength. Then the elevator door closed and the elevator went down. "Great, now we need to find another way down." Ahkmou complained. As he got to the edge of the shaft, he looked down and couldn't believe his eyes, the interior of the tower was changing before his eyes. "Hey Kana, you might want to see this." As Kana came to the edge and looked down, he also saw that the interior of the tower was changing "What is happening?" was all he could say. "I have no clue," said Ahkmou in bewilderment "it was an elevator when I came back." "A what?" asked a curious Kana "An elevator is a machine that carries people to higher floors in a building vertically." explained Ahkmou. As the pair were talking, the interior of the tower became a set of stairs that went half way down the tower and leveled off into a flat platform, and there was a new door in the side of the tower. The two friends looked at each other and simultaneously said "You first." Eventually, after a much heated debate, they decided to go at the same time down the flight of stairs. Once they where at the door, they found that it opened itself. On the other side was a room that was small in comparison to the other rooms in New Daxia, but was still a pretty good size and found that in the room where four figures, Axonn, Helryx, a warrior with blue and gold armor, and, to their surprise, a white matoran of Ahkmou's time. "Congratulations Ahkmou and Kana, you have survived the first training exercise." said Axonn "Honestly I didn't expect them to make it." the white matoran said. Then Helryx said "Pardon Mazeka, he's our first matoran agent and is rough around the edges." "So why are they here?" Ahkmou asked while gesturing towards Mazeka and the blue and gold warrior. "Brutaka and I will assist you on your mission." Mazeka explained while gesturing towards the blue and gold person. Then Helryx spoke up "Mazeka will accompany you, Brutaka will teleport you to were he picked up you guys, Boto, and Jerbraz in the desert, ready?" "Wait, aren't you guys gonna train us more?" asked Ahkmou while Brutaka opened a portal. "I will train you more during the op." said Mazeka coldly. Next thing the Po-matoran knew, they where thrown through the portal by whom could only have been Jerbraz and landed mask-first onto the hot desert sand, followed by Mazeka calmly strolling through. Read and discus
  12. I am seconding "Before setting off, Sit on the sand, clear your mind, and reflect on life. Maybe even do some stretching exercises" and then "Run into the Jungle in your best pair of high heels.While chanting, 'I'm a pretty princess.' "
  13. Gotta admit, this story is pretty funny, glad to see that someone else has also delved deep into nearly all of the various Lego story arcs. Hey, could you throw in the old Exo-Force line somewhere in this story?
  14. Chapter 3: Conscription The two Po-matoran where stunned by the ancient Toa of water's apparent stature, the leader of a secret organization. The pleasant-sounding toa spoke again "I am Helryx, the first toa and the leader of The Order of Mata Nui." Her words echoed through out the chamber. "I brought you to New Daxia for a mission, Ahkmou." The puzzled Po-matoran looked at each other as the Toa of water continued. "The assignment you have been given is simple, find the Glatorian named Gresh, we lost contact with him a few months ago and are starting to get worried." Ahkmou was even more startled by this news "Why me? Why not Jerbraz or some other member?" Asked Ahkmou, to which Helryx said "Because you will be easily over looked by the matoran and turaga and we need someone that's inconspicuous to do this mission, due to an agent having to go through highly populated areas." Again the matoran asked "OK, but why me?" "Because you know more than the newer matoran do about the past and you're more durable than the newer matoran, we used to have 2 matoran members, but one was killed during an espionage mission during the great war." Helryx replied. "OK" continued Ahkmou "but I thought all of the Glatorian where killed during the great war, how did this 'Gresh' guy survive?" the red and silver being answered "He was one of my top double-agents during the war." The Po-matoran looked back and saw that he had managed to sneak up behind them. "This is Axonn, my top agent" Said Helryx "He will be training you." As the two Po-matoran followed Axonn to the training room, they passed a confused-looking Boto "Why does he look so confused, Axonn?" "We had to erase his memory after getting the information that we needed, don't worry he will be fine, we have done this to him before." Both of the Po-matoran where shocked, they couldn't believe they would do that to one of their own agents. "Why would you do that?" asked Kana. "It ensures that he can't reveal anything if he's caught." That instantly worried the Po-matoran "Will you do that to us?" Kana asked. "Maybe just you, the method doesn't work on older matoran like your friend." that only worried Kana even more. Once they where in the training room, they saw all sorts of targets and fighting areas, Kana, being blissfully ignorant as always, couldn't wait to get started. But Ahkmou was worried, he had already seen combat and did not like it. "Before we start your training, you should probably know that you will be tested at every turn, both physically and mentally, first we will get you physically prepared." Then Axonn riped off both of the matoran's masks. "What are you doing!" asked Ahkmou "Your first test, is to find your masks." Axonn said while the masks disappeared from his huge hands. "Where did our masks go?" "They are somewhere in the room, you have to find them before you become comatose, good luck." Explained Axonn as he left the big, white room. Read and discuss.
