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No that was a kaita correction, 2 kaita

Sorry this is my first time I didn't know the difference. Do you know how I can move it to that?

Chapter 1 :Awakening Ahkmou was carving in the desert like he always did, being one of the last survivors of the second great war, he knew so much more than these newer matoran and wished he could tell them what really happened before the reformation of Spherus Magna. Now he was hated by most societies and despised by all turaga. "Who could blame them" Ahkmou thought, "If I where them Id'e hate me too." The only friend Ahkmou had was one of the newer, ignorant models named Kana. Kana was a Po-matoran with brown and yellow armor, and being one of the newer models, was more organic than Ahkmou. "I just wish I could tell him what really happened, then again, he could end up hating me more than the turaga." Ahkmou commonly said to himself when no one was around, but he enjoyed the solitude the desert offered. It gave him time to make more carvings and to think about his past misdeeds. Even though he was forbidden to tell his friend about the past, he would commonly "accidentally" slip some things about the past to his friend and then leave it at that. One day, a Bo-matoran came through his doorway and collapsed. Afraid that he would be blamed for whatever happened to the matoran, he brought the newcomer to his bed and Ahkmou noticed that there was a huge gash from his left shoulder to his right thigh. As Ahkmou was doing what he could to help the poor gardener, he was trying to think of what he knew of that could cause such an injury and allow it's victim to escape, to no avail. After he had successfully bandaged up the Bo-matoran Kana came through the doorway. Ahkmou knew that he could do nothing more for the passed out Bo-matoran, so Ahkmou said "Kana, I need your truck to get this matoran to Bo-Koro." Kana could see the urgency in Ahkmou's eyes and didn't even bother to ask what happened to the traveler. So, during the drive in Kana's half-track the Bo-Matoran awoke and started rambling so fast that even Ahkmou couldn't tell what he was saying, but kept on saying something about the whole planet being in jeopardy. As they approached Bo-Wahi the matoran started to talk more understandably and Ahkmou noticed that the matoran spoke with the accent of someone that spoke old matoran. So Ahkmou tried to speak to him in the long lost language and noticed that he spoke it fluently. Ahkmou, being confused because this was a newer matoran, asked how he knew old matoran, to no answer. But after further questioning, the stranger revealed that his name is Boto and that the whole planet is in danger. Kana was even more lost than Ahkmou was, due to him not being able to speak old matoran. So when Ahkmou didn't recognize Boto's mask he asked in old matoran"So,what is your mask?" Boto said "I where the kanohi Olisi or the mask of alternate futures. But we have no time for small talk!" he said as he tried to sit up, but couldn't. Ahkmou said "So what is going on anyways?" Boto responded "Long story short, the world is literally falling apart" "So do you need to talk to a Turaga?" Boto, simply running low on energy shook his head no. "Why not?" asked Ahkmou, to which Boto simply said "Because they are the ones destroying it." Read and discus.

This will be a story series that takes place roughly one thousand years after the original line ended, by this time a new great war has occurred and wiped out the Agori, as compensation the Turaga decided to assimilate their culture and have forbidden the few survivors from telling the newly made Matoran the past and have abandoned the old Matoran language and religion. This story is following the adventures of Ahkmou and some acquaintances of his. Here's the link to the Discussion Board http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/23527-ahkmous-return-discussion-board/ Please give criticism, so far I've only gotten some from family that I've made read this.

They where originally going to add Acid as an element.

May I recommend a mask? Sorry I can't get the image up I present the mask of glitter, it allows the wearer to create and control glitter and is considered immoral by Toa and Makuta alike, due to it getting everywhere. The mask of geography, it allows the wearer to always know where they are. and finally, the mask of apathy, slowly makes a target not care about their goal/ objective.

Hey, could you at some point throw in a theoretical toa nui?(it's kind of like a toa kaita, but with 6 toa instead of 3) I figured that you would only get to use it after the journey to caelum part.

I feel that some rearranging is in order, to show what elements rival each other like Fire rivals Ice, Water rivals Stone, Air rivals Earth, Shadow rivals Light, Lightning rivals Iron, Magnetism rivals Gravity, and I'me not sure how the others rival though. Other than that it makes sense for the most part.

So I'me a bit confused, in the journey to caelum part, does this all take place during the Miro's 5 year absence or after the events of their return? And if so, where are the toa novus? Oh and after re-reading the first part and comparing Ahkmou to the main story arch, I have discovered that you have nailed how he would act thousands of years after Mata Nui won.

