Don't have the time to write a full review, but Claustrophobia has caught my attention, and I have a few things to say. First of all, I love this idea. The post-apoc has always interested me. You have made it clear that the Gangs are comprised of many different factions, but how are we supposed to know who works for who? Sure, we can say that we work for the one guy in Ta-Metru, but what about the other gangs? We have very little information on them. All I think you would need is a small list, a name for each group, and about a sentence or two saying who is incharge and what makes them special. There isn't much info on who is in charge of the Feds, either. (Also the name made me lol.) Also, what about the Dark Hunters? What about the Order of Mata Nui? I doubt those two groups would just leave the city be. What is to keep one of them from coming in and taking over, especcially if Metru-Nui is so important to the survival of Mata Nui? Overall I like the idea here, and I think that this could win. Just needs a bit more. There may be other things that I missed, but I'll get to them if others don't first. Again, good luck. This one is rooting for you.