  15. I will keep that in mind, thanks for the input. There we go, problem solved, if anyone sees any typos in the story, feel free to tell me, I have already spotted some and fixed them, but I could easilly have still missed some.
  16. You should check out my epic: "Ahkmou's Return". If you like this story, you may like mine.
  17. So, does Vezon still have the Olmak fused to his head in this, or was he fixed a long time ago?
  18. Chapter 2: What? Ahkmou at once said "What, what do you mean?" All Boto could do in response was say "You of all matoran should know that the turaga aren't as pure as they claim" At once, Ahkmou had a,well, general idea of what the gardener was talking about, and the plant-man was right, he did know the turaga aren't the eternally just and ancient beings they claimed they where, especially turaga Hafu. "I do know full well the turaga aren't what they claim they are, I know from experience." Ahkmou said as he remembered when all of the turaga where just matoran. Kana, not beliveing that the turaga could be impure asked "So how where you injured, Boto?" Boto immediately said "The turaga did this to me." Ahkmou knew the turaga weren't pure, but he never thought they would do that to one of their subjects."I was starting to bring a message to the turaga of Ta-koro and overheard him talking about tearing the planet apart. Doing my duty, I came in and delivered the message to him. After which, he asked me if I had overheard him talking to someone, and due to him wearing a Kanohi Rode, I said yes. After he asked me what I had heard and told him, he and the other three turaga attacked me." Boto said, retelling his tale. To which Ahkmou asked "Then how did you escape?" Boto continued his tale and said "This is gonna sound weird but as the turaga where ganging up on me, two of them started to float and then they appeared to be slammed together. While that was happening, Turaga Kongu, MY OWN TURAGA, sliced me with his bladed staff, just before being picked up with turaga Jaller and slammed together in the same way the now unconscious turaga where. After the turaga where all out cold, a booming voice said 'Go, seek out Ahkmou, he will help you.' and so I did." After the tired matoran finished his tale in old matoran, Ahkmou translated it for Kana, whom stoped the truck and said "So, in other words, either this matoran's delusional or we have a serious problem on our hands." after a few minutes of thinking what to do with the Bo-matoran, Ahkmou noticed that there where a set of tracks that where next to the vehicle's and ended next to where they currently where. Startled, Ahkmou immediately whispered "We are not alone." "What are you talking about Ahkmou?" asked Kana, whom looked back towards Ahkmou and noticed the tracks as well. "Start the truck, NOW!" Ahkmou ordered. Kana didn't even hesitate, but after he started to move the truck, something held it back, no matter how much he put the petal to the mettle, the truck didn't move. Then all of a sudden, a booming voice said "STOP!" To which the astounded Po-matoran did exactly as he was told. "I am not here to hurt any of you, so calm down!" Which didn't help the matoran calm down at all. So, the invisible force picked up the truck by the back end and slammed it down just enough to break the truck. Then the voice said "I am Jerbraz, I am the one that saved Boto." To which the matoran all stoped panicking. Then Jerbraz whispered something and a portal opened up in front of them. "Did you do that?" asked Ahkmou. "No I called a friend, now, step through it" "Why should we trust you?" asked Kana. To which everyone heard a shing sound and the truck was cut in half, luckily the matoran had already gotten off the truck. Needless to say, they got the hint and went through. Once through, the matoran where in a stone room easily a tenth-cubic-kio large. Inside, there where many different species, even some that not even Ahkmou recognized. Then a warrior in silver and red armor came up to them "Please, give me the Bo-matoran, I am here to heal him." So the matoran gave Boto over to the being, who carried him like he was weightless and took him into another room. Then a pleasant voice said "Come little matoran, we have much to discuss." then the matoran saw a figure on a thrown on the other side of the room, as they got closer they realized the figure was a toa of water. When even closer,they noticed that her armor was scared and pitted from countless battles and that next to her thrown where a shield and a mace. The pleasant-demeanored toa then said "Welcome to New Daxia, matoran." Read and discus
  19. Oh yah, I'me familiar with that fan-theory.
  20. Thank you guys so much From now on every comment must be made in "Ahkmou's Return Discussion Board" Ok?
  21. So this is where you guys can ask questions about my epic: Ahkmou's Return. Go nuts. here's the link to the story http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/23501-ahkmous-return/?do=findComment&comment=1095975
  22. Thank You. How do I do that?
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