So in a flashback could you show us Kapura as a toa, I could totally see him teleporting around and confusing everyone due to him not using the kanohi kualsi to do it, or maybe have him, as a turaga, teach someone else "the art of traveling great distances very quickly by moving very slowly"? Oh, could you also bring back the exo-toa armor and show us a turaga takanuva?

Plus, why did some matoran leave Spherus Magna to begin with?

Yes I do mean Voima's diary, and I figured that if you brought back Tahu then it would be from the view of the Toa Novus and he could become a mentor to them or something. And where are the Av-Matoran in this anyways?

So, could Tahu come in and kick some major butt? BTW, I don't really like the diary idea.

You really should bring back more characters from the original canon, or at least the newest Toa we know about, named Krakua, and please make some references to the Toa code and have Vezon call one of the other planets with MU inhabitants and have them fix the red star and bring back more classic characters like Tahu or Lessovik or SOMETHING As you can probably tell I am a huge Bionicle knerd, I know literally EVERYTHING about the G1 line due to a site dedicated to everything Bionicle called Biosector01.com, here is the link: http://biosector01.com/wiki/index.php/Main_Page You have to type it in yourself though, sorry Never mind didn't see that it worked while I was typing it Oh and BTW, the original canon said they where really alive, but where made of a substance called Protodermis which could arrange itself into similar ways as our cells do, also they where made of organic AND inorganic Protodermis, the latter could repair the former on it's own if it decayed, and thus lived 'till they where killed, and it was revealed that it was only the red star's teleportation system that was broken and the Kestora on board where to dim-witted to fix it, and if the Agori and Matoran did leave the planet, I would imagine that some would have left on the red star.

Interesting story, I do see two things I don't like though, you are implying that matoran are different genders due to physiological differences. There gender is mental programing, not physical genitalia. Furthermore all residents of the previous matoran universe live t'ill they are killed, and even then can be revived by the red star, assuming there programing is intact and functional.

Dude these conics are great! Maybe next his arm will be fixed by someone finding an oil can.

Granted, but they start yelling at you instead. I wish for world peace

It happens, but you are trapped in it forever and die permanently, never to re-spawn. I wish I was killed painlessly and swiftly. sorry, wrong comment you are killed in a military cue.

It won't download for me,HELP!

They really needed to bring back Terminology, Rahi, A GOOD STORY LINE, mask packs, and locations. Personally, I think they should have just picked up where they left off in G1 and have a prolouge that explains that mata nui defeated makuta after crashing onto bara magna, and compleated his mission to reunite spherus magna and then explain some events that happened before all that as the line progresses.

I am using them for a game that takes place a few thousand years after Mata Nui fixed Spherus Magna. So, in other words, I understand, thanks for letting me use your backgrounds anyways.

Y'know, could you please be my background designer, I am terrible at making backgrounds.

Wow, These are amazing, mind if I use them in a Bionicle game that is in the same style as MNOLG that I am making?

Hey, if some of you guys could make a lot of various masks in the mnog style for a game i'me making that is similar too mnog 1 and am using ALL of the various official Kanohi shapes and there are some I can't find anywhere on the Internet. Here is the list: Great Kanohi: Suletu, Sanok, Kadin, Iden, Garai, Tryna, Jutlin, Avsa, Felnas, Mohtrek, Shelek, Crast, Olisi, Kaukau Nuva, Pakari Nuva, Akaku Nuva Nobel Kanohi: Hau, Miru, Kakama, Akaku, Jutlin, Avsa, Shelek Masks without Kanohi names: Great Mask of Charisma, Great Mask of Scavenging, Great Mask of Elemental Energy, Great Mask of Light and Shadow Other Kanohi are Kanohi about which little is known: Mask of Adaptation, Mask of Aging, Mask of Biomechanics, Mask of Conjuring, Mask of Fusion, Mask of Incomprehension, Mask of Rebounding, Mask of Undeath. All of these masks had at least 1 image of it, the masks without several angels of it, feel free to get a bit creative.

for the masks, could you please add more Kanohi like the Kanohi Tryna, Ignika(Karda nui), Suletu, Sanok, Cadin, Iden, Garai, Volitak, Jutlin, Avsa, Felnas, Olisi, Kaukau Nuva, Pakari Nuva, Akaku Nuva, and the masks of Scavenging, Charisma, Elemental Energy, Adaptation, Aging, Biomechanics, Conjuring, Fusion, Incomprehension, Rebounding and Undeath. Or at least get one of your friends to make them.